Originally posted by: Ishkarafan
Omg... ๐ฒ ...Kelly i still can't stop blushing ๐ณ ๐ณ
So baby khanna is the copy of his father and a tight competition to him ๐ .shaurya was right mehak was the one who insisted for jr shaurya...afterall she loves her sr khanna... ๐ . Hope for little princess mehak soon ๐ณ .
Salute to mehak for giving a muhtod jawab to shruti... ๐ก
Shaurya was really surprised to see his bold sherni... ๐ .u beautifully recreated the karwachauth scene too ๐ surely showing his transformation from one who never believed in the ritual to one who can do it willingly for his ladylove for a lifetime...it's beautiful ๐ .hope something like this sensible happens in the show too...someday ๐ญ but I doubt will the evil trio even allow our lovebirds to have a peaceful married life and their little ones... ๐
Don't worry I blushed a bit when I was writing it and even more so when my hubby for some reason decided he wanted to see what I was up to๐ณ๐...he was a little surprised to say the least, and teased that I would get banned from the forum for this update๐
Anyway as to your comments:
Mehek got her wish, and it looks to me an exact replica of the grown Shaurya๐. I will definitely like to pen their princess in the future.
When I had started this story, Mehek hadn't confronted Shruiti, and then I had to come up with something at least on par with that great scene...I am glad you liked it.
I really wanted to story to show Shaurya's transformation , and their growth as a couple, and am relieved that that seems to have come across well. Like you I have no idea where the show is taking us and if we would ever get there. I would still prefer to have them united and up against the evil ones eventually...one can dream I guess๐๐
At any rate thank you so much for your appreciating my efforts
Kelly
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