A Murder Mystery : The Judgement - Page 4 | Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems

Shubhangishubhi

@Shubhangishubhi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Too good...👏

Would love to see more like these😛

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 7 years ago

Mahi I didn't know you could write this genre so so well!

I'm actually smitten!

Kamal kar diya!

I love your eye for detail!

I was so engrossed in this!

You're too good!

My multi-talented bestie!

Proud of you 👏

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 7 years ago

Mahi meri jaan 🤗
I'm speechless!!
Though I know you are too good in this genre , courtesy wattpad 😃
But this one kept me on the edge of my seat.
So after a long long time GAJABNESS which is exclusively for you is back !! 😉
Keep writing!!!

Ps.- When u have nothing to do plzzz update wattpad stories

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 7 years ago

Damn good Mahi..
Awesome...
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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ramya06
Unres
Good lord! Whoa! What a piece! I'm completely blown away at this! And this is so the O'Henry style! With that characterstic twist towards the end! ⭐️ I think he himself would be proud of this one!! 👏
I think the other twin is the murderer. Wanna hear the reason? 😉

Thanks a lot Ramya di! Omg, you loved it so much?

Yeah sure!! I want to here!😳

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubhangishubhi
Too good...👏
Would love to see more like these😛

Thank you Shubhangi

Yes, sure😉

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Abhilasha Malhotra

@TheLadyMcQueer

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Posted: 7 years ago

Res!😃

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Sorry for being late to UnRes😭!

Well My am Exams are approaching and the practicals were suddenly preponderated. 😕 That created all the fuss. It really sucks .

Now coming to the OS😃.

Mahi Di it was SPLENDID!

I still wonder "How can you do this again and again?"

You always keeps your reader engaged to your story.

There is not even a moment when we feel out of it👏.

Will love to read more of O.Henry soonish if you are going to write.

O.Henry will be proud on you today since there is someone who can keep his style of writing alive.👍🏼

The surprise ending was Awesome⭐️!

Now coming to your Question.

I hope I will be fair enough to say that "No one is ever considered to be a guilty until justified in the eyes of Law"😉

Bye for Now,

With loads of love,

Your and only yours CUPCAKE.

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Thanks a lot Ramya di! Omg, you loved it so much?
Yeah sure!! I want to here!😳

Because, the twin's head was crushed exactly in the same manner as the victims. So i'm bound to think there is more to it than that accident. I think, maybe the other twin killed him and made it look like an accident so that his truth won't come out??

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 7 years ago

What a twist in tale with the twins.

Either of the wives is lying .

The end though.
Is there a continuation for this ?

-God bless

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub
What a twist in tale with the twins.

Either of the wives is lying .

The end though.
Is there a continuation for this ?

-God bless

Thank you!

Nope, no continuation!

Its an open to ponder on OS :)

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