IPKKND FF: KHUSHI by JALEBI JANE Thread 1: EPISODE 001-052

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#421

Loved part 13 and 14👏

Two updates

Arnav reasserted his rights in front of Shyam, protecting Khushi👏

Love the line of wearing the Saree chosen by him and being wrapped up in him

Eager for the next part😃

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#422

Episode 11

The moment she saw ring and read her inner feeling, bring tears in my eyes. And he is not making things easy for her. It's her desire too, to be with him when he ask to with him fully. But this six month is not making her comfortable.

The way you write arnav's character in this story is perfect. He is same mysterious person who didn't show his innermost feeling to anyone. And he was planning all this even more but didn't inform her beforehand.

The scene when she saw him laughing and she feel so happy to make him laugh, is beautifully written.

Marvellous update.

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 9 years ago

#423

archnahardik123 wrote:

Thank you for your many comments, Archna. What you say is very important to me. To first get the spirit of the character as close to the tv character as possible---and then take that character into uncharted territory.

Jalebi Jane

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#424

Episode 12

He is a devil for sure. How cunningly he made her say all those things and made her propose him too.

He deserves Oscar for this brilliant performance.

Hope I could just close my hands around his neck😃. Khushi won't mind once she know his intentions.

They are married finally and legally. And he made is sound it as it was Khushi who wants to marry. And he as a gentleman do as told.

My throat was in pain thinking Khushi's state. Such a innocent soul married to fox.

Marvellous update dear. Loved it.

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

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Posted: 9 years ago

#425

Pleasant surprise to see 2 updates!

When he first asked (commanded even) her to wear the saree of his choice, I thought he was being a tad high-handed.

But then he explained why "When you wear the saree of my choosing, it feels as though you are wrapped up in me---even when you are across the room, I am touching you." "

This possessive, passionate lover in him is irresistible and no chance for a young, naive but sensuous girl like Khushi to resist him. He continues to show this by being fed by her, to which she is a willing participant (in fact, she initiates it) :-)

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gurukhush

@gurukhush

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#426

Hi Jalebi Jane,

Bravo👏.. You are a brilliant writer and you must accept that, to your own peril, unfortunately😕.. I am following all your Arshi stories on the IF; and just saying that they are great pieces of ongoing fiction, would be the understatement of the month, if not the year. Quicker and mercifully longer updates( I know you update almost daily..) are sincerely requested. Please continue to bestow your magic, in which ever way😃😃😃 Thanx.

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: JalebiJane
farheen75 wrote:
How old is khushi, a teenager I presume as she is totally besotted with every gesture of Arnav...

In all my serials, the H/h are the same age as the tv-IPKKND.
And age does not protect us from becoming besotted. In fact, I hope I am never so old as to be safe from that affliction :-)

Here I will disagree with you, in teenage, we look at the world with rose tinted glasses and get impressed with looks and style but as we grow older, we become mature and at world in general and relationships in particular with more clarity and maturity. Khushi was shown as an eighteen year old girl, who got infatuated by a man 10 years elder to him with looks and experience and also making her experience the unknown world of intimacy and pleasure.

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#428

Shyam is a leech , he doesn't fail to embarrass khushi at every opportunity . Arnav somehow manages to irritate shyam , being khushi's husband he can definitely show Whom she belongs to . Khushi is feeding her husband , such a nice romantic gesture