SiRa Lakshmila Bharma Shkriti MegNa SS ( chap 8 page 51 )

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#361

Originally posted by: mandy001
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Someone beat Srutha to a Res😆

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Mahi

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#362

So the training has begun, yayy!

Excited for what happens next! Keep going!

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#363

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Someone beat Srutha to a Res😆

😎 no clap plz. 😆

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#364

BHAIYYA BHAIYYA BHAIYYA !!!!! 😊

How you manage to put up such stupendous updates I dont understand.. I mean they are once in a while but they are worth all the wait ! 🤗

Wonderful part Bhaiyya! We are truly all fans here ! 😃😳😆

The beginning from the part where Lakshman talks about how he will protect Shatrughan to the part where Sita and Yagnavalka converse, it is just amazing !! 😊

I am really really amazed Bhaiyya! A true lesson is hidden in each of your parts ! 👏

I have said this again and again, but thank you for writing this so much ! 😳😃

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Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: SenAnu
BHAIYYA BHAIYYA BHAIYYA !!!!! 😊

How you manage to put up such stupendous updates I dont understand.. I mean they are once in a while but they are worth all the wait ! 🤗

Wonderful part Bhaiyya! We are truly all fans here ! 😃😳😆

The beginning from the part where Lakshman talks about how he will protect Shatrughan to the part where Sita and Yagnavalka converse, it is just amazing !! 😊

I am really really amazed Bhaiyya! A true lesson is hidden in each of your parts ! 👏

I have said this again and again, but thank you for writing this so much ! 😳😃

Thanks a lot Anu 🤗

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Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Thanks a lot Anu 🤗

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Janaki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#367

Finally I have caught up with your fic, Shivam, and I love it!

The development of the story has been done really well, and I love the interactions between the characters.

The four brothers are so cute together, as are the four sisters. The subtlety in which you write their differences is amazing.

And their banter is hilarious. 😆

My favorite scene from this chapter was Lord Parashuram seeing Sitaji and recognizing Ma Lakshmi in her, and waiting for his successor to make an appearance. 😳

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#368

wonderful updates shivam..
all leaving for training even meghnath..
princes talk..
then sita urmi scene..
guru's talk about mata lakshmi.and Vishnu g...
beautiful... 👏

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