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Iam really really sorry people but uk iam a kid still studyin and loads of books here but honestly dis tym i hvae got u sumthin u must read n i promise iam not gonna take it too long...
Just 2 or 5 chaps max
Pls forgive me for the abusivr language cuz here iam referring to the college lyf..but i dont think..u guys will find it dat offensive
CUZ WE R A FAMILY PEOPLE
And u guys kno hw college lyf is
Here i wanna even include my bff vrittu cuz she has helped me a ton in posting this...this one was my dream n since 1 year i wanted to..but uk studies are makin my lyf hell and i couldnt biut nw its holidays!!!!.. i hve prob in postin it so vritti is takin the whole difficulty of posting this stuff so that my dream is fulfilles and i luv her lyk hell for dis...dis beauty of myn has helped me at the tym of my heartbreak and even iam not such a bad friend.. i saved her from gointo wrong person and i think this is hw friendship is..i think nw iam being too emotional n makin u guys also too emotional but if u hve felt that ur friendship n ur love is also soo unique lyk mine...pls i want u to read this and comment

Sooo lets gooo

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Y do we feel that if we wuld have a BF or sumthin it shuld be lyk max 2 years difference or the person is old fr u

Luv cums in any form i think...it sees no religion..no caste..no creed n even NO AGE

This story is of our dear rantara..which explains us that luv is eternal wid no boundaries yet our society's views donot let such couple exist

P.S:THE characters will be introduced in the chpters itself

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Zara! Welcome back girl
If the story is not based on RanTara then you should write it in the fanfic area because I highly doubt you will get much response here
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

Hey Zara! Welcome back girl
If the story is not based on RanTara then you should write it in the fanfic area because I highly doubt you will get much response here



Oh so I think it's better I change the names
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Guys pls I want u ppl to read this or I will seriously die...AYI SHAPAT!!


CHAPTER 1
Antara is a student of swami vivekanand college of science in hyderabad..
This is her last year in the college n her studies r soon gonna end n then
she would be practicing doctery..
pihus parents had died when she was 15 and she lives wid her uncle and anty and as usual the anty doesnt like it and treats antara badly
Antara is the topper of her class and is liked by all by her behaviour...antara has never crossed her limits her uncle n anty set for her..shes a good girl n the
thing wich her friends say is that it would be common for such a gal who
is spectacled,too much into studies and n is such a gud gal whose never
visited any pub or club to not hve a bf and not be kissed till now..this
comment was neglected by antara earlier but wen her BFF told her dat
even she has recently got a bf n has been kissed..she became conscious
about this..but still antara never tried to cross this limits..cuz Antara was so
found of lovestory novels n she. would think that one day she will be
havin a prince who would live only for her and not lyk the guys in her
college who just breakup cuz they r fed up of a single gal in their bed...
This was the last second term of antara studies n till then there
was a news that there will be a new sir for chemistry ty in the
college cuz the previous tr was not well n resigned..she wasn't so
excited cuz she liked her previous chemistry tr very much...
But one day she heard one of her friend sayin dat the new
chemistry tr was young unmarried n hot..antara felt it idiotic dat
they were talkin such way..
She was sitting in the canteen wen the principal announced all
students to gather in the auditorium for the introduction of the
new tr.. Antara headed there n as usual was standin in the
front..the principal spoke shitt for sum tym and then introduced
the tr...
"So my dear children let me intoduce u to our new chemistry
tr..MR Raghunath naik"
And there appeared a man who was tall can say of 5'10 with specs on his
tiny eyes and with a smirk on his face... He wore a red shirt inside his
black coat wich was quite highliting.. And there he spoke
"My dear children ik by my face i luk lyk a student of this skul and ur
principal had also mistaken me that way..but iam ur new chem tr and dont
worry id think i will be that strict as ur previous tr .."
OUR PREVIOUS TR WAS NOT STRICT SHE WAS KIND
EXPERIENCED AND loving SIR..a voice came from the crowd..
It was antara.. Antara never liked a word against her tr cuz she liked her alot..
Oh iam sorry i guess my words hve hurt u..miss??? Said raghu
"Miss antara sir said antara"
And class?? He asked again
S2 she replied
Ok i think i will meet all u students in the class n have ur introduction there
itself...well i hve got introduced to my first student here.. Said Raghu..well nyc to
meet u antara..
And the principal commanded everyone to go to their classes,.
The first class today in antara's class was of chemistry
The bell rang and Raghu entered the class with sum chem books in one hand and
a big book in the other wich didnt seem of chem..
Everyone stood up and greeted him
"Ok class sit down."he said... "I would like to ask u just a simple question.."
He held that big book in both his hands and made one side face the students..
"So students wich colour is this book?"
Everyone looked confused as to wat he was asking
"Red" eveyone replied
"But if i say that it is black" Raghu said
Everyone luked each others face n said
Sir it is red
Then Raghu turned the book the other side and said..its black
Everyone luked confused that wat it meant and were luking at eachother confused
Antara understood wat he meant n felt that this was for her
"Can nyone explain me wat hve u learnt frm dis" Raghu said
Yes sir i can do it"antara replied
Oh so Antara pls explain us wat this meant he said and antara started talking
"Sir this explains us that we always see the side we r shown n not the other n in this
world way we dont get to know the story of other side...
Raghu smiled at antara ans and was satisfied by it
And then he continued"so miss antara i guess u hve understood it well ryt??'" And now u
may sit
Antara sat down embarresed cuz Raghu that done this for the ans she had
given in the auditorium... She was not likin him at all
Raghu started teaching and at last wen the bell ramg he told veryone to
give their practical for check cuz he wanted to know wat the earlier tr taught..
There was a bundle of books and he said sumone to pick them fr him..as no
one showed up he asked antara to help him..
Antara took all the books and started walking wid him..
She wanted to say sorry fr her behaviour n sumhow took the topic out
Sir ik dat the activity u had done was for me..and I apologize for the
behaviour i hve done..
Antara id think u hve to apolgize Nd i have not perfomed it so dat u apolgize to
me.. Uk i didn't critisize ur tr..i was just trying yo mKe u people cheered up
but i didnt know dat ur tr had left her protesters in the skul here..he said in a joking way...but u calling me unexpirenced felt abit bad
But sir sorry..antara said
For wat..id think i remember u said nyhting offensive ..instead u are a sweet cute
student i hve met till now... Raghu replied
Antara was seriously blushing on his last sentence and luved it..
They were heading to the staffroom wen something vame into the way and antara
slipped with that huge bundle of books that weighed tons
Raghu saw it at the right tym and help pihu in his arms..
Antara was scared n closed shut her eyes
It was lyk a filmy scene and Raghu closed examined pihus face
He found it cute..at that tym it was filled with fear
Antara slowly opened her eyes and found herself in raghus arms
"Oh iam sorry sir.. I'm there was water on the floor..so my leg got slipped.
"Its ok antara!ok so i think we need to now clear the floor" Raghu said
Sum people who can't have their feet in the class were roaming
out..pihu's Bff sanya was one of them..she had seen antara fallin
n raghu holding her..and her mind had sumthing cooking
Raghu n pihu picked the books up n headed to staffroom..
They reached the staffroom and antara put the books on yhe
desk..the staffroom was all alone..
I guess all the trs r in their lectures..said Raghu
Yes sir" said antara
Ok sir can i leave..i hve a class" antara said
Oh its ok pihu u may leave and thank u fr helping" Raghu said
Ah! Sir anytime for my trs..u may ask me nytime..anyways i get bored
wid the gossips of my friends ryt now as i reach they will start talkin
hw hot u r n all...antara said n bit her tongue as she spoke too much
Raghu just kept staring to wat she said
Uhh! I am sorry i just spoke too much..antara said
Its ok u said wat was in ur heart,.so wat do u think of me..as ur class
gals or..Raghu said
Uh! Actually sir i think ur young n ur handsome..antara said n luked at
Raghu
Oh! Thnk u fr the compliment..i like ur more than the others..Raghu
said
Ok sir let me leave..
In the classroom wen antara arrived she got to know that the tr
didnt take the class cuz she went home..antara took out sum book
n started reading it..
She culdnt concerntrate on it cuz she was thinkin of wat Raghu
had said
She luved it,.as she kept thinkin sanya came n dat beside her:.
Sanya was quite understanding,very playful,chubby type of person
and they shared a really gud relationship
"Oye hoye! Itna kya muskura rahi hai"..sanya said
"Kuch nahi yaar and talk in english we r in college.."
"Arey baad mein jaye english..bata na kya hua bahar..bata na"..sanya
asked excitedly

Kiski baat kar rhi hai tu"

"Arey tere aur Raghu sir ke baare mein yaar bata na pls..dekha tha kaise unke bahon
mein thi tu"..sanya replied

"Arey idiot! Mera per phisal gaya tha..aur unhone bas bachaya"

"Mujhe toh kich aur hi dikh rha hai"sanya said playfully

"Kya yaar..tu mere aur Raghu sir ke baare mein kya kuch soch rhi hai..hum dono mein
10 saal ka farak hai!!!"
"Toh kya hua meri jaan..pyaar mein sab jayaz hai"danya replied in a filmy way
"Na yaar aisa nhi hai"

While talking antara again started thinkin about raghu's words and thought to herself
"Yeh ho kya rha hai mujhe"
"Humari pyaari antara ko pyaar hogaya hai" sanya said excited

Is it true?? Antara asked herself

Guys pls comment n i luv u guys and ur support...luv is actually eternal and has no boundaries
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Awesome!!! Continue asap dear. .
I am excited to read more about this love story..😃
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Yo guys!! Iam back wis a new chp and a pls read n enjoy

Chapter 2

It was almost 2 months that raghu had entered the college and everyone liked him but antara...antara was actually in luv wid him..

Her day at college would start by him and the day he didn't show up she said her day wouldn't go gud...

The day at college went well and antara was very happy...antara wore a red shirt and skinny jeans and the shirt revealed her figure clearly but she doubted if anyone would even look at her...
It was night tym wen she was returning and as she walked all along the road heading to the bus stand ,she felt a group of guys following her...

Antara sensed some sort of uncomfortable and felt uneasy...,

She stopped at the bus stop and the group stopped too..,antara wanted to run from there but she couldnt help but stay there...

She was busy in her phone when a guy from the group headed towards her..

She ignored it..yet was being a little uneasy..

The guy stood beside her and was literally staring at her .. Now she knew wat this meant..she took a few steps when the guy hold her hand..trembling she turned to him and tried to be bold

Leave my hand she said in a low voice..

Th guy didn't listen

"Maine kaha mera haath chod"she said loudly

"Uh-oh madam ko gussa agaya" said the guy.. And pulled her towards him..,
He touched antaras bare skin and almost lifted the short till her belly-button

Antara was struggling and screaming for help but no one turned up..

The other guys also joined him and they were almost 3people then...

All 4 of them tried their best to force on her but antara tried her best and was even almost sucessful in escaping wen one of them hold her leg n pulled her down..

Antara was not helpless but still she tried.she threw her things over them but even then it was of no use...

She was lying there on the floor and the guys were giving her the s**tiest feel ever..

She couldnt do anything now and everything was over god now..she was struggling on the ground wen one of them was bending over to her..

She squeezingly shut her eyes and prayed to god to save her..she was panting badly ...after sumtym she found some violent sound and found it to be from the other side

She opened her eyes wen she found raghu there holding one of the guy and hitting one hard on his face...

Antara was still panting and then she saw the guys running away..

Blood was oozing out if antara's forehead and nose..

They were so harsh to her that she was all hurt

Raghu quickly rushed to her and hugged her badly.. This was one of the worst nightmare of antara..she was still trembling wid fear and panting badly..

Raghu rubbed her back to calm her fown wen she pushed him with a jerk and shouted at the top of her voice..

"Don't touch me please don't touch me"

Raghu got up again and tried to bring her bAck to senses but she was so scared and not still out of the trauma dat she hit him on yhe chest and kept pushing him back...raghu ran to search for some water meanwhile antara was there on the ground sobbing..

He retuened wid water to see antara still there sobbing.,

"Antara" he said while shaking her "look its me, ur raghu sir, just look"

He took a fistful of water and splashed it on antara's face and then antara realized wat had happened..

She hugged raghu tightly as thought would never let her go and cried while her head on his chest..

Raghu tried to console her that everything was fine and nothing has happened with her

She was almost screaming while crying wen raghu took pit his coat. And made her wear. She was still sobbing

"Why me?. Why only me...Am i so bad that everything happens only to me."said antara choking

Raghu felt a part of his heart paining terribly as thought sumthing hit him badly

Raghu helped her get up and hold her by the shoulders to give her support

Antara was badly hurt she cried and cried and raghu decided first to take her his home and do the dressing cuz he knew how antaras anty would react..

On the way to his home antara suddenly hugged him and poured out all of her heart..

"Sir i have never been bad to anyone..i always pray to god:.i haven't crossed any limits my anty and uncle set for me..but just that i have loved someone is it that i gat such a punishment that i get almost RAPED!!!"

Antara disnt know wat she spoke but ahe spoke about her love for raghu

"No antara..no its not lyk dat..as far as ik u are a lot really gud person. And u have never hurt anyone uk.."raghu explained her..

They stopped there and antara was still hugging her.. She was about to say everything..everything that was in her heart and she opened her mouth to speak

"I..I...lo..." She spoke but a car came and horned and she stopped

Raghu and antara again started ro walk to their home and they finally reached..

Antara was exhausted and her eyes were forcing her to shut down..she didn't sleep 3 nights completing her assignments and now she cried so badly..but she forced her eyes to be open and till then raghu got the first aid box...

"Antara just tell me where u are hurt and i do the dressing as i see that u are badly hurt"said raghu

"No sir let me do it myself"

"No u r hurt and u wont be able to do it" replied raghu

Antara felt the pain piercing and accepted her defeat..

Raghu dressed the wound on her face and hands

"Anywhere else"asked raghu

Antara realised that there was one wound at the back down there.. But she couldn't tell him,.

"No sir" she said

"Ok then" said raghu and was about to leave wen the pain in the back wound increased and Antara let our a scream..

Raghu turned to see her put her hand at her back and writhing in pain..

Raghu rushed to her and asked

"What happened"

"Nothing" she replied

"Antara pls tell me if its sum wound there or else it can be septic" raghu eaxplained.."show it to me" he demanded

Antara couldn't say anthing and showed him that it was at the back

Raghu made antara turned towards him and scanned for the wound

He realised that it was in her t-shirt..

He nervously lifted the top and then scanned for the wound..he found the wound and it was deep and blood oozing out..he forwaded his hand and caressed the wound..

Antara hissed in pain and raghu realised wat he was doing..he dressed the wound and suddenly..he felt a weird type of urge in him..he felt goosebumps all over him and antara...he felt to touch her soft body..and one weird one-he felt to kiss her back..it seemed that she was his and held back his hand at first..he was hypnotized..lost in her,.it wasn't the body that attracted him..it was the smell of her body that attracted him..he didn't know wat he was doing and he forwaded his face and kissed her back...

Antara was all shocked..she didn't realise wat has happened..and turned back to see raghu himself shocked..

"Iam sorry i didn't mean it..idk wat i have done..sorry i..i. Couldnt realise wat have i done" raghu said but then antara just left wid her bag.."I should leave" she said and wore her slippers wen raghu stopped her

"Antara it's quite late and u shouldn't be going like this now"

Everything that happened sometime ago near the bustand came infront of hwr and she agreed

While going in the car..neither raghu nor Antara spoke..raghu was stealing glances of her but antara just looked at her feet and suddenly tears dropped her from her eyes...
I..i..i..couldn't understand wat had happened at dat tym..i understand wat was happening.. I am sorry for it"

No Antara iam sorry..i couldnt stop myself.. I just disnt know wat i did,. It was something which shouldn't have happened.."raghu told her

They reached her home and raghu looked into her eyes and felt an unusual feeling he never felt antara was lwaving wen he called her "antara.. Are you coming tommorw"

"Yeah iam"antara replied

And she left..raghu stayed till she went in and he also left

Antara entered in her house when her anty asked "kahan se aa rhi hai"?

"Anty woh mein bustand se aa rhi thi lekin bus..bus:.she stopped her tears and spoke..woh bus nahi ayi..mere sur ne help ki aane mein"

Till then antaras uncle came and he asked for the bandages

"Uhh..uncle woh accident hogaya tha"

ACCIDENT?! Shreiked her uncle

"Han lekin choti si hi chot ayi hai aur kuch nahi"she lied

She rushed to her room closed her door when tears were rolling down her cheeks

She remembered how they touched her..their touch gave her the s**tiest feeling

She remembered how they tortured her and then how raghu's touch made her calm down..how he touched her back and how he kissed her there

She felt butterflies in her stomach and she felt his lips still on her back...she was all over in goosebumps...

She thought snd imagined him and then dozed off

The otherside raghu was being restless..he wanted to know why had he done such a thing..wat was antara thinking of him...
He lied on his bed and was staring at the ceiling...he was feeling the warmth of her..the smell of her..he feel of touching her...he felt himself in a different world.. He kept thinking of her and dozed off..

Ok guys luv u all and ur comments are far more valuable than anthing to me so pls like and comment and luv u too
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really good...
awesome...
loved it...
nice...
continue soon...
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Guys thank u fr ur valuable comment...iam really grateful to u people..,


Chapter 3

The next day started and raghu came early to see a glimpse of antara..he didn't know why but he just wanted to see her..

Antara arrived at last and sanya got hold of her...she was wearing a black kurti and blue jeans wid her blue hand bag...her eyes had dark circles and looked as if she had cried the whole night...the bandages were still there..seemed as she had changed it

She looked at raghu and memories of that day came infront of her... Tears were dropping down and she tried stopping them

Raghu spotted her and was walking towards her to say sorry but sanya started speaking to antara...

"Kya be..kya hogaya tujhe..bata,aise dark circles kyun hogaye hai and yeh bandages..and to roo kyun rhi hai..kya hua bata yaar"

Mein bataungi tujhe..baad mein abhi class ke liye chalte hai pls" said antara

Uh..-ok said sanya

"Uhh..antara.."said raghu stopping antara

Antara turned and greeted him

"Can i have a word with u??" Asked raghu

"Ummm,.sir iam sorry but actually we are getting late for class so can i come in the break..pls" said antara

"Yeah ok "said raghu disappointed

He knew that antara was ignoring him..she didn't want to talk to her...

The class was going on and antara told everything to sanya ..but not wat raghu had done cuz she knew that the answer would be "its just a sort of lust he had". Andthe next class was gonna be chem..

"K just chill ok.."said sanya ...ik tere saath bura hua and i think it was worst but u need to over cum it ok..aise roone se kuch nahi hone wala...just try removing all that from ur mind ok...?

"Yeah "replied antara cleAning her tears down the cheeks

The chem class started and raghu entered the class

Raghu glanced at antara and found her cleaning her tears...he felt bad for her.. I

"Ok students..today i have a little work to do and your lessons are anyhow done so u may continue wid ur other work till then i complete mine"raghu said

The class was very happy on this note of his and started wid their work..antara having her work done time to time didn't have nything else to do...she took out her chem tb and went through the notes in it...

Raghu was glancing at her every few seconds and antara had her head down in her book and even she was glancing..

At some point their eyes met..antara found raghu's eyes full of apology and her heart felt very bad looking at him..

She felt happy when he kissed then why was she ignoring him..why was she acting angry..well it is our nature that we cannot accept somethings at some points..

Antara thought to forget everything and continued wid her work..thinking to go meet raghu in break tym

After sometym raghu asked if anyone was free and would help him..

Everyone was busy wid their work except antara so she decided to go

Raghu told her to help him wid the correctiona of the first year books..

Antara did so sitting next to him and while doing dat their hands touched...

Antara found a different sort of feeling..electric shock in their touch.,

"sorry" raghu said again

It's ok said antara

The class ended and it was break..raghu stopped antara and again said sorry for yesterday..,she said that it wasn't his fault and it happens at tyms

The college ended and everyone were leaving when raghu stopped his car infront of antara and offered to drop her home but antara refused and said that sanya will be picking and dropping her college

They were happy..

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Everyday went welll after dat they were happy and concentrated in studies and today antara checked the calendar and found that the next day was her BD and the next week her exams..

She was happy and nervous..

She quickly got ready for college and sanya arrived on the gate..

"Oh my darling..advance happy birthday" said sanya as antara entered in and hugged her tight...

"Thanks sanya baby" said antara

They headed to the college and everyone were saying not to be around raghu sir cuz today he was highly tempered and was shoutin on everyone unnecessary

Antara thought to far today from him and headed to the class..all the classes went on perfectly and it was lunch...antara went to have her lunch wen one of the tr called her..and raghu was infront of the tr..he was hurrying to the principals office with checking some documents in his hand...

Antara ignored and headed to the tr and while going she she got into raghu and the documents fell down on the wet water...raghu got frustrated and angry and shouted so loudly that everyone was starring at him and antara..


"What the heck have u done..do you have any sense of responsibility..with how much efforts have i made them...dont uk ur etiquettes...have ur parents not taught u anything or wat..???"

"Sorry sir..iam really sorry..I...I"antara said wen raghu cut her in between and shouted louder..

"JUST GET LOST FROM HERE...GET OUT...DONT MAKE ME MORE ANGRY OK" roared raghu

"Sorry sir...sorry" antara said while tears were dropping from her eyes rolling down the cheeks..

She went from there but didn't forget her responsibilities..she quickly went to the other tr and the tr tried asking her wat had happen but she didn't answer she rather did the work and left still tears in her eyes...she was an emotional person...and after loosing her parents she became very lonely and more emotional..

Antara was sitting in the class..shedding silent tears..only one sentence of raghu pierced in her ears"Have ur parents not taught u anything"

This made her remind all of her parents..their cute memories..the way they pampered her...the way the had their accident..

Her lyf became incomplete widout them..they left her at a very small age and since then her uncle and anty looked after her...though her anty behaves so bad with her she was happy that they atleast helped her study..

She kept remembering all those moments when sanya came running to her..sanya was crying badly and panting..And she spoke

"antara..wo..woh..mamma..mamma..ko heart attack"

"Wat?!" Said antara tensed

Yeah..lekin...tu kyun...kyun ro rhi hai?? Sanya demanded

" No..no nothing..all ok" said antara..tu ab anty ke paas jaa..she needs u the most ryt now..u shuld be get going..

"Han mein nikal rhi hun lekin tu..who will drop u??" Sanya said

"I..I..I..will ask raghu sir to drop me..antara lied..she decided to take the bus..

Ok so let me leave bye..sanya said and left..

Antara again broke into tears..she couldn't help thinking of her parents again and again...The person she luved the most was the person who hurt the most..she tried to supress her tears wen the lunch was over...she didn't eat anything and didn't even feel to

The other side raghu realised wat he had done...he felt so broken ..so miserable dat he punched the wall hard hurting his hAnds..

The college was over and raghu didn't get a chance to talk to antara..

Antara was sitting at the bustand thinking of all that happened..with her face in her hands..she was trembling:.fearing if anything such would happen again.,and crying thinkin of the day..

Raghu was passing by when he saw a gal sitting der and sobbing..he realized dat it was antara..he got off and went and sat beside her...looking her cry he felt heartless..sumthing was piercing in his heart..

He sat beside antara and put his hand on her back and said...
"Antara"

Antara got up wid a jerk realizing it was raghu and quickly cleared her tears and put a fake smile on her face.."oh sir..its u i am sorry..I didn't realize.. I-i-i"she said wen raghu cut her and said"iam really really sorry.. I just couldn't control my anger "

@It's ok sir...it's nothing..am used to such.."said antara

She sat down and he sat beside her..there was silence between them for sum tym when antara spoke

"Uk sir when mom and dad were there..I didn't feel scared of anyone,no insecurity,no grief,no sadness..i knew that no one else but they would hold my hand..always stay wid me...they would support me always.. But i was wrong..they left me..wen i was 12..i felt so lonely that i decided not to talk to anyone..be alone in our house...wid their memories.. I don't y but i felt to die..that day if I wouldn't have insisted them to take me out..they wouldn't leave me..god wouldn't have given me such a big punishment of just being a little stubborn..everytym i look at them..i just feel,once just once can i get a chance to rectify my mistake,just one,then I won't be stubborn wid them,i will agree wat they say..but no..no one heard my cries..no one understood my pain..i was all alone there in that house wid a caretaker..after a month wen my uncle and anty rerurned back they came to me and decided to take care of me..they promised me that they would never let me feel the absence of my parents..and so they did..and iam very thankful to them..though my anty is rude wid me..i can say that they atleast love me that much to let me do my studies..and since then i was slowly over coming through the pain..and i almost forgot everything.,i tried being happy and succeded but...Today.. I again realised that i didn't have my parents to show me the right path..I don't have them to hug and cry...uk hw bad it feel...I dont have them wid me to play..i dont have them to..."antara was going to complete her sentence when she couldn't bear the pain and stopped..a tear rolled down raghu's cheeks and antara saw it..she got up and said.."um iam sorry..but i think i spoke a bit too much..."wid a false smile

Raghu cleared the tear and said.."antara..ik my words were harsh on you..ik dat And iam sorry for it..idk how many tyms i have said sorry but each tym i have done...i meant it wid all my might Nd heart.."he bent on his knee and folded his hands"pls forgive me..iam really very sorry"

"Uh..I didn't mean dat.." Said antara lifting up raghu "i said i just got a little uk senti..sorry sir iam really sorry..I-I nver meant to be dat.."antara said crying..

The thunder struck and antara hugged raghu being scared of it..Squeezingly shut her eyes..and hugged him tightly..

Both felt the warmth between them..raghu for a moment was suprised but soon even he put his hands around her...the hug between them was prolonged and after sum tym,.they realised and broke apart...

The rain started...

They had a weird silence between them...

Antara thought to cheer the mood and went to dance in the rain...she was happy..dancing in the rain she still felt the warmth of raghu's hug..the feeling of being secured...

Raghu kept admiring her standing at the bustand wwn he felt himself moving towards her..he felt sum sort of attraction he got frm her..the way he always used to get attracted to her...he felt love in his heart fr her...he didn't care about the rain..he kept moving towards her...

Looking at raghu coming towards her antara's heart was pumping fast...she felt strong feeling for him rise in his heart...

Raghu came forward and held antara's hand and put their finger together...antara kept staring him in his eyes and seem to have lost in them... Raghu held her waist and antara found butterflies in her stomach...she put her hand on his shoulder and they danced in the rain...it was a perfect dance by changing positions...raghu kept holding her and dance...after sum tym wen they found them selves looking in each other's eyes..they were lost..they didn't realise when they came close to each other...there was an inch of distance between them wen they were still moving close...their lips about to touch...getting goosebumps all over the body...then a small corner of antara's mind spoke..".this shouldn't be happening...he-he-he doesn't love me..then how can I just" And there raghu's mind spoke "I can't do this...she is my student..I shouldn't be doing this"

Both of their lips were about to touch when they parted...antara and raghu both felt weird enough not to talk...

The rain stopped and antara and raghu were still standing there...the realised their surroundings and antara sat in raghu's car and they both left for antara's house...On the way none of them talked...antara glanced at raghu frequently and checked the tym... It was 12..

Antara felt a little sad wen she realised dat she didn't have anyone to wish are at 12 on my birthday

They reached her house when she found her anty peeping through the window...antara got down the car and didn't feel right to say anything to raghu...she took steps to the house wen raghu called her...

"Antara..wait a moment.."

Antara turned n didn't speak

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY" said raghu

Antara stood there suprised..

"How..how..how do u know its my birthday today..."

"Well i heard sanya speaking to her BF that she would plan a suprise tomorrow for u as its ur birthday..."

"Uh.,uh"antara had no words left to say.,

She wanted to go and hug him tightly buy as her anty was peeping through the window..she couldn't...she said a simple thank u and smile wholeheartedly and left..,

Raghu went home and settled in his pajamas..he thought of the moment they hugged.the moment they were dancing...the moment they were to kiss..the moment their lips touched but then.,they didn't have their kiss...he felt it love but then said dat it was attraction

He dialed his phone to his BFF and narrated everything..

His best friend ensured dat it was luv and no matter wat the gal also luved him..he made me understand dat age in no problem..love matters...

There antara entered the house and her anty started her question and Ans round...antara lied dat she was wid sanya in the hospital and wen she went on asking further questions her uncle popped there...

"Antara i think ki aaj kuch special day hai..."

Antara looked at him and smiled...

His uncle burst into laugh and gave her a sideways hug and his uncle blessed her...

"happy birthday beta...tumhe jivan ki saari khushiyan mile"

Antara said a thank u and went to seek her anty's blessing and her anty gave it in a rather forceful way..

She went to her room changed in her nightsuit and layed oh her bed she was also thinking the was they hugged..the way they were dancing..antara could feel his touch all over her body..she remembered how they were about to kiss and how he wished her at 12...Thinking all this antara dozed off on the bed...

Yeah iam done...ik this is the worst parts i have written cuz uk iam not that gud in expressing love scenes...

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Sorey guys for the delay but uk here skuls open a little wuick and now elections r on the way so i am even participatin in them pls pray fr me to win

Chapter
It was a beautiful morning..the sun beams were hitting antara's face..she was happy..thousand tyms happy and the day luked so beautiful to her..she felt immensely happy today..cuz it was her birthday...her most awaited day...

She quickly got up and searched her wadrobe and left for fresh up...after sum tym she came out all freshen up...Trying to put out the water from her hair...she den picked up the hair dryer and made her hair dry..after sometym she was all dressed up...in a white kurti with black jeans..matching earings..open hair which seemed to be flaunting...

She was going to leave wen she found a box with rust on it...she hold the box and tried opening it..:wen it had a note..

From mommy-to my dear daughter

Antara den went fr the box and der was a pendant in heart shape...

She found her uncle standing at the door..he said

"Ur mom was a very nice woman..she was given dis pendant by our mother and den she decided to pass it on to u wen u were born ...hows it?"

"Its beautiful" antara replied "i love it"

Antara quickly wore it and gave her uncle a gud hug and left for college..the whole way she was admiring the locket...its beauty and elegance...

In the next 15 mins she was at college...
Sanya came running. To her and gave her a tight hug

"Oh my darling happy birthday...wait a min"and she took out a box out of her bag "heres ur gift"

It was a beautiful Antique watch...it luked very elegant and antara had an old hobby of collecting antique stuffs so it was lyk the best gift for her...

The day was gonna start...surprises were yet to cum..and antara felt really weird all of sudden entering the class...der was a man sitting on the the first place wid a black shirt and white jeans..he luked at antara for a second and then luked away..antara recognized him at once... It was his best friend kaushik back from UK... She ran to him at once and hugged him tight...kaushik hugged her back...

"Wen did u cum" antara asked after releasing him

"Uh..just yesterday..for ur bd"

And then there of them wen out to talk...after a while kaushik took leave and antara spotted raghu..she kept luking at him for a while, he was talking to the principal and very seriously..luked lyk he was pleading to him on something...

Wen he turned at last antara took her eyes away from him..he spotted her and walked towards her...

"U luk beautiful"

"Thank you sir"

"N by the way happy birthday"
And den he left..seemed dat he culdnt luk at her for long..antara felt awkward

The day went as usual...everyone wished antara but no one gifted her a thing except sanya...antara felt bad enough but it wasnt the first tym..it had been many a times lyk this..

It was chemistry class and raghu entered..he luked in a miserable way... He took the class and without a word left..antara was feeling very sad...it seemed as though he knever knew her...

It was 5 and home tym wen sanya came running to antara..

"Antara ruk..imp hai"

And antara luked at her suprisingly...sanya told her while panting dat the principal has decided to shift raghu from here to another institute of the same branch..

Antara felt miserable from inside..it felt as though a part of her was gone...as if her life was gonna end..and now she understood everything

"Jaldi jaa aur unse bast kar" sanya said

Antara left for raghu's office...raghu was sitting der marking sum papers..

Antara asked the persmission to enter

And raghu luked at her a once

"Oh antara pls enter"

"Sir sanya informed me dat u are leaving...y wats the matter"

"Uh i think th principals got a mood swing...he days dat i shuld be teaching sum othe place instead of here..he feels that the others need me more and i-i actually dont wanna leave..," raghu completed and luked at antara and den continued wid her work..

"Btw..y are u here" he asked after a minutes silence..

"Uh just getting bored goin home..ders nothing interesting der...no cake no gift so i just felt cuming and talking to u..."

"Oh thats gr8"

They kept talking for a while and then antara said sumthing she regretted sayin the very moment..

"I havent got gifts except sanya and sumtimes my uncle till now..i havent got a boyfriend since den...i haven't been kissed at all and dats hw i feel am a big boring woman"

Raghu stared at her after dis...and antara felt awkward..,

"I-let me take ur leave now" she said and stood up to leave wen raghu held her hand...

She felt an electric current pass though her body...it seemed lyk for the first tym sumone held it that way...

She turned and raghu put his hand around her waist and pulled her towards him...she luked in her eyes..they luked mesmerized...

And then he pushed her against the wall...
He luked it her eyes for then...it seemed sum tym of spark in them...he luked at her then And then and antara also seemed lost in his eyes...there was just inches of space between them...lyk it was just left for breathing...they culd feel their breath on each others face... And them antara felt raghus arms around her bare skin...she felt it soothing..

And then his lips joined with her...and hers wid his..and they closed their eyes...they explored every part of each other.. Raghu was still guiding her and her being a gud student followed him... She was moving her hand around his hair and raghu around her bare skin...it went on again and again..and finally they parted for breath.. It felt as though they took out all their love today..and the feeling for each other today...raghu still luked at her in a tempting way and antara kept her eyes closed leaning against the wall...and then she felt raghu's wet kisses all around her neck...it felt hard for ther to resist..the love for him...all the feelings for him..which she suppressed all these months... She dung her nails into his back...taking the pleasure of his kisses...he was in a way licking her face...all filled with kisses...antara never got soo much love from anyone till now...and it was really new to her...she felt this day as the best day of her whole lyf.. The best birthday ever...raghu slowly loosened her zip and slid of her her sleeves a bit and kissed her shoulders...and in this while he gave her a bite near her neck...antara moaned and groaned with pain and pleasure..it felt dat they wouldnt be leaving each other today... It was 6 and they were der in a corner still in each other's embrace...

Had not the clock ring they would hve made their love till then...and atlast they realised what they were doin...antaras sleeves were till her clevage part and were gonna slid more down wen she held it and tried putting the zip back...but then raghu helped her in this...and she kept her eyes down...after sumtym wen antara was leaving raghu said

"For sumone who has kissed the first tym...u r really gud"

And antara left blushing...

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