The Beginning Of Their Eternity- a Krishna-Bhama TS(completed pg 9) - Page 2

proteeti

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Cho chueet! Love your Subhi! Kanha is just awesome awesome awesome awesome! Can't wait for Paro maiya ka prank!

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Mili

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Omg!Bhabhi literally you were made to write this!

I am excited for this series

A big huggie to you for writing this 🤗

Dau,Satya,Subhi,Mahadev,Gauri Ma,I am eager to know what happens next?

Govind ❤️

I have got no words to praise 😆

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Janaki

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Posted: 8 years ago

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OMG!!! So romantic and sweet, Shru, I loved it! This is exactly how I'd imagine their first milan to be.

It had a decent balance of romance and divinity, something new mytho directors don't understand. 😡 The romance was very pure and lovely. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Subhadra-Bhama bond is adorable.

I love Kanha-Balarama bond as well!

You know, I was imagining Debina and SRJ in this scene. 😆

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Surya Sundarraj Sriram

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Posted: 8 years ago

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No I don't know why you were made to write this... unless it is the prompting from you know where.. or my other PM about you know what..

So Subhadra has already met and befriended Satyabhama! What a wonderful sister she is! Made her brother's relationship all the more easier! And yes, Bhudevi will soon realise her Nature... but till then let her be the chirpy girl we all know! (And by that I do not mean that Bhama is serious and worried all the time - I just mean that mothers have fun and worry side-by-side...)

And Lord Shiva loves to joke around with Parvati. I love their dialogues, only thing due to Krsna's plans this whole relationship will go haywire... then again, this sentence which I just said depends on what source you follow, so if you don't follow the same source then the relationship can be as smooth as butter, otherwise... well you'll get to know soon enough.

And yes, I can detect Krsna's beloved within Krsna's favourite, if you can catch the meaning and the implied consequences.

How is it that my conversations with you always have some sort of insider joke preprogrammed into them?

Edited by Surya_krsnbhakt - 8 years ago

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NONIE

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Fantastic update Srutha didi😃

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MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi Srutha !

Beautiful shot . The title is so beautiful . I love Krishna and Satya 😳

And the writing is very good . The way the os proceeds is nice .

Update soon as its a TS na 😉

Thanks for the pm and for the reminder scrap too .

Love

Sam

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attubaby

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Posted: 8 years ago

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wow...simply beautiful...loved all d convo expecially subhadra and bhama. jz loved the explanation given by Bhama to Subhdra about Gauri maa...

now curious to know about the prank..

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Cho chueet! Love your Subhi! Kanha is just awesome awesome awesome awesome! Can't wait for Paro maiya ka prank!

Thanks :) Subhi is a doll ❤️
Kanha is always and forever
Paro maiya ka prank will come in the course of time 😛

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: LakshMila
Omg!Bhabhi literally you were made to write this!
I am excited for this series
A big huggie to you for writing this 🤗

Dau,Satya,Subhi,Mahadev,Gauri Ma,I am eager to know what happens next?
Govind ❤️
I have got no words to praise 😆

Laadli 🤗
I was made to write this by your Govind only :)

You will see what happnes next soon 😉
Your Govind, My Shyam ❤️
Haha thank you 😳

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Srutha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..
OMG!!! So romantic and sweet, Shru, I loved it! This is exactly how I'd imagine their first milan to be.

It had a decent balance of romance and divinity, something new mytho directors don't understand. 😡 The romance was very pure and lovely. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Subhadra-Bhama bond is adorable.

I love Kanha-Balarama bond as well!

You know, I was imagining Debina and SRJ in this scene. 😆

Janu 🤗I am so glad you liked it :)
I am so happy you think that i have got this scene properly :) I know. New mytho directors just don't get epics. Isn't that why we started our own show? 😉
You know my love for Krishna romance ❤️

I imagined that was how Bhama-Subhi bond would be. After all, they were favourites of each other, along with Rukmini, and also Krishna's.

Kanha-Dau is my favourite bond to write. Ever ❤️ (Also Ram-Lakshman :P)

Really? Debina does seem to feature in almost all of our Satyabhama stories doesn't she? As does SRJ :P
Edited by KrishnaPriyaa - 8 years ago

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