OS - BALH Anniversary special. PART 2 UPDATED ON PG 5 - Page 5

Part 2

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wow wow just wow👏
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Its superb pihu's wish part is just amazing
you wrote very nicly loved the style you write in bracket
its classy 😉

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Ram's anger
Nicly penned down


The Best Part for me the jealousy Yaar it was written so good Miss sharma was just amazing


And th end Lol LOL remind me 12th March 2012



But the love scene was so hot to handle yet romantic



Please do continue Soon😭

Edited by Janilover - 7 years ago

Beautiful n romantic..update..
pls continue the story its really nice..

Very nice one.. plz do continue

Priya madly love Ram and so is he but still wanna sacrifice her love for the person she got betrayal and their friends Neha Vik too wanna that instead of sacrficing they reunite soon and Nuts too has talked sense. But the major stroke was of Peehu who along with Kush wants her parents together. The final stroke of Rajat but this lead the union of two soul who met after longing of five years. I wish u continue the Os as wanna know how RaYa will face the problem in form of Ayesha

Read the OS in one go and damn it was fantastic, loved it so far, the way you write up Raya's emotion, the dialogues and off course Raya's love scene was far too good yaar, maza agaya parh k...please write more 😊

just brilliant what i can say
Sorry for late .. but u know why i am late here .
read the 2 parts again..
and if possible pls continue it dear. its superb

Hey Leena

Originally posted by: peeyara

Hey Leena

I am sorry

I read the os and was in impression that I have commented it(mujhe khush fehmi jaldi hojati hai 😆)

To be honest, I like stories where reader are left to imagine what happened so i am ok if u dont continue

but then I even dont mind reading full story where every aspect is covered so i wont mind if you continue it showing how ayesha was thrown out of home

 u know u confused me.. 😕
first i thought .. u dont want more..😭
Then . u r with me😃

Mam aapko kya chahiye.. 😆

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

 u know u confused me.. 😕
first i thought .. u dont want more..😭
Then . u r with me😃

Mam aapko kya chahiye.. 😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

i dont know what i want 😕

#ForeverConfusedSoul

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so jao bache .. u need it very badly 🤣