New mystery story: Saturday is for murder? UPDATED Final part on pg 5 - Page 5

such a awesome update. loved it soo much .loved raghav teasing trisha about really marrying her .loved the saar takrana and Shagun wala scene and the gun scene were soo cute .Really loved all the RaTri scenes soo much .Raghav proposed trisha indirectly. loved the small future reference soo much thanks a lot for this wonderful story

Sorry dear for being late. Actually I read the story in a hurry so I could not really connect well. I'm on duty tonight so I'll read it properly asap and then I would be better able to understand it and give the reviews. Hope you understand.

Thank you for a lovely story. The case was well knit, no loopholes as such. Trisha was shown her presence of mind when she placed a gun with a saree, she is quite a character yaar, why wouldn't any man fall for her? The good luck scene was again awesome, just loved it. 

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

such a awesome update. loved it soo much .loved raghav teasing trisha about really marrying her .loved the saar takrana and Shagun wala scene and the gun scene were soo cute .Really loved all the RaTri scenes soo much .Raghav proposed trisha indirectly. loved the small future reference soo much thanks a lot for this wonderful story

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Sorry dear for being late. Actually I read the story in a hurry so I could not really connect well. I'm on duty tonight so I'll read it properly asap and then I would be better able to understand it and give the reviews. Hope you understand.

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Thank you for a lovely story. The case was well knit, no loopholes as such. Trisha was shown her presence of mind when she placed a gun with a saree, she is quite a character yaar, why wouldn't any man fall for her? The good luck scene was again awesome, just loved it. 

The teasing after case was solved was so cute, and the addition of that one line in the end was awesome.

All in all a great story, very similar to that in the show. 

Loves

Originally posted by: nymphadora12

It's okay! Duty calls first, I understand.

I wouldn't have minded even if you would have posted a review tomorrow! I'm glad you removed time to post this reply to let me know. Thankyou!

Actually I could take out time because all my patients are settled at present. So as soon as I got some time free I read the story in details and then posted review stat.

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Actually I could take out time because all my patients are settled at present. So as soon as I got some time free I read the story in details and then posted review stat.