ISHRA FF RUHI KI ISHIMA(updated part 32 on pg 105)

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RUHI KI ISHIMA


Prologue:


This is the story from the present track after the fake accident of ruhi

HOW WILL U FEEL WHEN THE PERSON U LOVED ACCUSED U?
HUMILIATED IN THE WAY ONCE SOCIETY HUMILIATED?
THE SAME PERSON WHO HAD SUPPORTED U HAS CRUSHED UR SOUL?
THE SAME PERSON ABONDED U?

Tum ma kehalane ka layaak nahi ho maa ki naam per thappa ho

Sabit kardiya tum ne ki sautheli maa sautheli rahegi

Mathlabi ho tum, mouka milla tho kya kiya apna baccha chuna na tum ne

Tum duniya ek pehle maa ho jo jindhagi bar is bhoj say jeeyegi ki usne apni masum bacchii ki
mauth ka karan ho

Manuhus ho tum, jaha jathi ho thaklif sath lekar jathi ho

Jab thak tum meri jindagi nahi ho bale may apni bacchi ki gareeb nahi hu lekin meri bacchi zindha thi

Jab se tum aayi ho meri zindhagi me thak-li-fe anna suru ho gayi he

Kamal ke actress ho tum, ek bacchi se maa bulvake maa nahi banjavogi tum, are andaar se tum vahi baanj ishitha ho tum

Tum maa bane layak nahi ho, meri bacchi ko ka gayi tum ne

Tum se zyaada mathlabi aur non deserving aurat nahi he

Aaj ke baad na mera ghar mae, na meri zindagi mae tumhara koyi jagha nahi he

BEFORE I KILL U GETOUT OF MY HOUSE AND GETOUT OF MY LIFE



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INDEX

Part 1_pg 1

Part 2_pg 1

Teaser-1_pg 3

Part 3_pg 3

Part 4_pg 6

Part 5_pg 8

Teaser-2_pg 9

Part 6_pg 10

Part 7_pg 12

Part8_pg 15

Part9_pg 17

Teaser_pg 19

Part 10_pg 20

Part 11_pg 22

Part 12_pg 25

Part 13_pg 28

Part 14_ pg 31

Part 15_pg 33

Part 16_pg36

Teaser-4_pg 38

Part 17_pg 40

Part 18_pg 43

Part 19_pg 46

Part 20_pg 50

Part 21_pg 53

Part 22_pg 58

Teaser-5_pg 61

Part-23_pg 63

Part-24_pg 68

Part 25_pg 71

Part 26_pg 74

Part 27_pg 78

Part 28_pg 83

Part 29_pg 89

Part 30_pg 95

Part 31_pg 101

Part 32_pg 105

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PART 1


Near the cliff

After the confrontation with raman ishitha left hosiptal and came to the end of the cliff
to end the sorrow, to end the pain, to end the guilt, to end the betrayl
TO GO CLOSE TO HER SOUL,HER ROOH RUHI

Remainding the happy moments with her daughter,son,husband and family a smile came on the
face of ishitha and the very next moment her smile is replaced with pain given by her
husband, guilt of not able to save her daughter.

Ishitha took a deep breath and the picture of accident of ruhi came infort of her eyes
she closed her ears to stop to hear the acusiations thrown from raman
she screamed in top of her voice and colapsed on the ground.

ISHITHA POV

After colapsing on the she cried her heart

I: eye kya kiya mene, mene apni hi hatho se apni bachhi ka moth ka karan ban gaya
eye mene kya kardiya. sahi kaha raman ne mene hi apni roo ko mara he, mae acchi maa nahi hu,
acchi bevi nahi hu, nahi acchi bahu hu, nahi achi beti hu.

Closing her eyes

Ruhi tum mere zindagi ho, agar tum hi nahi ho tho mere vajudh kya he, tum nahi ho tho kuch be nahi.

ishitha stood from the ground and came to the edge of the cliff

I: tumhara bina mera jeene ka kya matlab hai roo kya matlab he tumhari ishima tume kabi akela
nahi chodegi, arahi hu ruhi mae arahi hu tumhari ishima tumari pas arahi hai RUHI-KI-ISHIMA

closing her and remainsing ruhi ishitha jumped from the cliff

far from the cliff ashok and suraj say the sucide attempt of ishitha.


In Bhalla House

In Bhalla house the environment of the is very gloomy everyone has sat in front of potrait of ruhi
Even Iyer's are also present there to console Bhalla's, no one knows where is ishitha
raman is seated in corner of the hall and remainsing the happyy moments of ruhi.

suddenly cold wind blew in Bhalla house and the potrait of ishitha in hall fell on the
ground and broken into pieces.Seeing this Amma doesnt feel good she went near mihika and said

A:mihika tum ne ishu ko dekha mera m-an bahut gabara raha he mihika, vo teek hogi hi na?

M:Peeriamma app gabrav math mene acp ko bol diya he vo akka ko leke atha he hoga

hearing this raman interupted them and shouted at them

R: Vo iss ghar mae kabhi nahi ayegi, meri bacchi ko mara he tumahri akka ne vuse ab iss ghar se abb koyi rishta nahi

Thoshi(T): shanth ho ja puthaar iss me ishitha ki kya galthi hai tu kyu vuse kasurvath tehrarahi ho vo ruhi ki maa he raman, socho vuse kithi taklif hote hogi

R:Nahi maa vo ruhi maa nahi hai southeli maa he aur vo sutheli maa kehlane layaak be nahi he

Romi(Ro):Bai plz shanth ho jayai, app guse me ho plzzz...thaaap

raman has slapped romi

R: Tum he sare phassad ka jad ho , sab tum hari vaja se hi huva tum kisse kaam ka nahi nikama ho tum
agar tum hosipatal mae savadan rahi hoti ye sab nahi hotha

Ro: Bai aap haad par rahe ho aap apni...taaap

again raman has slapped romi and with this slap romi lost his cool and he also started fight with raman
all the family members interupted and splitted them from each other

R: kya hai aukkad he thumahar ha koon ho tum mera haad tai karneki, yaad rak aaj bii tum mere hi ghar me reh rahe ho

Ro: teke bai me aaj isi vakth iss ghar ko chod ke ja raha hu me ghar thabi avungha jab me apne bal pe kuch kardikavungha.

M:ek min romi jeeju app plz ase kyu kar rahe ho app, in sab mai romi aur akka ka kya galthi he, jo bhi huva vo ek hatsa tha

R:(grintting his teeth)nahi e sab tumhari akka ki vaja se hi huva tha, kha tha mene police ko math bulav lekin vusne meri ek nahi suni ajj vusike karan meri ruhi muje chood kar chale gayi.

hearing the acussation against her akka mikhika replied in same tone

M: app samjthe kya ho apne aap ko jab sehar ka ACP aur commondo officers kuch nahi kar payi hai tho app akele
kya karletha police vaha hone ki vaja se aaj apki dusri beti sahi salamath he ye math buliye aap, kisi pe ilsam lagana asan he jeeju agar app akka ke jagha hotha kya kathe hai app boliye.

raman was about to reply to mihika then the door opened and ACP entered the Bhalla house.
seeing him coming raman turned his back to ACP expecting ISHITHA follow him but the next words ACP delivered has shaken the earth from his feet

ACP: ISHITHAJI NE PHADI SE KUD KAR SUSIDE KAR LIYA HE

raman left the place and went to his room depriving without any emotions on his face

-----x end of part 1 x-------


Precap:Leap of 7-years...
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Hi guys this my first writing so plz if there are errors I'm sorry
U may think that the story is as in show but no from next parts my storyline will be different from the show thank you

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Wow nice start do continue...

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*Warning guys its really gona very long update

PART 2
note:age of adi&ruhi in this story was 9&15

AFTER 7-YEARS IN BHALLA HOUSE

After the tragic incident in bhalla house every thing changed in the family.
Senior bhallas always stay aloof for there loss of the daugter and daughter in law of the house and hurted by the fact that there son was not happy in his life

Simi has joined hands with her brother in business and helping him and content in her life with her daughter but always miss ruhi and her bhabi Ishitha.

No one in bhalla house know were romi was he has left his family on very moment after knowing that his dear bhabi was no more but he has filed divorce from sarika got divorced with her.

Adi after knowing facts he is angry with his father but never left his father side due to love for his ISHIMA, he often misses his ISHIMA and sister ruhi and became the engima of his ISHIMA. Completed his MBAan joined his father in his business

Raman was back to the square one in angry man who has no concern for anyone in the family except for his daughter PIHU(7-years old)

Pihu bhalla is is the youngest member of bhalla parivaar. very calm, soft, understanding and intelligent for her age look similar as RUHI in looks and in behaviour as her maa ISHITHA. Now she is the soul reason for happiness in bhalla parivaar.She was told that her mother died in an accident . She never got a chance to see her mother but always earns for mother's love. Crime partner with his brother.

IYER'S HOUSE

After the lossing there daughter and grand daughter Amma's health was effected to look after her vandu and bala stayed with iyers,vandu and bala stood as support for the iyers.

Mihika resigned for her position in raman's company and joined an MNC and working as senior Marketing manager

Sharavan being only child in iyers house rose confident teen but always misses his bestfriend ruhi and chitti Ishitha. He is another brother for pihu who is protective towards pihu but never fights with pihu which he once used to do with ruhi.

Even after the tragic incident the family bond between Iyers nd Bhalla's has not changed but Iyer's always maintain there distance from raman as they believe that there daughter has taken this decision becoz of him.
And even Raman also maintained distance with Iyers and also warned Iyer's not relieve any thing about Ishitha to pihi

kids Adi,pihu and sharavan always stick together and promised with eachother to never keep any secret.

Shagun-Manoj were married and blessed with 5-years old son ruhaan.
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Today is very special day for both iyers and bhallas because today is the birthday of there lovely ISHITHA

every year on this day both iyers and bhallas go to murugan temple and pray for peace for ISHITAS soul
even pihu will attend temple to pray for her mother, every year on the Adi and Pihu used to go to orphan home (SHANTHIVAN) to spend time with kids as there ISHIMA love kids very much.

But coming to Raman even he pretends he doesnt care for ISHITHA he always feel guilty and feel alone on this day he will spend his time in old bhalla house were he has found true love from his wife and daughter but lost both them on the sameday.

IN SHANTHIVAN's garden

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Pihu-p

Adi and Pihu are sitting a corner of the garden both are in deep thoughts

P: (pihu looking at sky) Adi bhaiya agar aj maa yaha hoti to vo mujse pyaar karegi kya?

A: (stunned with her question) pihu tum ase kyu keh rahi ho agar maa aaj yaha hoti tho vo thumse bahut pyaar karti.

P: par bhaiya wo hame chode ke kyu chale gayi patha he jab be mae school jatha hu na sab ke maa athe hae pur maa kabi mere pass nahi thi, phir mene ajj taak unki chehra bi nahi dekha ,jub bi papa ko maa ke bare poochu tho upset ho jathe hae aur aap muje kabi unki tashvir bi nahi dikaye kyon baiya kyo papa maa se ithana kaati he bathavo na baiya(phiu quesioned with teary eyes)

A: esi baath nahi chutki papa maa se bahut pyaar karthe he paar jab se maa chale gayi vo udas ho gaye hae isilye papa kabi bi maa ke bare mae nahi poochte samji

P: paar...(cutting her in middle)

A: chalo aaj me tume ek kass jagha lekar jathahu mamma ka favorite jagha

hearing this pihu's face litted up

P: sachi bhaiya aap muje mamma ke favorite jagha le jayege

A: ha pihu le chalungi

Adi and Pihu left Shanthivan in there car towards there destination

Adi pulled the car infront of a garden named ISHRA. ADI held Pihu hand and lend Pihu in to the center of the garden which was an white lillies garden were white lillies were surrounded with red roses and other crotten plants.

adi to pihu

A: patha he pihu mamma ko white lillies bahut pasand tha iss liye papa ne mamma ko 8 saal pehle mamma ko ye garden apne birthday par gift diya tha.

P: (pihu was became very happy with the information provided from Adi) sachhi...!

A: Ha pihu avo mere sath (saying he took pihu near a tree) Pihu patha hae ye jo tree hae na is ko mene mamma ne aur ru...(he remembered he cannot speak about ruhi)

P: aur koon bhaiya

A: koi nahi pihu ye tree ko mene aur mamma milkar laghaya tha patha he tab mamma ne mujse kya kha

P: kya kaha

A: vunhone kaha ke agar hum me sey kissi ne kissi ko miss kiya ho tho iss paed kae pass akar iss ke niche akar betne ko kaha vus se vo hum ek dusere ko feel kar sakthe hae

P: Matlab agar hum iss ped ke neeche bate ne ka matlab mumma ke pas betna hae na bhaiya

A: ha pihu (saying he sat under the tree and closed his eyes remainig the day they had planted the tree)


flashback
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8-years back

along with ruhi and adi raman has taken ishitha to ishra garden to present the garden as a gift to ishitha

Due to dental conference in bangolore ishitha has to leave to bangalore for three days so knowing the news adi&ruhi became sad seeing them ishitha with the help of adi and ruhi planted a plant and said to adi&ruhi

I: look adi&ruhi this is the plant we had planted now it is a plant but one day it will become a tree whenever we are apart from each other we will come to this tree and reminse each other becoz we planted this with giving our love to it deal?

A&R: par ishima hum ek dusere say alag kyo honge hum tho hamesha app ke pass honge na?

I: Ha sahi hae hum hamesha saath he rahenge lakin a&r jab tum log bade ho javonge na tub padayi ke liya
tumhe hamse dur jana hoga aur, ruhi tho shaadi ke bad humae chood kar chale jayegi na aur mae bi hamesha nahi rahunga na ekna ek din muje bi bagvaan ke pass jana hoga na.

adi&ruhi hugged ishita tightly from both sides and ruhi spoke

R:nahi ishima hum aap ko chod kar kabi nahi gayege

I:are mae aaj ki baath thodi na kar raha hu in saab ke liye bahuth time he

A:fir bi ishima aap yese bathe mathboliye plz

I:Ok promise me jab thak me banglore se avungi aap dono ek dusere ke saath dongaye, promise me u wil'l be gud kids and no shethane ok.

A&R: ok ishima

I: ha jab tak me banglore sae avu thab tak aap iss plant ke dyaan rakna teek hai

A&I: Ok ishima

I: I LOVE U BOTH mere bache i'll miss u both

A&R: WE TOO LOVE U ISHIMAA we will miss u too

-------x end of flashback x-------

IN MIND

A: aaj yaha ake mae sirf aap ko hi nahi apni behan ruhi ko bi bahut miss karaha hu ishima
mae ne kabi nahi soocha ki ek din aisa bi ayega ki mae apni zindagi mae sab sae important
insaan ki yaadho mae zena padegi kash vus hathsa hamare saath kabi nahi hoga
I MISS U ISHIMA , I MISS U RUHI alone tear escaped his eyes.

Spending some more time in ishra garden pihu and adi returned to bhalla house.

In mumbai

In some hotel in mumbai a girl is shown and she is looking out of window and lost in some thoughts
another girl is shown who is looking more older the previous girl come and sees the other girl and keeps hand on her shoulder and says

OG: kya sooch rahae ho?

wiping her tears

Girl: kuch bi tho nahi di?

OG: RUHI (yes it is the younger girl is RUHI BHALLA and the other girl is Aliya malhothra) kya mae nahi janthi ki mere behen kya sooch rahi hae

ruhi hugged aliya and cried like a baby
(Aliya malhothra(21-years)- only daughter of mr&mrs Malhothra. She lost her mother in very tender age and alost her father few years back. From the age of 19 after the death of her father's death she is looking after the work of malhotra's event management company. Now only person she cares is her sister RUHI malhothra. Yes now ruhi is not ruhi bhalla but ruhi malhotra, past of aliya and ruhi bond will be revealed in later updates)

R: Ithna sab kuch hone kae baad bi mae vunhe kyun bhool nahi pa raha hu di, mae aaj bi apne Ishima sae pyaar karthi ,apni family sae pyaar karthi hu jo log muje ghar ki dusri bachhi kae liye muje chood diya tha Mae aaj bi vumse pyaar karthi hi

AL: Mae tumhai hamesha kehthi hu ruhi aaj bi kehthi hu apni parivaar kae pass jao ruhi jithna tum apni Ishima kae bare bath karthi ho tho muje nahi lagtha vo tumse pyaar nahi karthi ek bar vunke pass jha kar tho dek, kya patha tumhae koi misunderstanding huva ho.

R: Nahi di mae bhalla parivaar kae samne kabi nahi javungi vo log mere bina kussh hae, mae apni parivaar ki kushi mae hi kush hu
saying she left to washrooom to freshnup

AL: I really wish tumhe apni maa ki pyaay firse mille Ruhi.

after some time ruhi came out and said to aliya

R: Di hum mumbai mae hai agaar hum kolkata mae hai tho hum aaj kae din hum Ishima ki b'day orphanage maeanathe the par yaha kaise karenge

AL: Koyi nahi ruhi pass mae ek school hae, School for mentally retarted people vaha sirf bachoo ko he nahi bachoo sae lekar bado tak , mentally retarded people ka dyaan rakthe hai its like aslyum.

R: thike di hum vahi chlengae.

both sister duo left the hotel in there rented car and went to bakery to collect the cake and also bought some breads and biscuits for the people of the aslyum and duo reached the aslyum and went to the head of the aslyum to take permission to spend some time and to celebrate. the head was around 55-years
old lady and granted permission.

Both aliya and ruhi spend gud time in aslyum with the people helped them and celebrated ishitha's b'day
suddenly ruhi eyes caught attention of a lady wearing a pale green sari her hair was not braided properly and she was talking and feeding a doll, a smile came on her lips she involenterly moved towards her and stood infront of her but the lady doesnt looked at ruhi and continue her play with doll. Ruhi bent to her level and gave bread to her than the lady doesnt took the bread and said

L: mere beti ko bread nahi pasand hae mere beti ko idli pasand hai saying the looked straight into the eyes of ruhi

Ruhi cannot believe who she saw, she became still and doesnt move from her place but only seeing the lady. seeing ruhi aliya came to her kept her hand on her sholder and said

AL: kya huva ruhi ise asey kyun dek rahe ho kon hae ye?

Ruhi doesnt moved from her place and just looking at lady playing with doll

AL: kaha koi huyi ho kon hai ye? tum janthi ho inhe?

But all ruhi can say was

R: ISHIMA...

---------x end of part2 x----------

Precap: revivary of past(RUHI's view)
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Really good start! Continue soon!
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nice and different one 👏
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thanks for the support guys if this support increase I'll post more frequently
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Omg its awesome dear...
I jst love it ...
It totally diffrent
Ruhi loves her family n ishita
Ishita in mental asylum... Its really shocking...
Shukhar shaggy nai bhallas house mein...
Raman pihu adi miss ishita a lot...

Keep updating dear..

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