FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 68

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update!
Can understand the pain of sumo, so happy that shravan did not cheat on sumo!
Sumo left him, why? I know she needs peace but how will shravan react if he knows it! Shravan will break down😭
Update soon!
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
😭😭😭

Amazing Update.👏
Very emotional one and super beautifully penned.

I knew he wouldnt do any thing of that sort.

I really dont have much words to say. But fabulous it was.

You are an amazing writer. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional update
This was Shravan's plan to hurt Sumo
Poor Sumo..now only she realized to what extent Shravan can go in his hatred for Sumo
"It's not a good bye but a sure promise to return soon"
Sumo surely needs some time..But I can't even guess how Shravan is going to react to this
Beautifully written..Plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
An emotional update ... 😕 I'm glad he remained sane 😕 but can't blame Sumo 😕
Waiting to whr this relaxation leads ..

Nicely written .. U did get me thr for a second :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Lara,
plz update d next chapter soon...dying to read what happen to Shravan n what does Suman do now..

rgds

Anuradha
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very very eager to know what would shravan do now?...where is sumo going to ? As their love story is slightly shifting from being sweet to show the bitter side, I am very much excited to read it..please update asap.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Res

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Unress


For being this late!!

I really have no idea what would I write here!!

Carol like seriously!

That was Shravan's plan! They even made out, though the line wasn't crossed, but still, leave Sumo, even I am failing to digest that!!!!!

Mera Dil to puncture ho gaya



And suman left after that! That was the right thing to do! All power to her!


But a request Lara, please please please update soon!!!! Will be waiting like crazy...



Thanks, dear, for the very lovely comment!
When you say "Pretty please" with that cute face, how can I resist.😳

Will be updating in an hour.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

"THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH FOR DEDICATING THIS CHAPTER TO ME "



Really happy that you dedicated this chapter to me. I will try and give my best review on this chapter...

Great to start with a Beautiful lovely Hug ❤️ and kiss before the storm 😉
Shravan's cheeky reply..
Chachi's evil words surely hunt sumo but Lara one question I want to ask how kamini chachi knew about Shravan was with another woman in his wedding Night?...
Shravan is always a bhukkad 😃 😉
Argument is certainly life of Shravan and sumo's relationship. I always like their fight more than emotional scenes..
Shravan must be unimpressed knowing Chachi's hater towards Tiwaris..
Finally sumo asked the Question with so much courage...
While seeking revenge, dig two graves - one for yourself. That's what Shravan did digging his own grave.. .
Sumo is devastated after knowing the truth..
You explained their situation through your words beautifully 👏
Sumo realised to what extent he can go in his hater towards her, he can even go on to sleep with another woman just to take revenge from sumo..
Glad that Shravan didn't cheated on sumo..
You will not be punished for your anger, you will be punished by your anger.

Buddha

That's what happened, no body punished him, Shravan himself punished by his anger... In his anger he wanted to sleep with a woman who he even didn't love, so now he got his punishment..
Good that sumo didn't forgive him easily, he should feel sorry for his mistakes.. Sumo is right, what will happen if in future they have another argument, he might Once again go to another woman...
Sumo is giving space to their relationship so that she can deal with what happened...
So sumo is leaving Shravan for sometime as she said "it was not a good bye but sure promise to return"..
Let's see how both deal with their relationship and thanks for pm..

Love
Smita


Quite a spot on review. Thanks a lot, Smita!
Yep, let's see how they deal with this ordeal now.
Love you too.❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

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Lara...🤗
Awesome update bro... 👏

ShraMan's little moments were so adorable...❤️
Loved it!

Sumo did trust Shravan but Kamini's confident accusation haunted her.N thats natural.
The way Sumo initiated the Carol talk was so amazing...N Shravan's reaction 😕
He was her most beautiful nightmare...❤️ Soo love it!!
The way ShraMan's emotional state penned down by you is my fav one in this cheppii Lara...You slayed it girl 👏

Shravan had always been successful it seemed, in mending her one moment and destroying her the next...True that!!
Awesome bro.. 👏

Why?!...One word n thousand questions!!
Thousand complaints...!!
Truly ultimate sound of heartbreak!

Shravan's deep rooted hatred..n its extend 😕
Along with Sumo, I was also trying hard not to read further..cant bear reading what Shravan did!!
But I couldnt...It gave much needed relief though!..Phew!!


I found myself returning to you, I always return to you...I soo Loved it ❤️ ❤️
Sumo's breakdown...Beautifully penned down 👏
Her insecurities are well justified here... !!
Its not Sumo who had reduced ShraMan to what ifs...Its you Shravan!!

Even after that storm, ShraMan had found shelter, a sense of security in each others embrace n will always no matter what happens...This is power of their undying love !!

Sumo do need to make a peace with her own heart first...Much needed!!
It was not a goodbye...It can never be!!
The last lines...Very Well descibes Sumo...The real strong Sumo outside but a vulnerable n broken one inside!!

Sumo didnt informed Shravan ...Now thats gonna be interesting 😉
Shravan...You called it yourself bro... 😛

Spectacular upii Lara.. 👏
Thanks for the pm n cont soon 😊

Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik ❤️


Thanks a lot, dear!
Loads of love to you too, Nik. 🤗

Yes, Shravan brought this upon himself but there's a saying - the guilty one hurts the most. 😭 We'll witness it now.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

"It was not a goodbye but a sure promise to soon return" - this one made me cry!!! 🥺

heart melting update!

beautifully written each n every emotion. ...
so so so amazing! !
keep it up, darling ❤️
and yeah...update soon!


Thank you so much, dear!
Will be updating in an hour.😳

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