I love this! Aha, I know what you mean - I once wrote a one-shot while sitting in the optometrist's office on my phone because the idea just wouldn't leave me and I had to write it, then and there.
Anyway, this was much needed and so well-depicted - I think we all just need for Shravan to tell Sumo he loves her and he's sorry and curl up with his head in her lap and we can live the rest of our lives in peace :') I really liked how you showed that confrontation with Ramnath as well - that's the thing about his father, he's under the misguided impression that whatever he's done, is right and it's for Shravan's happiness. And I liked the ambiguity in the ending because obviously in this one-shot it's too soon for anything yet, but the significant thing is that whatever happens next, they'll get through it together <3
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