"Blissful Life" : ShraMan Fan Fiction [Completed]

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Posted: 7 years ago
~Index~

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20




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Chapter 1


"Oh please! Sumo...ye aise nehi hota...ise aise pakad ke aise kholte hai..."

Shravan snatches the packet of wheat from Suman's hand which she was trying to open. He opens it for her. She smiles.

"Accha tumhe itna kuch aata hai toh khana bhi tum hi bana lo!", She teases him.

"Khana banana toh nehi par...", Shravan comes closer to Suman.

"Pyaar karna bohot acche se aata hai",he gives a naughty smile.

"Tum kahi bhi shuru ho jate ho..hatoo!", She pushes him away getting shy.


Shravan smiles.




The food is ready. ShraMan sit to eat, but then lights go off.

"Crap!! I don't believe this! Load shedding!!!", Shravan gets irked.

Suman lights an candle.

"Chill!, wese toh bohot romance ki soojti hai humesha! Ab?? Can't u see? Nature ne humein candle light dinner karne ka mauka diya hai", She tries to cheer his mood up.

"Gosh! Sumo, you're so filmy!", Shravan says smiling.

After dinner, Suman goes to kitchen to wash dishes. Shravan is helping her.

Then Suman prepares the bed to sleep. Shravan enters the room.

"Hahhh!! Ye kya? Tumne bed ke beecho beech ye border kyun bana diya?", Shravan is surprised.

"Woh is liye because mujhe tum par zara bhi bhadosa nehi hai. U know...", Suman smirkes.

"Par..", Shravan feels hopeless.

"Koi par war nehi, chupchap so jaao", Suman teases him.

Shravan makes a sad face. They both are laying on the bed turning their faces against each other. Suman turns & looks at Shravan. He is sleeping peacefully. She smiles, removes the border of pillow between them. Goes near him & places her head on his shoulder hugging him.


"I love you, Mr. Khadoos Malhotra!!", she whispers & sleeps.

Shravan smiles as he's not sleeping actually.




The next morning, Suman wakes up.

"Isse pehle ki Mr. Khadoos jaag jaye aur taunt marna shuru kare..mujhe ye border phirse banani hogi", Suman says slowly.

She tries to sit but he holds her more tight & closer. Suman is surprised.

"I love you, Mrs. Jhalli Malhotra!", he whispers in her ears the way she whispered last night.

She blushes.

"Tum jaag rahe the?", Suman says slowly.

"Of course! mera irada toh jaagne ka hi tha, but meri biwi ne humare 1st wedding night mein hi hum dono ke beech ek border daal diya kya kare!!", he teases her.

Suman blushes. He pulls her closer.



My 1st ShraMan OS here!
Tell me should I continue or not?
Suggestions are most welcomed
😆 Edited by Sadia.Ritu - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
What a blissful life
Naughty Shravan and sumo
Really excited to read further
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awww it's lovely...continue soon
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Awww how cute..plzz continue
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Pls add English in bracket yaar.don't understand hindhi.Thk u
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: JCJS

Pls add English in bracket yaar.don't understand hindhi.Thk u



Opsss ok I'll add subtitles next time 😆
Wrote in hindi to make it look natural.. otherwise I'm not good at hindi, cause I am bengali.Edited by Sadia.Ritu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was really good 
I loved every bit of it 
Do continue soon 
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wow
super cute
and super romantic
totally love it
continue soon
please
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Very cute! Would like to see where this goes?
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Hey bhai that was super cute Edited by Rikta97 - 7 years ago