Twinj Dark SS - Immortal Love updated Chapter 5 - Pg 13 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

112

Views

10.1k

Users

21

Likes

137

Frequent Posters

Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

At first K you know that till now i don't configure the difference between FF & SS.

Anyhow all I want that the story do not finish abruptly;That's it.
I just fall in love your flamboyant ghost;he seems soo real that I did forget that he is ghost.
Thanks for the reminder in between.😃
Also a beautiful relation is forming slowly and this is sooo well placed by your pen.
Adore this.👏
And Yes for the first time when you took the name Alisha,a doubt is placed in my mind and at last what you tell after that I have no doubt in it.It's all Crystal clear except the motive, All I guess it's monetary matter.
Highly hypered for the story from the beginning;
Soo Please update as soon as possible.😊

Aww don't worry Adi baba I won't leave the story midway😉
I'm so glad you are liking the story😃
I'll update it as soon as I can
Thank you so much!!!
Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Loving the intensity and the mystery of this story!!!
It literally has me on the edge of my seat. And that is saying something!
👏👏👏
Alisha, Alisha, Alisha! I have my doubts on you lady, but then I have a shit load of other theories too...

Looking forward to how this story shapes up to be
But I am most interested in the ending. Now don't get me wrong, K. I was just wondering how Twinkle and Kunj will be together once the mystery is solved, considering that he is in fact a ghost...

Loved it.
Keep up the good work!

Thank you so much😳
I'm so glad you're liking the story😃
I understand your point of view Meh,this story won't have a happy ending just like how the other stories of mine do!
I hope I can do full justice to the ending and you like it!😉

Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: tikit

Loving this ss.

Its too good k babes.
Thankgod u were reminded that u had wrotten it.
I love this flamboyant hot ghost kunj.
I have a big doubt on alisha.
Looking forward to the story.
Jaldi jaldi updates k.
Thanks for pm😊
K🤗

hahah now I'll be more regular with my updates baby
Thank you so much E
Love you🤗

Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Flower.girl

Lovely

Maybe alisha is behind the murder
Anyway tx for the Pm
Update soon
Love
Advika

Thank you Advika😃
Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: shreya098

I was waiting for it...

I am looving this..

I don't know about twinkle but I am going all gaga over this hot ghost 😉

Loooved it kiara..

aw Shreya you should have told me that you were waiting for it,I would have updated sooner then😃
Nonetheless,glad you liked it!
Thank you🤗
Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: J.arora

As always U r damn amazing...this is one of my fav story of ur...I loved this storyline so much...and what to appreciate ur writing u are as always the best..

The way u described kunj's fashion sense was so amazing and ghost & fashion part was too good..
Love u

And as always,I love your comments😃
Thank you so much Jhanvi🤗
Love you too!
Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: maisarah

Yeh to suppperrr se bhii uppperrr ka tha...
Lovd evry sngle wrd of it darling ...
Updt soonish...
Love u

haha thank you so much Aura🤗
Love you too!
Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: tricksters

Kiara...its getting more interesting.

I just love it..My hottie kunj...even after being a ghost he want to look good.😆
I hate Alisha...she might have murdered kunj.😡
Please update soon.
Eagerly waiting.

Thank you so much Aiesha🤗
Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

I am gonna read this and then come back

Take your time A😃
Jambread3 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Happy reading x

Chapter 3

What he saw in front of him shattered him into pieces

If only Kunj had a heart,it would have been broken into a million pieces by now

There sat Alisha in the canteen with her new boyfriend and Kunj's ex best friend Vishal,happily sipping on the latte Vishal had got for her

Alisha was happy,not even once did it look like she had lost her love' 2 years back.How happily she held Vishal's hand and kept whispering things to him,giggling every now and then

Sure Kunj was gone only to never come back again and Alisha had every right to move on but didn't she move on too fast? Was their love so weak that instead of mourning Alisha decided to move on and that too with his best friend? There were thousands of such questions roaming around in Kunj's mind that only triggered his anger more

Twinkle,who stood right next to him could see how Kunj's facial color changed from pale to red.She couldn't see him like that,she knew how much of a playboy Kunj had been but he actually loved Alisha and that was always visible in his eyes

Before Twinkle to place her hand on Kunj's shoulder to comfort him,Kunj walked towards Alisha and Vishal's table

Standing in front of them,Kunj stared at them,his eyes blood shot

Not being able to control himself anymore,Kunj launched himself forward and threw a punch at Vishal

Vishal laughed as Alisha whispered something into his ears,not before biting his earlobe and then moving away

Twinkle still standing at the entrance of the cafeteria saw how Kunj's hand passed through Vishal's face without touching him at all

Seeing the PDA happen in front of him,Kunj tried to punch Vishal again only to fail once again

In a fit of rage,Kunj kept throwing punches at Vishal which missed him again and again,Kunj's desperate cries growing louder

Kunj wanted to hit Vishal,he wanted him to bare the pain

He kept hitting Vishal while continuous crying like a baby,his loud cries unheard by everyone

Tears formed in Twinkle's eyes seeing Kunj in that state

He looked like a 5 year old crying who was throwing punches at their parents for taking away his favorite toy

After several attempts,Kunj finally stopped and fell to the ground

Through his tearful eyes he saw Vishal kissing Alisha's cheek while she blushed,the same blush she used to have on when Kunj was with her

Vishal had replaced Kunj.

Kunj got up and ran outside.Throwing a hard glance towards the love birds,Twinkle ran outside to find Kunj

~

Coming outside,Twinkle looked around everywhere but she couldn't find him

Babaji,I just hope he is fine,thought Twinkle

Confirming that he was nowhere in the college,Twinkle started walking outside

She didn't care if her lectures weren't getting missed,right now the most important thing in the world for her was to find Kunj and make sure that he was alright

After walking for about 2 kms,Twinkle found Kunj sitting on the swing of a garden,his face covered with his palms

Not wanting him to disturb him,Twinkle silently went and took the swing next to his

"Are you okay?", Whispered Twinkle as Kunj removed his hands off his face

"I don't deserve love",whispered Kunj back

"Please don't say that,of course you deserve love"

"All my life,I loved Alisha and I was under the impression that she loved me too.I lived a life that was nothing but just a filthy lie.You know it's all my karma,god knows how many girls's feelings have I played with before meeting Alisha,it's all coming back to me"

"No,that's not true.Just because a wh**e never loved you that doesn't mean that you don't deserve love,ofcourse you do.It's her loss if she didn't understand your love,trust me it's her loss.Look I know you didn't get a chance to be with someone who truly loved you but I'm sure you will find someone in the next life.Someone who understands you and loves you just as much you"

"Do you think so?",asked Kunj with hopeful eyes

"I know so",smiled Twinkle as she placed her hand on top of Kunj's

Kunj looked down to where their hands met. Suddenly Feeling conscious, Twinkle was about to remove her hand from his when Kunj stopped her

"Let your hand be here,I like it this way"

Twinkle smiled as she nodded

Kunj took Twinkle's hand and entwined his fingers with hers, letting their hands fall on his thigh

They both remained silent.

The chirping of the birds,the peaceful atmosphere and each other's presence gave them this weird yet comforting warmth

"You know this is my favorite park",said Kunj breaking the silence

"Oh is it?"

"Yeah,whenever I felt low or I had a fight with my family or Alisha,I would run and come here.Coming here would automatically cheer my mood up and instantly make me feel better"

Twinkle smiled as she kept looking at Kunj as he described further what he loved about the park.She looked down to their entwined hands and blushed.

"I really need to find my murderer Twinkle",said Kunj taking Twinkle by surprise

Just a few seconds ago Kunj was happily talking about his love for the park and now suddenly he was serious again

"Don't worry Kunj,we'll find your murderer soon,he will have to pay for his wrong deeds"

"Thank you so much Twinkle,you have no idea how much this means to me.I really don't know what would have I done if you weren't there with me"

"Hey,no matter what happens,I'm always going to be there for you"

"And I'm always going to be there for you"

Kunj and Twinkle looked into each other's eyes.Time had seemed to stand still.

He looked down at her lips before looking back into her eyes again

Slowly Kunj leaned in,placing his hands on the sides of her face

Twinkle closed her eyes as felt Kunj's face near her

Kunj kept going closer to her as Twinkle took a deep breath in to stop the giddiness happening in her stomach

Finally,he placed his lips on hers,covering the painful distance between them.

x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x---x-x

Edited by Jambread3 - 9 years ago


DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS


Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".