A Murder Mystery : The Judgement - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Unres. Whoa! It's so engrossing Mahi. Loved it. Loved how you took care of all the details coz that matters a lot in a thriller. Superb presentation. I didn't know you are so good at it girl πŸ€— Just lovely. Would love love to read more thrillers from you. You are one immensely talented girl I must say. Love ya πŸ€—


Thanks a lot Resh!
Glad you liked it!
Yupp, I include details coz I love it that way, even as a Reader!

Thank you so much!

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

You won't believe I first the murderer and when I got to the middle of my reply I changed it coz I have always believed death is not a punishment for the one who die. It's a punishment for the one who lived. But you are the writer here so you know better πŸ˜†


Not at all!
Your POV was so different! I liked it!
Its possible naa
I've left it open πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ana_mika

MahiπŸ€—

Such a captivating piece it is!

Sheer brilliance!! From the beginning to the end I could not pause for a moment.

You have done a brilliant job like always!

I never new that you are so good at it.

I guess i am yet to learn many things about youπŸ˜ƒ 

Love you!❀️



 


Thank you soo much Ana!
Haha! Yup, there's more to meπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Glad you liked it! Im so happy!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mahi you are so good at this mystery thing broπŸ‘. It was so captivating through out.And the open end, you have left me pondering. Now I'm gonna think who might be the murderer for atleast a couple of days. Great Job. Would love to read more of this genre from you and Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautifully written
Lovedd ttt😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey, this was a really good story. Do pm me when you write next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
BRILLIANT! Awesome story! Loved how you highlighted the power of Karma! And yeah, the last suspense! Simply amazing!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

BRILLIANT! Awesome story! Loved how you highlighted the power of Karma! And yeah, the last suspense! Simply amazing!


Thank you so much Pro!
Glad you liked it! Yeah, we've to pay for everything is this life itself...
That's what Govind tells us always😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_vaish

Mahi you are so good at this mystery thing broπŸ‘. It was so captivating through out.And the open end, you have left me pondering. Now I'm gonna think who might be the murderer for atleast a couple of days. Great Job. Would love to read more of this genre from you and Thanks for the PM

Thank you Vaish!

Yup, will do!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ramya06

Mera bhi firstie res. For whatever this is. πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Unres
Good lord! Whoa! What a piece! I'm completely blown away at this! And this is so the O'Henry style! With that characterstic twist towards the end! ⭐️ I think he himself would be proud of this one!! πŸ‘
I think the other twin is the murderer. Wanna hear the reason? πŸ˜‰