Aarya ss DARK RELATION Ch 4 On pg 5 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Jodhu

Oh I am so sorry I am really stuck up with it I dont know hw to proceed further on it as whatever idea i come up with, it either seems illogical or i end up with a scene which was already written by someone or almost the same thing as show.so i got irritated with that i end up at my recent works. I'll keep trying on it and for that i need some distractions.so sry though.

okay i undrstnd sis. If i may suggest my idiotic ideas. Maybe do Yash pov after discovering about Aartiji signing the divorce papers or his side of the story why he acted like a woman in labor.

What to say. Wow Jodhu you went all the way. Well 😡😡 I really don't know how you come back from that horrible horrible action that Yash did. The pain of loosing one love does not justify this heinous crime. He destroyed his wife and himself too. He deserve to be flog for this or worse. 
It was really well describe Jodhu cause I could see the scene in my mind like a movie. I want to say brillant chapter in all his devastation way. I really am anxious to see where you are going with this, how will Aarti recover, how witll the family justify this, what will be Yash penance; but so far so good.

Originally posted by: sass8

What to say. Wow Jodhu you went all the way. Well😡😡 I really don't know how you come back from that horrible horrible action that Yash did. The pain of loosing one love does not justify this heinous crime. He destroyed his wife and himself too. He deserve to be flog for this or worse.
It was really well describe Jodhu cause I could see the scene in my mind like a movie. I want to say brillant chapter in all his devastation way. I really am anxious to see where you are going with this, how will Aarti recover, how witll the family justify this, what will be Yash penance; but so far so good.

i have to agree with you Sassy Sauce please continue soon.

I took the risk and read the update. Well written bringing out the worst of Yash. He still went back to his lady love and she faked having found a young replacement for him in order to make him leave her house and give his marriage a chance.

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

i have to agree with you Sassy Sauce please continue soon.

Edited by Fandu - 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Fandu

I agree with Sass8. How does one justify this heinous act and what will Aarti do now. Her life has been destroyed by the one person who should have protected her. Very well written. Curious to find out what will happen next. Update soon.

Jod di everyone is curious about the next updt so plz cont sn. The sooner the better

Oh my!!! am so scared to even comment

omg yash what he did to aarti

This is really disgusting yash 

Dark Relation indeed! the title is put in sharper light! oh my word Dhu-Dhu I was so shocked when I read this! then I got so indignant and angry on Aarti's behalf. Yash is so immature and a brute to boot! he whined that he was forced to marry her and ran back to his so called love, then his eyes got "opened" and he took his anger out on Aarti. who the hell does he think he is! he was the one who told her he did not want her and then he reacts so violently when he grants him his wish! nothing excuses such disgusting behaviour!