Ishveer FF 'NEW BEGNING'(chapter 16 pg 22) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: o_gudiya

Hii hafsa.

Welcome to the forum once again..😛
Nice start dear..
Do continue..👍🏼
Thanks for the pm...
Take care and keep smiling..😳😳

Thank U Dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: priyanka98

Hii Hafsa. Welcome to the forum. I liked ur beginning. Do continue it and pm me whenever u update it.😊


Thank U Dear For Incouraging Me
i Do Pm u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

So I started my first Chapter

CHAPTER:1

Ranveer is sitting on a beautifull horse who was decorated

Like a Groom After sitting On it Ranveer is Look Like a Handsome Princes Who is come to get His Princses

She Get Down From Horse and Slowly Going To Enter in Vaghela House Where Baa is Waiting for With A Thali

As Ranveer Enter

Baa:Aao Mara Dikra

Ranveer Touch Baa's feet baa give him Blessings

Than Chetali Said

Kaki:Baa Apne Son in law ka Naak To pakre

Baa:Reva Day ...Mera Damad Tu Hai hi Lakhon Main Phle Hi Hmara Itna Khayal Rakhta Hai

Kaki :Baa Phr Bhi it's a Rasam

Amba said Something in Ranveer Ear After That

Ranveer Get down His Nose infront of Baa Carese His cheek

Disha:(in jealousy) Wah Baa Log Sahe Kehte Hain Insaan Ki Fitrat Kabhi Nahe Badalti ...Ap Phle Bhe PAisu Ko Pojti Aaj Bhe...Ye Wohi Ranveer jo kbhi Hmara Driver Tha or AP k Mun Is k Liye Galiyoon K ilwa Kuch Nahe Niklta Tha Or aj Jab Who is Ghar ka owner hai Ap us k tukro pe Pal Rahe Hai to Ap k Mun Se us k Liye Phool Jhar RAhe HAin

Ranveer enter and sit in the Mandap ...After 15 Mint Pandit Ji Done All The Pooja And Said To Baa

Pandit:Kaniya Ko Bulaye

Baa Said To Parul And Disha

Baa:Jaao Ja k Ishani Ko Leke Aao

Parul and Krisha Came in Ishani Room Where Ishani Is Happily Sitting on couch

Parul:chalo Bhabi Apka Bulawa Ayaa

Chale Bhaiya Aapka Be sabri Se Intizar Kar Rahe Hain

Ishani cmae from Stairs Her one Side is ishani And other Side is Krisha ...Ishani IS look Like a Princesss In beautifull Red And White Lehnga ( You can imagine their Same wedding Dresses

I)shani Came at Mandap Slowly Slowly

When Ranveer Saw Ishani He Lost In Ishani's Beauty who look More Beautifull than Other Days...Ranveer is Lost in His Beauty

Ranveer: (in toughts) You Are Soo Sweet And Innocent Ishani

Your Heart Is soo Pure Which Is Visible On Your Face Today

Ishani Look At Ranveer he is Looking A Handsome Hunk

Ishani is Admiring Him

Ishani: (in toughts ) You Are Very Kind Ranveer ..You Have A big Heart which is full of Love ... I m soo blessed that I m going to become Your Wife

Chapter end on ishani and Rnaveer Happy Faces😊😊😊

Note:Sorry if i do Any Mistake

Edited by Hafsa789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Hi Hafsa dear
a beautiful start loved the concept
And of course you can continue the story dear

And coming to chapter 1 nice one dear
loved the way Ishveer admiring each other
so our cute couple marriage is going to happen
waiting for the next
update soon 😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Hii hafsa..
Cute and nice chapter..
Liked the way they are admiring each other..
So the marroage is going to hapen..
Take care and keep smiling..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi Hafsa dear
a beautiful start loved the concept
And of course you can continue the story dear

And coming to chapter 1 nice one dear
loved the way Ishveer admiring each other
so our cute couple marriage is going to happen
waiting for the next
update soon 😉



Thanks ALot Sakshi You Praise my Writting it means alot to me
Today I m wrritung just becoz of ur Effort
Thank u
Glad U like the Way ishveer is Admiring
Edited by Hafsa789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: o_gudiya

Hii hafsa..

Cute and nice chapter..
Liked the way they are admiring each other..
So the marroage is going to hapen..
Take care and keep smiling..


Yes The Marrige is goung to happen
Happy That u like athe way ishveer admriring eachother
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Hi hafsa good start. ...dis S really cute d way you described them s simply awesome 👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Amazing start and amazing update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Hii Hafsa dear. it's a cute chapter. I liked the way that ishveer r admiring each other.. Thanks for pm. Waiting for ur next update. 😊

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