KaIra OS: One Chance

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Posted: 2016-07-11T07:23:38Z

KaIra OS: One Chance

 

N: mumma, mujhe nay karni shaadi...toh mein photo q dekhu????

 

A: beta, ek bar photo toh dekh lo...bada hi honaar ladka hy..dikhne mein thoda..(n made a not so good look)

 

N: mumma..plzzz..!!

 

A: ek baar milne mein kya harz hy beta??

 

N: mumma..??

 

A: dekho Naira, mein photo yahi rakh rahi hu..dekhlena..aur agar pasand aaye toh usne aaj tumhe CCD bulaya hy..mil lena..agar ladka accha nay laga toh hum mana kar denge..pakka!!! hmm??? (n left)

 

N: arre yaar, kaha phaas gayi??? Engineering khatam bhi nay huyi aur papa meri shaadi karvana chahte hy?? photo dekh lu kya??? (she went n took the photo in her hands, her eyes wide in shock n mouth open) yeh hy ladka???? No ways, mein isse har kiz nay milne wali...(kept the photo n went inside her room)

 

Lunch tym...

 

Naitik: toh Princess, photo dekh li??? Accha laga na apko ladka?? Honaar hy, amir hy, intelligent hy..unka khud ka business hy..dikhne mein bhi acche hy..

 

N: (in her mind) dikhne mein, accha??? GOD!!! Itna mota (fat) hy, dressing sense nay hy, chasmish hy, muh (face) par pimples hy..yuck!!!! m not gonna marry such a guy..

 

Naitik: Naira, kya soch rahi hy aap??

 

N: kuch nay papa woh bas..

 

Naitik: toh phir yeh teh hy, tu aaj shaam aap unse milne jayegi...shaam 5:30 baje..market mein joh naya CCD khula hy na wahi par woh aapko milne aayenge..

 

N: (thinks) papa ka decision hy toh maana hi padega..par..

 

Naitik: aap unka naam toh jaanti hy na??

 

N: umm..nai..

 

Naitik: ksi hy aap!!!! Unka naam chintu hy!!

 

N: (thinks) chintu??? Yeh ksa naam hy?? chiii!!! Shit yaar, mein sach mein kaha phas gayi???

 

Naitik: baaki sab detail aapko aapki mumma bataa dengi chintu k baare mein..akshara, hum chalte hy...chaliye Naksh..

 

Naksh: jii papa..chutki, mil le uss ladke se..papa keh rahe hy toh ach hi hoga..hmm?? (n left along wid their father)

 

N: mumma, uska naam sacch mein chintu hy???

 

A: toh tum usse milne jaa rahi ho??

 

N: (thinks) haa mumma jarur jaungi..par ultimately usse reject hona hy...

 

N: haa..abh papa ka decision hy toh..

 

A: yeh huyi na baat..

 

N: haa..

 

Naira's room..


A: Naira, 3:30 ho rahe hy..so math jaana..chalo bed par se utho aur tayari karo..

 

N: 2 ghante hy maa..chill!!!

 

A: accha theek hy..

 

N: mumma, agar mujhe woh ladka pasand nay aaya toh..

 

A: hum iss rishte ko aage nay badayenge..

 

N: ok..(n smiled broadly) mr. chintu, abh dekh mein tere saath kya karti hu!!

 

A: tumne kuch kaha??

 

Naira: nay..

 

Naira and Akshara kept talking..it 4:30 now..when suddenly the door bell ranged..

 

A: arre iss samay kon hoga?? Mein dekh kar aati hu..

 

N: ok..

 

A: beta, abh toh ready hojao..4:30 baj gaye hy..5:00 baje nikal na hy tumhe...

 

N: haa mummaa..(lazy tone)

 

A: tch..jaldi Naira..(n left)

 

 Akshara opened the door n saw post man standing wid a currier in his hand

 

A: jii???

 

PM: Singhania jii ka ghar yahi hy??

 

A: haa..boliye kya hua??

 

PM: yeh Naira Singhania k liye currier aaya hy..

 

A: di jiye..

 

PM: yaha sign kar di jiye..

 

Akshara signs the ppr n the PM leaves..

 

A: Naira k liye currrier?? Kya ho sakta hy??

 

N: mummaaa!!!! M ready!!

 

A: yeh kya hy?? kya pehena hy tumne??

 

Naira: kapde mummaa..(n rolled her eyes)

 

Naira had worn a black t-shirt n navy blue jeans..

 

A: beta tumhe dress peheni chahiye thi..yeh kya hy??

 

N: chill mumma, CCD mein mein Punjabi nay pehene wali..chalo mein nikal ti hu..

 

A: arre Naira, tumhare liye ek currier aaya hy..

 

N: mere liye?? Umm..mein aakar dekh lungi..ok?? byeee!!!! (n left)

 

CCD..(5:25 pm)

 

Naira was sitting outside CCD n was waiting for that champu chintu...

 

N: hadh hy yaar!! 5:28 ho rahe hy..aur yeh ladka abhi tak nay aaya??

 

N: 5:35..?? umm..waiter?? one black coffee..

 

N: tch!!! 5:45?? 15 min late hy yeh ladka..!! papa ne kaha tha k iska khud ka business hy..itna late hy, pata nay business kse sambhalta rahega?? Ufff!!!!

 

N: its 6:00..meri coffee bhi khatam ho gayi..this is the limit...m leaving!!!

 

She turned n saw a guy was standing facing opp to her..

 

N: ummm..excuse me??

 

Guy: (turned) yes???

 

N: wow!! (he's soo handsome, kon hy yeh??)

 

Guy: m sorry..

 

N: actually umm..its ok mujhe laga aap...forget it..

 

Guy: aap kisi ka wait kar rahi hy??

 

N: (sighes) kya batau tumhe?? (in an complaining tone)

 

Guy: q, kya hua?? (he comes n sits on the chair opp Naira)

 

N: umm..(mein ek ajnabi se baat kar rahi hu??)

 

Guy: ohh..m sorry, mein ase aakar aapke saath betha..umm..n m even sorry,  meine aapko ase pucha...

 

N: arre its ok..

 

Guy: are u sure??

 

N: haa..i mean tum ek stranger ho..toh mein tumhare saath apni problems share kar sakti hu..right???

 

Guy: umm..no listen..

 

N: tumhe sirf sunna hy..aur phir bhul jaana hy..

 

Guy: umm..listen..

 

N: tumne pucha tha na kya hua??

 

Guy: haan..

 

N: actually, mein yaha ek ladke se milne aayi hu..i mean papa ne ek rishta choose kiya hy mere liye toh ussi silsiley mein..

 

Guy: wat?? (shocked n chuckled)

 

N: has q rahe ho??

 

Guy: u'll not believe me..mein bhi yaha ek ladki se milne aaya hu..same situation

 

N: really??? Such a coincident!!!

 

Guy: yeah..waise tumhe yaha wait kiye kitna tym hua??

 

N: pure 45 mins se wait kar rahi hu mein..aane do uss chintu ko..muh par hi naa bol dungi.!!!

 

Guy: chintu??

 

N: (embarrassed) umm...haan, uss ladke ka naam chintu hy..(she said awkwardly)

 

Guy: unique name!!!

N: umm..waise tum kab se wait kar rahe ho??

 

Guy: actually mein late hua hu...

 

N: huh??

 

Guy: I mean..forget it..

 

N: ok..

 

Awkward silence...

 

Guy: waise woh ladka hy kon?? I mean karta kya hy??

 

N: umm..mere papa k friend k business partner ka beta hy.."chintu"!! (she said it in a funny tone) huh!! Pata nay papa ne soch bhi kse liye k mein kisi chintu naam k ladke se shaadi karungi!!!

 

Guy: (amazed) q, sirf naam chintu hy isliye tum..

 

N: nooo...arre yaar kse batau?? Chintu ek mota ladka hy, usse dressing sense nay hy, woh chasmish hy, uske muh par pimples ka dukaan hy..yuck!!! plzz mein ase ladke se shaadi nay kar sakti...

 

Guy kept looking at her..

 

N: wat??? Ase q ghur rahe ho??

 

Guy: don't u think tum uss ladke kon under estimate kar rahi ho..??

 

N: not at all!!! U know wat, mein ek Electronic Engineer hu..aur woh, MBA in finance..(smirked) dur-dur tak humara koi mel nay hy..

 

Guy: MBA hy??? wow!!! Toh problem kya hy???

 

N: MBA sunn kart um itna khush q huye??

 

Guy: meine bhi MBA kiya hy.. "finance" mein..

 

N: ohhh...(n was at lost of words)

 

Guy: miss, aap joh koi bhi hy..

 

N: Naira...

 

Guy: nice name..so miss Naira, mujhe lagta hy, aap uss ladke ko kuch jyada hi under estimate kar rahi hy..i mean u may never know..woh abh waise na ho jsa aap bata rahi hy..he may have changed..aur kya pata bina mile tum usse reject kar do aur jab kabhi milogi toh apne faisle par pachtati rahogi..

 

N: tch..kuch bhi!! Meine uss ladke ka photo dekha hy!! n I didnt like him!!!

 

Guy: well, meine jis ladki ka photo dekha tha woh kafhi khubsurat hy..specially uski aankhe..padhi likhi hy..sunna hy woh dil ki bhi bahot achi hy..par..

 

N: par kya???

 

Guy: shayad usse mein pasand nay hu...

 

N: kyaa??? Its not possible...tum itne handsome ho..in fact perfect ho!! Tumhe koi bhi ladki kabhi bhi mana nay kar sakti...

 

Guy: (smiled) ek baat bolu Naira, don't get me wrong..par ek baat share karna chahunga..

 

N: go on!!!

 

Guy: change ur thinking..i mean I know ki tumhe woh ladka pasand nay hy...par tumhe koi right nay hy uski insult karne ki..kya pata woh yaha aaya ho, aur usne tumhari baate sunli ho??? Uske kitna bura laga rahega..u should never insult someone, aur specially tab jab tum usse insaan se mili bhi na ho..u may never know..khubsurti hi humesha sab kuch nay ho sakti..insaan ka dil bada aur achcha hona chahiye..woh kehte hy na, insaan baher se nay, andar se khubsurat hona chahiye..kya pata woh chintu bahar se nay, andar se khubsurat ho??

 

N kept looking at him..

 

Guy: ase kya dekh rahi ho??

 

N: may be u're right..mein hi jyada over react kar gayi..par woh aaya hi nay milne..

 

Guy: kya pata aaya ho??? (wid a sly look)

 

N: tumhe kse pata???

 

Guy: just a guess...

 

N: u're scaring me!!!

 

Guy: (smirked) sorry!! Anyways, tum se milkaaar...

 

N: kya??

 

Guy: kuch nay..hope u meet tht guy.. aur tum shock nay hoti..

 

N: matlab???

 

Guy: kuch nay..u take care, byeee..

 

N: arre sunno,

 

Guy: haa??

 

N: tumhara naam..??

 

Guy: Karthik...Karthik Kapoor!!! (n left)

 

N: wat a guy?? (n was impressed)

 

Naira's home...

 

Naitik: mili usse?? Kse laga?? Toh rishta pakka samjhu??

 

N: papa, woh aaya hi nay..

 

All: kyaaa?? Par...

 

N: kal phirse milungi usse..tab baat kar lungi...

 

A: beta...???

 

Naira went inside her room n got freshen up..n then laid on her bed...

 

N: woh ladka..Karthik..sahi keh raha tha..mujhe bina mile uske bare mein rai (decision) nay banana chahiye thi..pata nay agar woh sach mein aaya rahega toh??? Usne meri baat sunli rahegi toh??? Usse baat kar leni chahiye...par, mere paas no. toh uss chintu ka no. bhi nay hy..kya karu??? Bhai se lu??? Haa..

 

N txtd Naksh to send her chintu's no. in few sec, he txtd her chintu's no.

 

N: mil gaya!!! Par abh karu kya?? Txt ya call?? Pagal hy kya?? Txt kar..

 

And so she txted him..

 

N: hiii...

 

Chintu: hii..(in a sec)

 

N: lagta hy mob lekar hi betha hy...(n she again txtd him) mein Naira...

 

Chintu: jaanta hu..waise, achanak txt kse kiya??

 

N: woh darasal, mujhe puchna tha tum aaj aaye q nay?? Mein tumhara wait kar rahi thi...

 

Chintu: aaya tha..

 

N: (looked at the msg n was shocked) shit!!!

 

N: (txted him) ohhh..toh mile bhi nay?? Pechana nay mujhe?? Late huye the na tum??

 

Chintu: haa..late hua tha thoda..m sorry!!

 

N: its ok..n m sorry too..

 

Chintu: kal mile?? Same place by 5:30...??

 

N: umm..ok..done!! byeee tc...

 

N widout waiting for his ans Naira got up from her bed n saw the currier..

 

N: arre, yeh currier, maa ne khol k nay dekha??? Mein hi dekh leti hu..

 

Naira went n opened the currier..it had a photo n a note inside it..she read the note..

 

Note:

 

Dear Naira,

 

                   Hello, its me Karthik. I mean chintu..chintu mera petname hy..i know it sounds weird..look m really sorry, meri mom ne by mistakely meri college days ki photo tumhe send ki hy..but abh colg khatam huye 3 saal ho chuke..mera current photo meine iss letter k saath bheja hy..good day..

                                                                                                            Karthik..

 

 

N: iska matlab chintu hi Karthik...oh fuc...no..no..no no no no no no no..shit shit shit shit, yeh meine kya kar diya??? Yeh kse ho sakta hy?? kya yaar...par..nai, abh mein chintu I mean..no!! kal mein ghar se bahar hi nay niklungi...

 

Naira sat on the sofa n stared at the photo which was in her hand...

 

N: abh kya karu yaar..?? txt karke sorry bol du??

 

She took her phone n saw a msg..it was from him..

 

N: Karthik ka msg??

 

K: lagta hy aapne abhi tak meine bheja hua letter nay padha..padh liyije...

 

Naira closed her eyes in guilt...n dialed his no.


N: hello???

 

K: (slightly surprised) hmm..bolo..

 

N: m sorry Karthik..mein bahot hi buri ladki hu..bina jaane meine tumhe under estimate kiya..woh bhi tumhare saamne..i mean..GOD!! dekho..i mean dekhiye, plzz..yeh rishta math todiye..i mean aapko pura haq hy yeh rishta aur mujhe reject karne ka..par mujhe ek mauka do..i swear mein..mein..mein..tum kal aao ge na?? I mean aap kal aayenge na??

 

Silence..

 

N: hello?? So gaye kya aap??? Hello??

 

K: u sure tumhara bol k ho gaya hy??

 

N: well...haa..

 

K: hmm..toh kal 5:30 same place..ok??

 

N: par..

 

K: raat bahot ho chuki hy..kal milkar baat karte hy..gn..

 

N: good..good night..(n they hung up)

 

Naira widout eating food goes to sleep..while Karthik is lost in his own thoughts..

 

Karthik's place...

 

Karthik was lost in his own thoughts when is brother Shiv approached him..

 

S: andar aa jau??

 

K: Shiv yaar, tu kab se permission lene laga?? aaja..

 

S: kya hua kya?? Jab se aaya hy room mein hi betha hy..maasi ne tujhe kitne sawaal puche, ek ka bhi jawaab nay diya tune...maasi ne call kiya tha..isliye aaya hu..bata kya hua??

 

K: mom!! (sighes) Shiv, she's not my type..

 

S: matlab??

 

K: aaj mujhe pochne mein thodi si der ho gayi..ok thodi jyada der..alomst 45 mins...mein jse hi CCD pocha, meine usse pechan liya..par usse hii bolne se pehele woh uth gayi aur gusse mein waha se jaane wali thi..jab...

 

S: jab? Kya??

 

K: tch..sunn...(n told him everything...) aur kal meine usse wahi CCD mein ussi tym par phire bulaya hy..aaj woh mujhe reject karne wali thi..par kal mein usse reject karunga...

 

S: par Karthik, u like her, don't u??

 

K: I thought so..par not more..usse sirf ek tall, dark n handsome ladka chahiye..joh ki mein nay hu..mein usse khushiya, pyaar, parivar, dost yeh sab de sakta hu..par usse sirf meri khubsurti chahiye...(he smiled sadly) tch..chod..maa ko bol dusri ladki dekhna chalu kare...

 

S: hmm..(he patted him softly n left)

 

K: Naira Singhania..(n shook his head in a negative way)

 

Next day...

 

Akshara and Naitik had decided to talk to her abt yesterdays fiasco..but only when Naira was ready..n so they didn't forced her or asked her purposely..

 

N: mumma, meri help ki jiye na..

 

A: help???

 

N: haa..

 

A: ksi help??

 

N: woh...mere paas itni saari Punjabi dress hy..toh un mein se konsi pehnu??

 

A: (shocked) Naira, beta tum theek toh ho na?? tum aur Punjabi??? Kya baat hy!!

 

N: mumma plzz..

 

A: acha theek hy..ruko mujhe check karne do...

 

A: haa...yeh wala peheno..

 

N: anarkali??

 

A: haa..tum ismein badi pyaari lagti ho..

 

N: hmm..

 

Naira saw the dress..no doubt it was beautiful one..a red, white n baby pink color anarkali..she even had matching accessories to wear on it..but the problem was, will he accept her???

 

Naira frowned...he'll not!!!!

 

Aftn tym..

 

Akshara was completely confused..it was just 1:30 n this gal had strtd getting ready..something was fishy...

 

N: yaar, yeh earring toh match hi nay kar rahe??? Umm..haa..yeh wale karenge..perfect!!! umm..iss anarkali par yeh heels match karenge..alright..its 2:45..ready hone lagti hu..aaram se 4:00 baj jayenge..

 

Saying so Naira strtd getting ready..

 

It was 3:30 when she got ready...

 

N: yaar, yeh creepy toh nay lag raha na???

 

N: itna tension toh mujhe Engineering karte waqt bhi nay laga tha..jitna aaj lag raha hy.. pata nay Karthik kya decision lene wala hy..par agar reject ho gayi toh galti bhi meri hi thi...

 

Naira kept looking in the mirror..she was looking beautiful..but as Karthik had said.. " insaan baher se nay, andar se khubsurat hona chahiye.." she was sure he was gonna reject her..

 

Finally it was 4:45..

 

Naira checked herself again..did a lil bit of touch up n left...

 

CCD 5:10 pm...

 

N: 20 min pehele aayi hu..agar kisi ne mujhe dekh liya toh samjhega ki mein Karthik se milne k liye desperate hu..kya karu?? Ek kaam karti..thodi der k liye yaha se jaati hu aur 5:30 ko wapis aati hu..haa..(n she was abt to turn when she saw Karthik was sitting were they were sitting yesterday n staring at her...) what the..he's already here?? Aur ase ghoor kyu raha hy??(she thought n went near him)

 

N: h..hii..

 

K: hmmm..

 

N: Karthik...

 

K: tum aaj bhi jaldi ho?? Its 5:15..

 

N: haa woh...

 

K: aaj dress pehni hy?? kal toh normal thi..aaj kya hua??

 

N: (closed her eyes) Karthik, tum jaante ho..kal mein tumse nay, chintu se milne k liye aayi thi..usse reject karne..qki mujhe ghamand tha apne education aur looks ko leke..par jse hi mein kal tumse mili..mujhe realize hua k "insaan baher se nay, andar se khubsurat hona chahiye.." aur shayad mein andar se khubsurat nay hu..m really sorry Karthik!! I know tum mujhe kabhi bhi accept nay karoge..n m fyn wid it..chalo phir, mein chalti hu..pata nay abhi hum phir milenge bhi ya nay..so, all the best for ur future..i hope tum asehi apne business mein kamiyab hote raho..(sighes) byee..(n stood up)

 

K: wait!!!!! Turn around n sit...

 

N: Kar..

 

K: sit..

 

N: ok..(n sat down)

 

K: tumne toh bol diya..aur bina mera rejec..i mean meri baate sunne jaa rahi ho??

 

N: nay..woh mein..

 

K: tumhe pata hy jab meine tumhara photo dekha, I had liked u..mujhe tum acchi lagi thi..maa ne bataya tha k tum ek acchi ladki ho..dil se bhi acchi..mujhe bhi asa hi laga..toh socha mil lu..baat karke dekh ta hu..kya pata mujhe tum sach mein acchi lagne lago..par..tumse mila aur mere perspective hi change ho gayi..i mean..u shocked me..meine jse socha tha tum uske complete opposite nikli...I mean..(sighes) u're right Naira Singhania, meine tumhe yaha reject karne k liye hi bulaya tha...

 

Naira now had tears in her eyes..

 

K: par..

 

N: (looked at him) par, kya??

 

K: kal raat jab tumne mujhe khud se txt kiya..mujhe samajh hi nay aaya k mein tumse kya b aat karu, n so I asked u to meet me here..aur phir tumhara phone aaya...mein tab bhi naraaz tha..isliye jyada baat na karte huye mein phone rakh diya...par tumhare call aane k baad I realized k, shayad tum itni bhi buri nay ho..balki ek spoilt brat ho jiske parents ne usse bachpan se sirf pamper kiya..par agar tumhe samjho toh tum woh baat dhyaan se sunti ho aur karti ho..meine tumhe samjhane ka kaam kiya..aur tum samajh gayi..tumne bina jaane ki chintu hi mein hu, mujhe txt kiya aur sorry kaha..i was surprised.. shayad tum itni bhi buri nay ho..

 

N: matlab??

 

K: tum acchi ho..

 

N: toh iska matlab tum..

 

K: m ready to give u another chance..

 

N: really??

 

K: uh huh!!

 

N: tqsm!!!

 

K: its ok..umm, waiter, ek black coffee aur ek cappuccino..

 

N: tumhe kse pata ki mein black coffee piti hu??

 

K: jaanta hu..

 

N: ohhh..ok..

 

N they chatted for a while..Soon, KaIra got to know each other really well..while Naira instantly fell for him..Karthik had liked her..n soon they were tied in the pure relationship known as "MARRIAGE"...

 

                                                      THE END...

 

Hope u liked it..do comment n hit the like button..n ignore the spelling n grammatical mistakes...

Edited by anilalibra - 2016-07-12T07:19:03Z
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Posted: 2016-07-11T09:43:41Z
wow it is so nice dear
loved it
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Posted: 2016-07-11T11:59:34Z
so cute..different from the show storyline.keep posting more loved it Embarrassed
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Posted: 2016-07-11T23:35:01Z
It is just awesomeWinkClap
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Posted: 2016-07-11T23:35:42Z
Please do continue their journey till marriageSmileThumbs Up
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Posted: 2016-07-12T00:39:04Z
It's really a good os Embarrassed but at one point where she is texting him,  you have written her name sanyukta, you might want to edit it Tongue
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Posted: 2016-07-15T11:12:47Z
so cute..different from the show storyline.keep posting more loved it
I luv kartik naira
Update soon
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