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I love how your stories seem to go with the flow..
There is no sign of being "forced"..
I think i said it before, but will say it again, you truly are a talented writer.
This one is definitely something I would have loved to see on the show. With the way you write, all these ideas and scenes seem so feasible, like they could be a part of the show. I ca imagine the scene playing out in my head.
The "are you pregnant" outburst made me laugh so much! The progression of their proximity was so natural as well, your writing never seems forced.
I am going to assume you're in the medical field because the way you explained and diagnosed this problem seems very legitimate!
Aw, the "very caring husband", and he didn't correct the doctor. How sweet! And I love that you brought back Pushpa!
Shravan is so caring, I love him in this story! And the time frame you wrote this Shravan in was after the "date" and before his admittance so I can totally imagine him like this during that period.
This was so good Anjali! A definite "read again".
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