Twinj Dark SS - Immortal Love updated Chapter 5 - Pg 13 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

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K this is wow!!! I love it
Kunj's frustration was so beautifully written and he and Twinkle just have a connection. Idk how it will work out since he ain't human but I am really excited to know what u have planned for us.
Alisha is definitely a dicey character. She and Vishal are somehow involved in Kunj's murder. I have a feeling.
And the kiss!
Can ghosts kiss? Never mind I don't care as long as they kissed lol

Update soon baby 😆

hahah yeah they probably can kiss😆
Thank you so much A,glad you liked it 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: piu22

Loved it..

Again an amazing episode..
Waiting for the next part

Thank you so much😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: tikit

K i want to keep on reading this story.

Its amazing a ghost nd a human.
Kunj's frustration was beautifully shown when he was not able to hit his friend being a ghost nd then the breakdown.
Awesome k.
Its as though theres some sort of connection between twinj.
Continue soon s m greedy for updates.
K 🤗 for thinking of writing this story.
Thanks for pm.

This is a huge compliment for me,thank you so much Eshu 🤗
Love youuu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

Yes Yes

You did it.
My one wish is fulfilled...
Can you fulfil the other one pleaseee.😉
& Don't look at me like What...???
I gave the hint below.😳

[HINT:-K,I don't know why i found something my personal likings in your story.
And for sure this is not the different.
Since Casper days (When I saw first time the movie )I wish that if Casper became alive.😃]

Adiii
I'm not sure if I can fulfill your 2nd wish since I've already planned the ending but I'll try my best
Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: J.arora

K u r driving me crazy by ur writings doll...the story is so so awesome...the description of feelings and self realisation part of kunj was awesome...I don't know why but for me this story of urs I love it exceptionally...this is ur best story for me...this attracts me so much...

If possible cont asap...
Love u ❤️

awww thank you sooo much baby
I'm so glad you liked it!!!!
love youuu too🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Really nice story. Update soon😊

Thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

☺️ The kiss!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THE KISS!
THE STORY!
THE DEVELOPEMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everything is just sooo beautiful!!!
Loving the pace and development of this story man. Its simply amazing!!

LOVELY!👏

haha thank you so much Ras malai
I'm so glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: shreya098

Awesome k.
The kiss.. ❤️ ...
Uggh..this Alisha... She hurted my kunj..
The way u described his anger,frustration, pain...amazing 👏

Loved it

Thank you so much Shreya,glad you liked it🤗❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Happy reading x

Chapter 4

As they pulled apart,Kunj moved his face forward so that his forehead touched Twinkle's

Today had been no less than a roller coaster ride.First seeing Alisha and Vishal together and now this,Kunj had never in his life imagined himself to be falling for someone like Twinkle

He was falling for her.

It wasn't those usual infatuations or attractions he had back when he was alive,it was something way more than that.

It was different when he was with Twinkle.For the first time in these 2 years,he felt alive again

The turmoil and butterflies that Kunj felt in his stomach,Twinkle felt in hers too.

"Do you feel it?",asked Kunj,his eyes closed as his breathing got normal

"Do I feel the unexplainable feeling of happiness of being kissed by the hottest man in the world,yes"

Kunj smiled and opened his eyes as he heard Twinkle giggling

"Correction,I'm not the hottest man but the hottest ghost",said Kunj as he wrapped his hands around Twinkle's waist

"Correction again,you're my hottest ghost",said Twinkle wrapping her hands around Kunj's neck

Both Kunj and Twinkle didn't know why they were flirting but this feeling was completely new to them.They wanted to go on and on and be this close to each other always

"Didi aap theekh toh ho na",asked a small boy holding a basket ball in his hands

Kunj and Twinkle moved their gaze towards where the small voice was coming from

It took Twinkle not more than 2 seconds to realize the position they were standing in.For her,they were standing in each other's embrace but for the world,it was only Twinkle standing in an awkwardly uncomfortable situation with her hands up in the air as though holding someone

Twinkle quickly let go of Kunj and adjusted her clothes as she avoided the little man's gaze towards her

"Kya?"asked Twinkle as though she was unaware of the happenings around her

Aap mental ho? Asked the little boy curiously

Twinkle's eyes widened at the boy while Kunj bursted out laughing

Glancing once at Kunj,Twinkle stared at the boy again

Walking towards the boy,Twinkle bend down a little so that she matched his height

"Haan mein mental hun aur pata hai mujhe kya khana pasand hai? mujhe chote bacche khana accha lagta hai",said Twinkle slowly and creepily enough to scare the boy

Kunj suppressed his laughter as the little boy gulped down his saliva with difficulty

Twinkle smirked as she saw the scared expression on the boy's face

"Mumaaa",screamed the boy as he threw the basketball in the air,not caring where it went and ran for his life

Twinkle giggled as she turned back towards Kunj

Kunj smiled as he stepped forward and placed a kiss on her hair

"Let's go home",said Kunj as he entwined his fingers with Twinkle's

"Not yet,there's something very important that I need to do"

Looking at Kunj's confused face,she took his hand and led him away

~

At the girl's locker room

As Alisha kept her books in the locker and slammed the door shutting it,she found Twinkle standing in front of her,anger written all over her face

Though it was difficult to convince Kunj,Twinkle somehow managed to convince him not to come to the locker room when she was talking to Alisha.Kunj wasn't keen in leaving Twinkle alone with Alisha since he didn't trust her enough and knew what all she was capable of but he had to because of Twinkle's promise given to him by her.Twinkle didn't like upsetting him either but she needed to talk to Alisha alone and sort things out

"Hi",greeted Alisha with a fake smile as she started walking towards the door

Twinkle quickly stepped forward,infront of Alisha,blocking her way

"What's your problem? Let me go"

"Not before you answer my questions"

"Fine",said Alisha as she folded her hands near her chest."shoot"

"I know you killed your boyfriend Kunj Sarna"

The word shocked' must have been a very small word for Alisha at that moment.She felt a electric current pass through her body and she could feel the ground below her moving.But she needed to stay strong enough to be able to deal with little Ms not so perfect Twinkle.Composing herself,she began

"That's not a question"

Stupid,stupid,stupid!!!! Out of all the things in the world, this is the comeback she had.Not so cool,thought Alisha

Twinkle rolled her eyes

"Oh come on Alisha,don't try and play smart with me,you and I both know your little secret'"

"I don't know what you're talking about",said Alisha her attitude as high as before

"Sure you don't,look I don't have time for this,I'm just here to warn you"

"Warn me? About what?"

"I'm sure you must have already destroyed all the evidence that would lead the police to come to you"

"What evidence?"asked Alisha,shock written all over her face

"Look I don't know what evidence is that but it's out there and that one evidence is enough to destroy your life,So now,if you don't want to spend your entire life in the jail,you better go and hunt for that evidence before someone else does",said Twinkle stepping forward towards Alisha

Without waiting for her to reply back,Twinkle turned around and started walking towards the door

Twinkle stopped as she was at the door. Without turning around,she continued

"The evidence is in the football ground of our college"

"I haven't killed anyone",shouted Alisha nervously to Twinkle but Twinkle was already gone

~

At night

It was about 1 am when Twinkle secretly entered the football ground that was connected to the college's back gate and stood behind a tree so that no one was able to see her

"Common on Alisha,come here and destroy that evidence,I know you'll come here",said Twinkle to herself as she rubbed her hands together that were cold because of the 11 degrees temperature.

Just then Twinkle saw someone entering the ground.Twinkle shoved herself more inside the tree so that she wasn't visible

What shocked Twinkle were the 3 people walking towards the centre of the ground

"Wait what? Who are these 3 people? I thought only Alisha was going to come here tonight and try and destroy the evidence.Does that mean there was someone else involved in the murder too?",whispered Twinkle

Since all the 3 people wore black clothes with a hoodie covering their heads, Twinkle wasn't able to figure out who the faces were

"Come on,turn around,just let me see your face once,come one",said Twinkle to herself

And at that moment all the 3 faces turned revealing her identity,

Alisha Kapoor.

Vishal Khanna.

Manohar Sarna.

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