Amazing!!! Just loved it. The way you write I could actually feel what they were going through. Felt really bad for the both of them. Amazing work, waiting for more of your stuff.
It was beautiful as always at the end atleast Shravan realises how it feels to held accountable for something you didn't mean to do was amazing now he knows how Sumo must have felt and life has indeed come to full circle and you can turn it into a two shot or do another os in continuation of this os to get rid of your angst feelings 😆
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