Twinj FF || YeH MeRi DeeWaNaGee !!! part 4 page 15 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
Woww...Another superb Twinj FF...Great work sonal !!!
Please continue soon πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
its very very good   πŸ€—
nice one πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Diy0

its very very good   πŸ€—
nice one πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Duumps

Awesome updates .

Loved them.
Please update soon.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anisha-k.

Hey welcome back Sonal di with a new story update!!!

LOVE THIS STORY!!!
All ur stories are OUTSTANDING!!
I'm so sorry for commenting late...actually i saw ths story and i read the teaser...but i was so busy tht i cud nt get time to comment! SORRRY!
But loved all the updates...man kunj how cud he be so heartless!
So angry on kunj!
pls Sonal di...i want kunj to apologise to her {twinkle}
Otherwise mujhe seh bura koi nehi hoga!
Btw can u pls PM m on ur story updates {all} coz i dont wanna miss any updates on ur writings!😳


Hey thank You so much dear... 
Dnt say Sorry dear.. Its completely alrite... 
Yes Kunj behaved badly...
He will ...apologize...sty tuned.. 
Sure I'll PM u...
Sorry fr late reply...πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tricksters

Woww...Another superb Twinj FF...Great work sonal !!!

Please continue soon πŸ˜Š


Thanks Dear..😳
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Part 3

                 " Hello, Inspector Aman , Ali escaped while he ws been taken to central jail... His hiding location has been traced.. Commissioner has ordered Inspector Kunj for an encounter of Ali..", said sub inspector Shirke,  And hung up... It ws Friday morning 5.00 am ... And it ws tym fr some Action... Kunj and Aman reached to the location... It ws an Old deserted Mill... Aman and Kunj hide tthemselves behind the  rusted machines.. as thy made move towards the room on first floor...  Some loud voices wer coming out frm tht room... " Ali, u betrayed us .. U dnt knw wat will happen whn Sadar Sahaab comes to knw about it.. ", said the other man in the room... " Sanju wat wud i do.  Tht Encounter specialist had a Gun on my f**king Head..and he chased me like a Maniac whn i tried to runnaway. ..Listen i immediately need to go out of the City ", said Ali profusely sweating... " Not so early ", said Kunj... Smashing the Door open with a solid Kick .. And Aiming the Gun Towards Ali... Ali had his Balls in his mouth as his eyes widened at Kunj's Sight . he immediately went to grab the gun.. Whn a bullet left frm Kunj' Gun , making a Perfect hole thru Ali's Head later hiting the wall behind him.. .. Ali's lifeless body dashed on the ground...Sanju at tht very same moment grabed the gun and fired towards Kunj whn Aman pushed him and The bullet directly Hit Aman's arm..." Amannn ", Shouted Kunj...  And Fired at Sanju Directly in his chest...killing him thn and der... " Shit,.Aman r u crazy ", Kunj said making Aman sit.. He immediately tied the handkerchief on Amans hand and rushed him to the Hospital... " We need this place to b.sealed... Two goons r down .. Ali who.escaped and his partner Sanju... Inspector Aman is injured.. On the way to Hospital ", Kunj reported the police headquarters while driving Aman to the Hospital...
                   It ws 8.00 am In the morning... Tammu ws still asleep , Twinkle ws doing her routine morning chores  ... Jyoti Tai knocked.. " Twinkle, Twinkle... Please open the door.  ". she said with some tension in her voice... With tht noise, Tammu woke up... Twinkle opened the door... " Twinkle, dnt waste time..go fast.. Hospital.. Emergency..  ", Jyoti tai said and Tammu came running to her.. Listening to her Twinkle's face turned pale... She immediately grabed her purse and went... she reached hospital, and almost ran inside towards the emergency ward..." Doctor, wat happened..is he alrite ?", she asked the doctor almost shivering with fear...she ws informed tht her brother had an epileptic attack in this grave condition and the clot in his brain moved causing damage... So thy need to strt with the operation immediately ... She ws asked to pay the second installment of Rs.10000 at the counter.. With God's grace she had decided to arrange the money by selling her mothers gold chain... Kunj ws sitting outside the same ward and he witnessed Twinkle in this situation... She ws sacred and shivering... " Doctor, i will deposit the money today itself .. Please go ahead with the operation.  Please don't delay.. Please..  ", she almost begged to the doctor joining her hands.. Doctor ws considerate, he asked her to deposit money till 10pm ..She wiped her tears , took off the gold chain frm her neck... Looked at it once... " Sorry Maa. ", she whispered and ran outside the hospital... Kunj jus starred at the passage she went thru... Some kind off sadness took over him..watchinh those tears in her eyes..." Mr. Kunj ", doctor called... " Mr.Aman had to stay fr 24hrs in the hospital under observation,too much, .blood loss has occurred ", he said.. Kunj jus nodded his head in yes... His best friend, his close colleague..his brother frm another mother has risked his life for him.. He ws already feeling worst and now watching Twinkle like this added to it... After about 2 hrs she returned back... " Madam, doctor asked me to deposit the money.. Madam.. I cud manage only Rs.8000... Please take it.. I'll try to maange 2000 at the earliest.. Please Madam. ", Twinkle requested The Accountant at the cash Counter.. Listening to Twinkle's voice.. Kunj lifted his head up to look at her.  She ws all drenched in sweat.., eyes swollen with tears still drooling..  " Twinkle, Doctor asked u to deposit 10k ..we cannot accept 8k..", she said plainly.. " Madam Please., doctor had given me tym till 10 pm..I'll try to get the money.,.please take this and strt off the operation... Please Madam.. I beg ..,please.. !!! ", she almost sobbbed.. Joining her hands.. Accountant asked her to relax and she confirmed with the doctor.. " Okay..go arrange the money. ", she said... Her brother ws taken to the Operation theatre..  She ws asked to wait outside.. She sat on the chair..crouching her legs .. " Frm wer will i arrange 2000. , Babaji Please Help ". she prayed... Kunj ws silently watching her frm the next door.. He ws feeling bad for her... 
                  Operation got over in 8 hrs... Twinkle went to the doctor with eager eyes.. " Beta, your prayers worked.. He is Alrite.   "., said doctor keeping his hand on her head... Twinkle smiled brightly with tears flowing through her eyes.. Looking her smile, automatically a mild smile crept on Kunj's face ... He decided to pay her remaining 2000.. Twinkle walked to the cash Counter...Kunj ws walking behind her. She did nt noticed him... " Madam , i'll come in 2hrs with the money ", she said the accountant... Few hrs before she ws thinking of hw to arrange fr the money...now she is confidently saying she'll get the money in 2 hrs.. Kunj felt wierd... She went out of the hospital...it ws 8.00 pm.. Out of curiosity Kunj followed her.. He dnf kmw why he ws doing tht..but he ws... He saw her goin into the same bar whr fr the 1st tym he saw her... " She cn do anything fr money, again goin to tht place.. Y pity her " he exclaimed in his mind.., feeling disgusted... He ws abt to return but something stopped him.. He felt like goin in and to see wat exactly is goin on..  He entered the bar.. It ws dark..with various neon lights decorated around the tables.,.walls.  , with strong smell of alcohol lingering everywhere ...  It ws nt the ugly one but a bit sophisticated with some decent crowd...but all alcoholics... Kunj took a table to the extreme end which ws hardly visible to anyone..  The owner Shabbir Patel came on stage.. " Dear all, today our Favorite Twinkle will b singing jus one song ..tht too on Farmaishh.. ", he announced... Everyone cheered and whistled.. As Twinkle made her way on the stage... Kunj looked at her frm top to bottom..he ws expecting her to come in some skimpy dress..but , She ws wearing the same saree which she ws wearing in the hospital... Jus her hair wer properly done with clean face.. But her eyes still held up tht moistness..which ws visible in the blue spotlight... " Farmaishhh ", she asked to the crowd... Kunj ears warmed up... Evryone strted suggesting.   But one man stood and walked near the stage... Kunj ws calmly watching the scene..." I will give this bar 20000... U will sing my song.. ", said the drunkard.. " wat u want to listen Sir. ", she asked.  " Twinkle, my heart is broken today.. I want to hear to a song which will make my Heart cry more and more ", he said and returned to his table.. toasting the glass to Twinkle...  Twinkle ws in similar emotional turmoil the whole day and this man wants to hear a song with Sadness..  As all the lights dimmed and the spotlight went on to Twinkle...Kunj Straighten up on his chair.. She strted...

Yaara...
Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si ilteja
Ye meri zamaanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai aa...

Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de naye bahaane de
Khabon ki barishon ko mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro rahi hun main 

Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro rahi hun main,,

              As the song ended.. There ws a pin drop silence... Nobody ws whistling, clapping, shouting... Everyone jus looked at Twinkle with tears filled in der eyes... The pain in the Heart Of One ws Felt by everyone..and This ws Conveyed so beautifully by Twinkle in her voice and in her beautiful song..  Kunj took his hands towards this mouth and sighed... He ws looking straight at Twinkle... She stood there lowering her eyes... Tears jus wandering at the cornor of her eyes.  Revolting to drop down... Kunj regretted his words badly.. He unknwning judged her.. She ws doing this for a reason not fr herself... He hurted her honour with his spiteful words.. But now he need to rectify himself... His mother always thought to respect women..  But being a Very Good Looking Man...he only came across women who threw thmselves on him... Some trying to lure him to bed ...some tried to kiss him in public... He always distant himself frm women.. But Twinkle, she din even looked at him once...and wat he did... He went too ahead calling her a wh**e...  Kunj got up frn his chair and went out.   As the room filled with Applaud and praises fr Twinkle... Shabbir Patel handes Twinkle 5000 and blessed her... 
               (Hospital) ... 
                Twinkle deposited the money at the Counter. ... " Madam ek phone kar sakti hu ", she asked the accountant... " Okay ". Said the accountant and smiled at her... Twinkle diales the number.   " Jyoti Tai , Rahul's operation is done successfully... ", she informed her... Rahul and Jyoti Tai , Tamana  r her only family ... " Mr. Kunj, Mr.Aman is now in senses.. U can meet him..", the nurse Informed Him.. Listening this Twinkle looked at Kunj..who ws starring at her... Her eyes widened at his sight..she remembered his words...her eyes immediately dropped...she had decided never to cross his path...she turned around and walked away... Kunj's hand immediately reached fr her.. He wanted to.apologize..  " Mr. Kunj..", nurse again called... He went to meet Aman.. " Hey. Bro... Hw r u feeling now ",.asked Kunj... " Better ", Aman said... " U shudn't hav done this Aman... Tht bullet ws aimed on me... If ever again u do like this. I"ll kill u. ". Kunj said smiling at Aman... Aman Chuckled... The sedatives wer high...soon he slept and Kunj sat outside... His eyes wer.searching Fr Twinkle... he saw her sitting outside the ward drinking water... " She must hungry ", he thot...  He strted walking towards her whn she turned to look at him.. Looking at him Twinkle again felt disgusted ... She strted looking here and der... " TwinkleJi , u need to go.. We dnt allow anyone to stay here in the Hospital ",.nurse said...Twinkle fliped her eyes looking at Nurse and thn looked at Kunj...immediately got up and Strted walking outside the hospital .. He understood her actions and he ws very much responsible fr thm... 
                    Outside the Hospital Twinkle ws waiting fr Auto..it ws 11.00 pm ... There wer very few vehicles traveling... She waited fr abt 15 mins.. Kunj saw her waiting ..he thot to Atleast giv her lift till the chwal...but before he cud get to his bike... She strted walking.. Twinkle thot to walk all the way to the home... She ws walking in the streets... It ws dark ..and Very few ppl wer present... Some weird feeling strted gripping Twinkle...she wrapped her pallu on her shoulders to cover herself... .she ws passing frm a bhurje pav stall... Whn some roadside romeos strted passing cheap comments on Twinkle.. She strted walking faster turning her face on other side... Thy strted following her.. The distance between thm strted reducing... Those three surrounded Twinkle... " Hey, baby Wer r u going Beautiful... Take us with U... We'll hav Fun baby ", said one smiling evilly..." Please let me ...go..please... Please ", pleaded Twinkle... " U look very tasty... Let us taste u baby ", said the other licking his lips... The 3rd one tried to touch her..whn someone held his hand and twisted it almost breaking his bones... " Dare u ", voice said and punched him hard on his nose breaking the ridge... The other two tried to attack him...but soon rrgretted... Whn he Removed his belt and strted smashing thm with full power... " How Dare Think of Touching her ", he roared loudly...almost making their soul shiver... After beating thm black and blue...Kunj turned to look at Twinkle...she ws. Shivering with fear..  and tears drooling frm her eyes.. KUNJ handed her his handkerchief... " R u ok ? ", Kunj asked... She jus managed to nodd her head in yes... He went to his bike and stopped in front of her..." Sit, i'll drop u home ", he said... " Thank You,. But... ", but Before she completes... " Its very late.. And its not safe.. Please.. Sit ...", he said this tym almost ordering her to do as he said... She composed herself and very carefully sat behind him.. She made sure tht she shudn't touch him... Since his mind set regarding her is not Good... Kunj understood her apprehension..and very carefully drove offf...  But before reaching the Chawl he stopped at some distance... " Get down here.., and walk...i'll wait here.. ", he said... Twinkle obliged... " Thank you fr helping ", she said , eyes lowered and strted walking... Kunj looked at her... As she walked... Away... 

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Posted: 8 years ago
very very good dear
truly amazing πŸ€— πŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sonal...another amazing update...loved it...and now I feel much better...after a heartbreaking epi...this update is my savior...πŸ€—. Plz update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...read it in one go..
Am excited for next parts.
U have certain magic in u..
its amazing..
Update next soon..