IshRaRu OS: The Time to Heal (June 8) - Page 3

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi

It is so beautiful

loved reading it

Originally posted by: gargpoo

Ohh girl...this is superb...
The way u described raman's turmoil...amazing..
V will nvr get to c raman's monologue in the show..
Atleast u gave us this masterpiece..
Trio r broken...they need healing...its time to heal each other...
Loved it!!

Originally posted by: sweet.Aman

Awesom...
Brilliantly written 👏

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

brilliant..👏

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

Amazing OS... 

I was as if I was feeling his real emotions...! 

Originally posted by: MissRight

I'm speechless...

Originally posted by: Divek-ishra

Brilliant dear..

Well written..

Loved it

Originally posted by: charminggenie

Ah! If only they took your words to the screen but then the words create a far greater emotion.

I love you went with his POV, it sets up nicely, because he is the observant and yet needs to see how it pains out from his POV. Guilt balanced by regret and anguish. 

Lovely. 

Originally posted by: abcz123456

wonderful portrayal of characters feelings.

please do update dafa ho jao.

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Awesome

Thanks 4 The PM