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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Haii di,
Thanks 
Yes i don't know how to create a pm list & link.
I am feeling happy.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Interesting concept 

Continue plz



Thanks di. Please keep commenting.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Nice story.plz update and pm me



Thanks di,
But I can't pm u
because I  don't know how to create a link or pm list.
If u know please send me a pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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   Haii dear friends
Thanks for your replies .I really overwhelmed  . As all you know this is my first ff. Please  help me with your valuable views.


Here is the part.


               {{{{  Part = 1}}}}


 Zindagi,   dear friends actually yeh  zindagi hoti kya hain? Kya kabhi kisine Sochi hain  uski defination  kya ho sakti hain? Friends  zindagi aaisi hain Jo word se to kya kisi bhi cheese se kabhi describe nahi ki  ja sakti.  Kisine such hi kaha hain
 " zindagi pyar ka geet hain 
Jisse har dil ko gaana padega
Thode aasu hain thodi hassi
Aaj gamm hain to Kal hain khushi"
       Friends  pyar & zindagi ek dusre saath mile hue hain. Pyar  ke bina zindagi or zindagi bina  pyar  kya kabhi  hota hain. Shayed hote honge lakin Jo insaan pyar par yakeen karte hain  unhe aaisa nahi lagte. Kabhi yeh aaplog socha hain friends  jab kabhi aaisi situations ki samna karni pade jaha yeh lage hum jisse dil o jaan se chahate hain
woh to aapko  chahate hi  "NAHI "
 tab kya zindagi ruk jaati hain ya phir se jee uthti hain nahi umeed ke saath ? Dekhte hain aage kya hoti hain.


     Subha 10: 30

 Thodi der tej barish hone ke baad ab ruk gayi thi. Ananya high speed se car drive kar rahi thi. Thodi late ho chuki thi or uski face dekhke koi bhi kahe sakta hain ki wo bahut hi gussee me hain. Usse thodi der pahele hui kuch baattien yaad as rahi thi.
         
  " wow Ananya  bah  kya song hain . u are too good. U know tum isse kahi Jada deserve karti ho. Tum agar mere saath ...

 "Meri jawab tum jante ho Raghav".main yehi thik hu. Thanks for your concern."

 " Ananya u know  I really ___ ' "
But one look on her he stops abruptly.  
   " Waise kya kami hain mujme , handsome hu , dashing hu, tumhari papa ki tara nahi worthless" 

 Ananya returned back in anger her eyes & nose shows her anger .she plustered a smile & say 
   "  Raghav  burning ghat ke bahar kuch kutte ghumte hain tumhe dekh kar mujhe wohi yaad aate hain. How dare u  to say against my papa ? "

  With humiliating smile " waise Anu  jarurat padne par  kutte ko bhi sar pe chadana pad sakta hain or mujhe  us din ke intezar rahega "
   Ananya now very angry her neatly braided hair now toussled. 
 " wo din kabhi nahi aayegi  Mr . u are such a jerk. If u don't stop now I will teach u a good lession.

 Yeh ek music school thi .yahaan Ananya had sunday ko aati hain  to learn music. She loves music. Aaspas khade kuch students bhi maja ke rahe the ,lakin kisine kuch nahi kahi sab jante hain ki Ananya koun hain?
  
  Screech screech  breaks par zor se pressure se car stop ho gayi . " samajta kya hain aapne aapko? Are hain kya yeh ladka  sadakchap roadside romio ! Iske baad usne papa ko kuch bhi kaha na dekh lungi huh!
    Shayed yehi soch thodi der air chalti par mobile ki ring se  use  hosh aayi.
 " Beti tum kaha ho ? Jaldi ghar as jao."
    " kya hua Harikaka ? Main rasste pe hu. 
  " beti bibiji ki tabiyat thik nahi Armaan beta bhi nahi hain "
    " kaka doctor uncle ko bulaiye .main aa rahi hu."


    Kashyap house
    

 Aam logo ke lie palace. Hum jaisa house dream me dekte hain samaj lijiye yeh wohi house hain. But aaj mahol thodi si gamm ke hain  . Ander  ek master bedroom me bed pe Anitaji leti Hui thi. Aaj subhe se hi thodi kamjori mehsoos kar rahi thi , aaj unhe Sudhir Ji ki bahut yaad bhi sa rahi thi Jo wo sabse chupana chahate thi .aankhon se girte hue aansu ko bahut hi muskil se sambhal lie unhone dr ki awaj sun kar.  Aaj unki marriage anniversary thi . Apni dil ki andar se nikli awaj se unhone pillow cover ke andar se ek photo  bade hi pyar se dekh kar kahi " Happy Anniversary Sudhi.please I need u"

     " Mrs Kashyap aap aaise laparwah kaise ho sakti hain. Aap janti hain na yeh decease kya hain .
Mujhe lagta hain aap Ananya na sahi Armaan ko to bata hi sakti hain , so samajder hain  "

   " janti hu doctor par abhi wo dono bacche hain .inki zindagi suru hi hui hain .Those din Ji to lene de. Or phir ...,"

  " Dr uncle , uncle mumma ko kya hua hain? Or mumma kya nahi  batana chahati hain hume ? She is so scared. Uski awaj kannp rahi thi.
 "Nahi Any beti aaisa to kuch bhi nahi shayed thodi kamjori...
     " par uncle aajkal  mumma kuch thik nahi lagti. Bahar lawyer Mishra  uncle bhi aaye hain ... "
   
Anitaji samaj rahi thi par nahi chahate the ki use kuch pata chalte ya koi doubt ho. Isilie kafi sakhat awaj me kahi " 
   "ye kya Anu Khanna  uncle kabse aaye hain unhe coffee bhi nahi mili" 
" Are nahi nahi aaj nahi phir kabhi sare test ki result as Jaye phir dekhte hain. Ok by."

  " Any beta jab tum free ho jaoo to mere pass aana mujhe kuch baat karni hain. Armaan bhi aa raha hain. Kal ki hi flight hain."

 Wow mumma  bhaiyya aa rahi hain !!? Oh thanks mamma. U are so sweet  muhhha  " she kissed Anitaji   with broad smile & goes to her room  .
  Her room like all others girl room.Full of teady bears, funkey breslates & full of colours.she  take a shower & feel comfortable now. Then call her so called boy friend Romit  Agarwal . Agarwal  industry ke future owner. He is a pampered child or koi problem face karne ki vaja usse dur ho jana hi behtar samajte hain. Currently  he is  vice Chairman  of A. G . industries. He looks good. Handsome but not clean shaven .

    " Haii Romi ?  How about u ?  We haven't chat since yesterday night.
  
 " Anne  u know I am busy nowadays. This project is totally
 blocked me . In fact I haven't taken breakfast. "
     " kya ? U  jaoo abhi  kar lo. "

   " Abhi nahi Anne  .Early launch karne ka Mann hain."

  " By the way  tum kab Delhi as rahe ho ? Jaldi a jaoo. Mujhe tumeh bhai se bhi milwana hain. U know
..." 
 " Anne mujhe yehaan 1 month  to lag hi jayenge . lakin agar tumse battien karte rahe to 2 machine bhi lag sakte hain.please understand me ."
  
 " Are suno to aaj na woh Ra..,..."
   
" OK by Anne   . Have a good day. "

 Ananya phone cut karti hain " puri baat bhi nahi suna   chalte koi baat nahi ek mahina to beet hi jayegi."


 Thodi der baad '" Anu beti Bibiji aapko  bula rahi hain"
      " Ji aayi  kanta kaki. " Anita Ji ki  room ke bahar Ananya  yeh soch rahi thi " mumma ne Kqun bulayi ? Kya baat hain ? "
    Room me  "mumma apne bulayi thi ? "
  Anitaji Ananya ko pass me baithai or pyar se kaha  " bahut din ho gayi beta tujse khul kar battien nahi ki. Beti jab badi ho jati hain to
ma uski dost ban jati hain.beta main sun rahi hu teri life me koi hain ? Kya yeh such hain ? "

 Ananya thodi si blush kia wo yehi samaj nahi pa rahi thi ki kaise kahe. Phir dhire dhire boli " 
"Yes mumma  wo na bahut accha or sanaskari bhi hain .Name Romit Agarwal . Wo ab A. G . industries ki V. C. hain. "
    Ananya jitni excited ho kar bol rahi  thi Anitaji sun to rahi thi par excited nahi lag rahi thi. Or kuch soch rahi thi.

  OK friends aaj ke lie bass itnahi.


 
          

    

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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
 Wow wow me the first one this time . yeh  nice  so nice.    Hay Ananya' s boyfriend  Romit not Kabir. OK let's see. Hay when Kabir is come?
 
  Anitaji aaj bhi Sudhir Ji se pyar karte hain Abhi bhi. 
 Good.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
 Haii  I am the first one . 
Wow ! Nice very nice 
So Ananyas boyfriend  Is Romit not Kabir
 Interesting. 
  Humm cont soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
   
Haii Agni,
 Humm its cool update . like me.
Its OK dear no needs to mentioned it.
 I really happy  your first update is good but not best. 
U learn very soon.

 Storyline is OK.let's see what's next ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Hii dear
Okay first of all sorry because I'm late
I actually couldn't find the fiction
So so sorry
But this is awesome
Loved it very much
Continue soon cutie

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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Interesting update 
So ananya and romit are together but where is Kabir 
Awesome one 
Continue soon and thanks for the pm 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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🤣. 
   
Haii ,
 Dear I must say u learn so soon.
 Very good update.
 So Ananyas  boyfriend is  Romit not  Kabir
 Sounds not good   
  Ha ha ha hi hi
 Humm where is the problem between Sudhir & Anitaji?    
When did u introduce Kabir.