ShraMan Three-Shot: Do Something [Complete] - Page 11

CHAHNA

@miss_writer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

wow... The last part is stupendous dear

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Mrina

@minakrish

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

OH MY GOODNESS!

This, i swear, is one of the best of your work! Specially in part 2 where you wrote in Shravan's POV... His emotions were so beautifully worded and I could feel every bit of it. ❤️

Loved that Sumo was so upfront and told him instead of waiting for him to realize. I mean.. sometimes this man reminds me of Asad Ahmed Khan just coz Shravan Malhotra is equally emotionally challenged! 😆

You are a sheer genius woman! 🤗 Brilliant work! 👏

Love you. ❤️

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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

#103

oh my god

you write so beautifully. the scenes flashed infront of my eyes as i read them. The way you brought both of their thoughts to life and also using all the scenes that they have had on screen. so freaking awesome.

i love the emotion you put into it and the way u portrayed it without making it way too dramatic. kudos.

P.S. i know nothing is perfect but that ending definitely was.

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hm2630

@hm2630

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

This is so beautiful - beyond words! 👏 Totally loved it! You are an AMAZING writer!

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ekta15

@ekta15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

All the three chapters were fabulous. The confession part was the best one, I have ever read or seen in my life. This last chapter is I am going to reread many times ,I ma sure . It had the material I admire - flow of feelings + their last exchange of words i.e. bickering of couples.As said, from oblivious to smooth was quick but still felt so much in flow that it didn't felt odd but obvious.

thnx again for sharing your work and talent.

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7676

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#106

Great work...this is one of the best fan fictions I have ever read and on Shraman,oh my...juz perfect!!!!Please do more FFs on them!!!!!Lurved it to the core...

Cheers,

Jassie

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