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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#651

Clara,i finished reading the chapter with a very heavy heart😭

I am with Sumo for the decision she took at the end...

What others would feel i don't know right now; but this is my opinion...

I don't think whatever Shravan did was right however he hated Sumo...

I am not sure whether i have expressed myself fully or whether it makes sense at all..

Waiting for your next update to see what happens next with Shraman...

And thanks for the PM.

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Endless_sky

@Endless_sky

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Posted: 8 years ago

#652

Thanks for the pm. Loved the update

Felt bad for Suman it is hard to find out such truths and sometimes you need time and space to figure things out..

It would have been better if she told shtavab and left but would Shravan would have let her go ... Not likely

Can't wait to read what happens next... update soon

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#653

Awesome update

Sure, suman going away from sharavan without informing him will raise hell. He has reach to a point in his life where he is extremely possessive of her and wants her with him at any cost even if she is need the place. This will be a new revelation for suman and they will both learn the lesson to never go to bed without sorting problems.

Can't wait to read more.

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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#654

Happy Holi to you too Lara !!
That was one helluva chapter...Shravan almost betrayed her...but thankfully didn't ...such a relief..
Suman may need distance from Shravan to sort out and calm d storm in her mind...but plz let this storm not ruin their newfound love...let Shravan realise that anger and vengeance is not d best way to punish someone, especially one not proven guilty...only presumed guilty...
u r such a awesome writer...u will give the best solution to their problems...
eagerly waiting for d next chapter

rgds
Anuradha

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#655

Okay. I know I have not unresd the last one and I have not commented for a while, but I have read each chapter, I am really sorry for that. Really sorry. I will Unres it. I haven't been commenting due this, but this chapter forced me to comment in spite of my embarrassment 😳

I Loved this chapter Lara!! Every single bit of it!!!

The way you showed her asking him about it, was brilliant!!! His reaction and hers consequently was beautifully written!! The pain, the anguish was all👏

Hats off for such brilliance and for maintaining it through and through!!

Much love,

Sara

P.S: Probably my longest comment so far on this story😳

Edited by PrincessAshVik - 8 years ago

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#656

Shravan went with another woman on their wedding day & he wanted to keep mistress for him only to hurt Sumo because then he hated her, so much hatred was there in his heart so he went that extent.. 😡 Now Sumo left the house without informing him but she will return once she is felt good but what about Shravan he doesn't know she left him but she will come back, for him she left him again when he needed her most what if he again starts hating her, again he will become same Shravan one he was before.. 😭 what Sumo will do after she come back if she find him same like before.. 😲 Shraman's life again devastated, will be they together again.. 😭 I m just worried for them.. 😭 I can't imagine how Shravan will react now after he woke up when he won't find Sumo @ home.. 😭 plz God save my week heart it won't break.. 😭 🤢

Emotional chap & Unexpected twists.. 😕

Thanks for PM

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#657

Anxiousness at its speak! ! Each of these 45 chaps made me feel curious,,nervous,,excited...but this one was exceptional! !

Read it with a bated breath! !

Infidelity n Shravan it's so uncomfortable to think of these two words together!

'I couldn't'...brought me back to life !!

Shravan will go beserk! Not finding Sumo around!

Sumo,,I really feel for,,just when things started getting normal n she was finally at home,,this happened! The idea of putting Homely feeling into the house went on a pause! !

I hope she is back soon!

Happy Holi to u too!🥳

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#658

wow

poor sumo

hope she can forgive shravan

amazing update

absolutely brilliant

continue soon

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#659

This is exactly why you are the best.

This if it happens with anyone would be exactly realistically this way... 👏

how to ask your spouse, the love of your life a question so sensitive. Did you cheat on me?

No hunny, but since you decided to lose trust in me by even coming up with this question, now I have full rights to go away or stay upset.

The other way round its like getting caught off guard like.

What if she doesn't ask the next question? What if she assumes? thankfully she din't assume. Sane person sumo is here.

Shravan's predicament, the entire dialogue between them with each expression is so beautifully penned. Yes you take sadistic pleasure in drawing out pain and then spreading it beautifully over your blank canvass for the viewer to stay enthralled and feel his insides churning at the same time.

Amazing Clara. Amazing.

Edited by deltadawn - 8 years ago