Ek Chhoti Si Love Story- a shraman os - Page 3

Awesome update Priyam sweetheart
Loved it a lot
Especially the dance sequence
I really want another dance sequence in the show cause the first one was a bit weird as per Shravan's behavior in the reunion party
Thanks a lot for the pm 😳

So I finally read it!

Beautiful OS dear..
Love it...

Originally posted by: Eeshaal

priyam amazing story , you are one of the talented writers of this forum . Read it twice with a huge grin on my face 😆

Thank u so much 😳
U guys r amazing keep on motivating me

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Amazing OS Priyam!🤗

Loved all the feels... Its so perfect! You're getting better and better, its really a pleasure to read your stuff.

My fav was

The Apni Didi Apna Bhaiyya Part

Dabboo was way too cute

The Dance... Drooling over!😳

Poor Shravan, can't help but worrying about her! Wonderfully penned⭐️

A small request, if you could complete your last line and write a continuation OS to this, would love to read what you think of 'Destiny' for Shraman...😉

Keep writing!

Love

Mahi❤️

Mahi meri jaan ur comment made my day 🤗
Ur comments helped me a lot to improve my writing. Thank u sooo much
I'll try to write a sequel for this one 😊

Originally posted by: Vishakha2092

Hi priyam!!..

It's lovely!!!..

Well I sooo want to see them dancing on ijazat

It is one of my favorite these days!!...

Hello 😊
Thanks dear
Ijajat is a lovely song and i can only imagine shraman in it 😳 ..its perfect for them

Originally posted by: -AnnieQueen-

Awesome update Priyam sweetheart
Loved it a lot
Especially the dance sequence
I really want another dance sequence in the show cause the first one was a bit weird as per Shravan's behavior in the reunion party
Thanks a lot for the pm 😳

Tysm sweety

Originally posted by: orion23

So I finally read it!

Priyam dude! This was mind blowing...!

Everything was so dreamy

The song you chose, perfect for these two!

You are gifted indeed..

Please do continue this... I'd love to read your version of the future😳

Thanks for the PM😛

Well I'm flattered 😳
Thank u so much. I am glad that u liked the story.
I'll update the sequel soon

Originally posted by: AngellaAbhi

Just one word for it..."wow..,.."...it was amazing...pls pls pls continue it yaar.,...thankyou so so much for pm me,...:):):)

Tysm abhi 😊

^ Aww Priyam! That's so sweet of you!