ShraMan OS - Childhood Sweetheart - Page 2

Originally posted by: sman2195

Hi Ritu,
I m Susmita. Just read your beautiful OS!!

Bravo! You wrote it beautifully. Well detailed.. 👏 oh the dilemma ... of Shravan not being able to give her a valid reason.. Ahaha... Makkhija.. Makkhi udd raha hain... 🤣 that was Hilarious..

Keep writing beautiful stories like this. Will read.. Catch you soon 😉

Thanks Susmita 😳

Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

Thanks Susmita 😳

Its so cute..enjoyed it completely

Oh man!

Okay i have two things to say
M extremely sorry for being late 😭
N I love you for this OS 🤗
Its freakin' awesome 👏 👏
Childhood sweethearts ❤️ and finally life partners
It was pure bliss to read !!!!
Loved it the core ❤️
Keep writing !!

P.s.- Mahasangam update kar de behen. Dying to read supercops , cid, crime patrol n KD 😆Edited by sapphire3 - 7 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

Oh man!

I felt such happiness reading this!

Why can't these two buffoons be like this!!

Childhood sweethearts, I'm such a goner for these!

Loved your piece!

Feel good write up!

Thank you for this one...

And I'm waiting on the mahasangam!

Love

🤗

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Okay i have two things to say
M extremely sorry for being late 😭
N I love you for this OS 🤗
Its freakin' awesome 👏 👏
Childhood sweethearts ❤️ and finally life partners
It was pure bliss to read !!!!
Loved it the core ❤️
Keep writing !!

P.s.- Mahasangam update kar de behen. Dying to read supercops , cid, crime patrol n KD 😆

@Bold
Yet to complete yaar🤣
I told you I never watch these shows regularly. Even I don't know their characters' names properly.
Still researching & writing😛Edited by Sadia.Ritu - 7 years ago

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Okay, so I am a big sucker for childhood sweetheart stories and buddy you have done complete justice to their love!

Ahhh, this was such a bliss to read.

Thank you for this

👏

awww I also just love childhood love stories.
Glad that you liked! Thanks for the compliments 😃

hey ritu ...it was awesome...I loved it...got emotional when sumo gave her slam book to shravu...thanks God he Confessed finally...see ramu is again villain here also ;) and that makhija or makhi uda raha ;) is adi .. ;)

awesome...
beautifully written...

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

hey ritu ...it was awesome...I loved it...got emotional when sumo gave her slam book to shravu...thanks God he Confessed finally...see ramu is again villain here also ;) and that makhija or makhi uda raha ;) is adi .. ;)

Thanks😆