The Beginning Of Their Eternity- a Krishna-Bhama TS(completed pg 9) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Surya_krsnbhakt

For the first time, res.😆

Unres.

Okay, this was divine the first time I read it. I was so astonished at the endearing way with which you described Bhama's feelings and the subtle turn of events. But then you told me that Radharani is present. So menakettu I went through it again.

And while I did see Radharani, I also saw Madhavi, Chandravali, Vishakha, Ekanamsha, (please forgive me) an extremely perverted version of Madhumangala. (Thousand times I seek your pardon.)

So from the time I read the book I was thinking all this is beautiful, how Krsna's first wife (you know who I am talking about and who I am not referring to) always strolls in the gardens and our heroine hides from her, secretly meeting Dvarakadheesh, and then one day they meet. I was wondering how we could compare it to what actually happened, since obviously the beloved and darling are still at home, and Sridevi and Bhudevi are in Dvaraka. But then reading this I got the inspiration and insight to how perfect the author's descriptions are and how they match perfectly despite not matching at all.

And then finally Satrajit gives his most precious jewel to the most beautiful person. You purposely omitted the Sita and Duhshala aspects or just like that?

And the meeting between Sridevi and Bhudevi - it was simply awesome. And again (on second reading) I could see darling and beloved!

And finally the dear sister comes to congratulate her natkhat brother! I love Parvati when she is the sister of Krsna. Such scenes only reveal her true nature. (And I assume since you have delved so much into this relationship you are not at all looking at their 'other' relationship?)

This is why I reserved. Because if I type first itself then all this wouldn't come. Now like one veLLam it is just flowing out my mind.

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Thanks Surya :)

Res for now 😆

Originally posted by: Surya_krsnbhakt

Unres-ed with a lot of inner jokes and double meaning.

I simply love and adore stories that begin with a loving sibling bond! Subhadra is as we have imagined her to be, child-like, fun and an adorable being. So she drags away a supposedly reluctant Krishna who in reality s dying to meet his Satyabhama! Oh how much I love these kinds of plots!

And then the Pushpa Vatika scene which frankly, for me, never loses its charm. The serenity of the scene mixed with the interactions of a divine couple is probably all that you need to fall in love with their encounters. You simply excel in writing Krishna-Bhama drabbles Shru...initially I was very ambivalent towards Rukmini, Satyabhama and Krishna's other wives but you have made me love Satyabhamam and adore Rukmini! Keep writing more!

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

This was just so wonderful! Thoroughly loved the little encounters of Kanha and Bhama!

Originally posted by: radianteyes.

Such a beautiful and mind alluring shot di
I could actually feel the jealous and everything going down her
U have brought her to life
And of course my bro krishnaa