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its amazing👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Trinaa

its amazing👏 👏 👏

first time i have read a raavan-mandodari os, its beautiful⭐️  👍🏼

i loved how u described everything, her pain, her love👏 😳 👏

especially the last part was very good, how she bid bye to her husband👏 ⭐️ 😳

Rainbow 😆

Unres..
This was wonderfully unique.First of all a totally different theme,and that it was pure love,not justification of one another's love.I have so much to say but can't.The words,the flashbacks,the sequence goes on beautifully.
Ravan's Mandodari❤️ Loved the way you brought out both of them's internal affection at places.
The last lines yet undoubtedly were amazingly kept.

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Unres..
This was wonderfully unique.First of all a totally different theme,and that it was pure love,not justification of one another's love.I have so much to say but can't.The words,the flashbacks,the sequence goes on beautifully.
Ravan's Mandodari❤️ Loved the way you brought out both of them's internal affection at places.
The last lines yet undoubtedly were amazingly kept.

Wonderful !! This was all over on a different view. I liked the way u used the ideas and the emotions. 

Originally posted by: silent_dreamer

Wonderful !! This was all over on a different view. I liked the way u used the ideas and the emotions. 

Thank you so so much! Glad you liked the emotions! :)

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4652360

Was going around the forum when I caught up with this one. Its wonderful Anu! 👏 Such a marvelous writer you are! Splendid! Your story on Raavan and Mandodari is the first in their fiction, I guess. 😆 

Originally posted by: ---Anu---

Was going around the forum when I caught up with this one. Its wonderful Anu! 👏 Such a marvelous writer you are! Splendid! Your story on Raavan and Mandodari is the first in their fiction, I guess. 😆 

thanks for checking this out!!