Originally posted by: sush12_RM
Read 3 chapters in a go 😆
Such a lovely story it is 😳 close to my heart...coz its d first story i read for MehRya.
😳
You r a wonderful writer...plz do write more.
i'll wait ! 😛 😳
Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev
Yay! Finally I read all the chapters in one go! Phew! (Out of breath) 😆
My dear Kelly! What a fabulous writer you are! I'm speechless!
What a FF and Kya likhti ho yaar,I have no words to praise you
I loved each and every chapter,it was full of love,care and concern
As I was going through each chapter I found myself in MehRya land,it was so real.
Lovemaking in the shower was beyond beautiful ..I can't tell what happened to me after reading that scene 😆 it must have turned everyone on 😆
Can you please write some more OS or FF like this?
And thank you my dear! What we don't get to see in the show,we see them in FF's 😉
Waiting for more.
Love n hugs,
Sanjh 😊
Originally posted by: -Thabassum-
Kelly ...
Omg this os of yours ,was really .U won't believe it I started reading this is around 7 pm ...and It was at 8:30 I completed reading only five parts 😆Since I don't want to make my husband starving for dinner reading meheya 'sFast 😆Then continued at 10 and know time is 11:15 ...finally completed reading all the part ..😳I was so lost on the story ..how on the world I missed it ,from the first ?I loved so many things about this os shaurya being a protective husband for his pregnant wife ...And how mehak was reacting to his every teasing...I loved the way how u described shaurya thru mehaks POV and vice versa..So the great shaurya khanna was fasting to accompany his wife is just sweet of him😳Thier interaction wen she called him sitting in wash room was just fantastic ...Probably the mood swings .I guess 😆And the jiju saali moment was also cute ..I loved how shaurya was feeling awkward wen his in-laws wer telling him to taste the food they prepared ..😆Hmm I cudnt to help to notice how amazingly u used ur other fav double rabir in our mehrya story 😉Tat was way to smart..⭐️SK was jealous to see sumone touching his beautiful wife haan ??😳The last part was hot ...I loved the epilogue ...very well written 👏You really deserve anLoved ur is..it was fun reading the genuine shaurya who has immense love for his wife ...!!Once again...great job with this OS kellsHey Thabs,What can I say...With so much activity on our forum and my tortoise like updating skills, I am not surprised that you missed my OS, but now that I have most colorful review yet, I am thrilled that you did come across it😛. It is like I am a little kid getting a gold star from my teacher😆This was literally supposed to a singular os: one update, but after I started I couldn't let go, and even thought it took me forever to finish😕, I knew I couldn't stop until I covered everything I felt I needed to.I am so happy that you enjoyed this KC tale of mine, we can only wish that one day MehRya spend a lovely one together on the serial😊 until then, I had no choice but to create my own version of what could be.You are right I couldn't resist my first loves RaBir from popping in. I just cannot let them go either, so why not let my two fav jodis have a connection? Not sure if you have read my poor dejected FF Discover the Magic, but they feature there as well...I know I am obsessive.Anyway, again I am so glad that you took the time to read, but like a good wife kept your priorities straight😉.Now that I am down to three active bits of writing ( don't ask😕) I am definitely going to push along with the FF in the ZKM forum, as already my mind is clicking the way with future ideas for MehRya and I am determined not to fall into the trap starting something new while there are still outstanding assignments to be done😆Kelly
Originally posted by: crtkelly
Hey Thabs,What can I say...With so much activity on our forum and my tortoise like updating skills, I am not surprised that you missed my OS, but now that I have most colorful review yet, I am thrilled that you did come across it😛. It is like I am a little kid getting a gold star from my teacher😆This was literally supposed to a singular os: one update, but after I started I couldn't let go, and even thought it took me forever to finish😕, I knew I couldn't stop until I covered everything I felt I needed to.I am so happy that you enjoyed this KC tale of mine, we can only wish that one day MehRya spend a lovely one together on the serial😊 until then, I had no choice but to create my own version of what could be.You are right I couldn't resist my first loves RaBir from popping in. I just cannot let them go either, so why not let my two fav jodis have a connection? Not sure if you have read my poor dejected FF Discover the Magic, but they feature there as well...I know I am obsessive.Anyway, again I am so glad that you took the time to read, but like a good wife kept your priorities straight😉.Now that I am down to three active bits of writing ( don't ask😕) I am definitely going to push along with the FF in the ZKM forum, as already my mind is clicking the way with future ideas for MehRya and I am determined not to fall into the trap starting something new while there are still outstanding assignments to be done😆Kelly
Originally posted by: simran_singh_24
Loved the ending Kelly!
Nice to read a happy ending in times of chaos in the show😆
Loved the way you've tied all the ends beautifully.👏
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