Jai's dilemma. updatd on pg 26 the end - Page 20

Posted: 17 years ago

U can't end it.šŸ˜­...please...

its beautifully written šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Edited by pooja.walia - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
hi
thank u ziddi princess and pooja. thank for the feed backs.

min whr are u?

i am posting a loooong chapter do tell me about it.
take care guys.
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                                               kamy Edited by kamy - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
here goes the long chapter. all the silent readers out there do tell me ur views about it. i am ending this ff so please send ur feed backs. positive or negative both are welcome.
do tell me if it has bored u to tears šŸ˜­ šŸ˜­ šŸ˜­

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Bani threw him a look and turned her attention on the conversation.
'han.. Kanchanā€¦ meinā€¦ woā€¦.; Bani looked at him again.
'Han.. kahoā€¦.lekinā€¦ Bani took a deep breath.
The next instant Jai grabbed the phone from her and disconnected the line. Bani looked stunned at his behavior. 'yeh kya kiya aapneā€¦' she managed to say.
'meine sahi kiyaā€¦' came the reply.
God! How impossible can a man get. Jaaiā€¦ā€¦ā€¦.. yeh aapne acha nahin kiyaā€¦.' She screamed. He pulled her towards him and silenced her with a kiss.
'chodoā€¦. Chod ' she tried pushing him aside. His cell rang. His hold loosened. Bani grabbed the phone before him from the bed.
'Do muje BAniā€¦.'
'Oh really!' her eyes twinkled. ' Mein aap ko phone doon?' she frowned holding the phone above her head. Kuch din pehle mera ek phone koi admise girgayathaā€¦. Nahin gira nahiā€¦. Kisine phekha thaā€¦ yaad heinā€¦' she threatened waving the phone.

Oh! Noā€¦ Baniā€¦ thum aisa bilkul nahin karogeā€¦.. He said trying to grab the phone from her hand.
Acha!....kyon nahinā€¦. She said thrashing his hand away from the phone.
'No sweet heartā€¦. You will do no such thingā€¦. Usme mere sab clients aur mere kuch delegates ka number heinā€¦.. thum dedo muje ache bache ban kar muje doā€¦..he said advancing towards the cell.
'Nahinā€¦. Aap abhi Kanchan ko phone karke sorry kaho aur jo wo pooch rahi hein teek se jawab denaā€¦..'
He gave her an are you out of mind look.
Acha tho is phone ko akhri bar dekho aapā€¦.. she said waving the cell. The cell phone slipped accidentally from her hand to the marble ground with a sound.

Ooops! Bani looked horrified.
She looked guiltily at much stunned Jai and the cell which was lying on the floor. He grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him.
She looked away not meeting his eyes.
'dekho idarā€¦..' he demanded.
She forced her   to look at him. He stared at her for a moment.
'I am so sorry I didā€¦ā€¦ before she could complete her sentence he silenced her with another kiss. That took her breath away.

Before he could crush her in another hug she struggled free and ran downstairs

Jigyasa saw her on the stairs and wheeled her chair from the hall towards the stairs.
Jigyasa scanned her face. A smile appeared on her lips as Bani came down the stairs. Bani looked blushingly at her.
'kucha acha huaā€¦ right?' Jigyasa asked.
BAni nodded. Jigyasa let her pass and she wheeled her chair back to her room.

BAni carried breakfast and tea upstairs.
He took the paper from the tray and sat down on her day bed with it.
She poured him tea and handed him.
Bani looked thoughtful drinking her tea. He noticed and asked, 'kya soch rahi ho?'
'wo mein Kanchan ke barein meinā€¦. Mein usse kyaā€¦..' she sighed.
'thum kya lekar beit jathe ho yaarā€¦
'abh muje kya karna chahiyeinā€¦.? She asked eagerly.
' abh thum kuch math karna zyada math sochna.'
'aise kaisa hoga she thought. Yeh tho London chala jayega.. phir mein kya karoonā€¦ her face fell at the thought of it.
Kya hua?'
'kuch nahin.. She forced a smile.

'Where's Kanchan? He asked suddenly.
'She is in Delhi now. She has a boutique there. She was in US with her husband now they have got a shop in Delhi and they are planning to open one in Uk or US I don't know.'
Where did she want you to go? To Delhi?'
'Mm but she said to go with her where ever she chose to take meā€¦..' Bani moved her gaze elsewhere.
'Come hereā€¦ he stretched his hand. She took it hesitantly. He pulled her to his side and she fell on his lap.
Burying his face in the crook of her neck he asked, 'kya sach much thum muje chod kar jane wali thiā€¦..
Bani's eyes filled. Her throat tightened.
He turned her face towards him..' aansoo kyon?'
'muje nahin pataā€¦.' She said blinking away her tears.
'lekin muje pata heinā€¦.' He said kissing her neck and sending a rippling sensation to her senses.
'thum muje chod kar nhin jana chahthi BAniā€¦.'
BAni nodded in daze.
'phir aap muje chod kar kyon jarahe hoā€¦.'.she couldn't let it go.
She felt him still.
'meine thum hein bataya na ki muje business keā€¦ā€¦'
'han ā€¦ sorry.. aap jayienā€¦.' She said getting up from his lap and walking towards the bathroom. She locked the bathroom and splashed water on her face. Tears and water glided down her face. She stared at herself in the mirror.
'kyon ro rahe ho thum..' she asked herself. Wo tho chala jayega thum hein patha hein ki unka zamane bar ka business hein. Phir ulloo ki tharah kyon soch rahe hoā€¦.
She splashed water on her face again and wiped it controlling her emotion took a long breath and got out of the toilet.
He had finished his breakfast by the time she got out of the bathroom. She took the tray and went down not meeting his eyes. She feared he would notice her crying. She didn't want to trouble him.

Bani's mood was off the whole day. Maasi asked her if anything was wrong.
BAni was in the kitchen maasi asked , 'beta thum logon ka packing sab hogaya? Bas 3 din hi baki heinaā€¦.'
BAni didn't know what else to say to her. She thought for a wwhile and replied.
'wo maasi abhi mein nahin jarahi hoonā€¦. Mein kuch din baad chali jaoongiā€¦.'
'wo kyon?'
'woā€¦ meri visa mein kuch gadbad hein maasiā€¦'
'thho phir munna ko bhi rukna chahiyeinaā€¦. Wo bhiā€¦'
'NAhin maasi aap ko pata hein ki unka businessā€¦..'
'kya business beita jo apni beewi se aaram se beit kar bath karne keliyein bhi time nahin heinā€¦.' Maasi accused.
'maasiā€¦ jane do naā€¦. wo tho wahan jakein busy hongeinā€¦ mein bas room mein beit kar bore hogi naaā€¦.'
'han baiā€¦ thum logon ko tho sab kuch patha heinā€¦..' maasi sighed.
BAni excused her self and went upstairs.

Jai came early from the office. Bani was putting his things in the cupboard.
She looked surprised to see him.
'aapā€¦'
'han meinā€¦. He grinned. Taking long strides and pulling her into his arms.
'thum jaldi thayyar hojao hum log aaj bahar chale engeā€¦.' He said releasing her.
'kahan?'
'thum chalo bhiā€¦'
She went to the cupboard chose a pink sari.

BAni was ready in fifteen minutes. She blushed as his gaze swept her.
He took her out to dinner. Bani were overwhelmed at the affection he was showering on her. He took her hand ushered her to the restaurant. Their table was set beautifully. She was amazed at the sight. They took their respective seats. Bani looked at the man she loved and cherished. Jai gave her a warm smile. Her heart melted.
This was the man she once hated and feared she thought. And here she was head over heals in love with him. Her whole life depended around him. And he was leaving to London with out her? She tried her best to conceal her emotion showing on her face. She would let him go. She wouldn't tie him around her just because it would break her heart to let him go. But she would do it for the sake of their love.
He was very passionate about his work andā€¦ of her the thought send color to her cheek.
Jai studied his wife and wondered what was causing her to blush.
The waiter came and he ordered for them both taking her consent.
As the waiter left she asked, 'kya aap ki jaane ki sab thayyari hogyaaā€¦?'
'yahan hum yeh sb abthein nahin kahenge BAni.. mood off karne ki bath bilkul nahinā€¦' he evaded the subject.
'Sorryā€¦ aap kahiyeinā€¦.' She said guiltily.
'Mmā€¦since you have asked meā€¦ jaane ki sab thayyari hogya heinā€¦. I did try to post pond it butā€¦
'It's okayā€¦ mein yoohinā€¦.. wo sab chodoā€¦. aap kahiyien'.
He smiled taking her hand in his.
'We will not waste any more of our time from now onā€¦' he whispered brushing his lips on her palm.
'Bani blushed friuously.

Jaiā€¦.. Called a voice over themā€¦.
Bani turned her head to look at the owner.
Roshni walked briskly towards them and put her hand around his shoulder.
BAni scowled pulling back her hand from his hold.
Jai's face tightened.
'Roshni thumyahan kaise?' he asked taking her hand off his shoulder.
'meri bhi chahne wale hein jaiā€¦' she said gloriously.

"Agar hein tho yahan kya kar rahi hoā€¦.." Bani controlled her urge to ask her.

'so .. Jai tell me thum kabh jarein hoā€¦..'
'is hafthein meinā€¦'
'Acha tho yeh send off dinner hein Bani ki tharaf seā€¦' she smirked.
BAni smiled in spite of her rude behavior.
Roshni frowned.
'Aap ki chahne wale bore tho nahin honge Roshni ..ji..' BAni asked.
Roshni ignored her returning her attention to Jai.
'Tho Jaiā€¦ hum baad mein milengeinā€¦ā€¦..' she leaned and planted a kiss on his cheek.
BAni caught her breath.
Jai looked at BAni.
Roshni gave her a victorious smile.
BAni gritted her teeth as Roshni left them.
Bani stared at her husband who looked slightly embarrassed.

'thum muje aise kyon dekh rahi hoā€¦' he asked. Rubbing his cheek where Roshni kissed.
'Bas.. yoon hi.. aap ke aise aur bhi dost heinā€¦ agar hein tho introduce karva denaā€¦' she muttered.
'thum muj par gussa kyon ho rahein ho yaarā€¦.'
'I am not angry' she snapped.
Their food arrived. BAni picked on her food.
She attacked her food with the fork unaware of his attention upon her.
''thum Roshni ka gussa khane pe kyon dikha rahein hoā€¦..' he asked.
Jai cursed Roshni for spoiling their dinner.

BAni's mood did not improve. Roshni appeared before them with a man on her side.
She introduced the men ignoring Bani.
'yeh Raj saxena hienā€¦.. aur yeh jai Waliaā€¦'
The gentle men shook hands.
Jai introduced his wife to Raj.
BAni studied Rishni'd every move. Roshni advanced towards Jai and BAni knew that was for a hug. She hurriedly stepped between them.
Raj excused and went out to get his car.
Roshni again tried to get near him. Bani caught his hand and ushered him to the car park. On the way to the parking lot she whispered to Roshni. 'get your hand off My husband. I am very particular about the person I love.. agar kuch sharam hein .. tho unka peecha chod denaaā€¦'
Jai had to strain his ears to hear her. He could not get what she said.
Roshni's face blanched.

BAni was still annoyed at the turn of events. She was quiet on the way back to their house.

She paced up and down in her room. Jai went to change his dress. She was still pacing when he got out of the bathroom. He looked at her for a moment and asked,'thum gussa kyon ho?'
'I am not angry..' she snapped.
'acha! Tho idar udhar kyon goom rahi ho thumā€¦..'
'mein exercise kar rahi hoonā€¦.'s he gritted her teeth she couldn't believe Roshni kissed him and she couldn't do anything about it.

'Baniā€¦. Bas yaar thum kya lekar beit jathe hoā€¦.'
'mein jane doonā€¦. She scowled. 'agar koi muje aake kiss karein tho aap asie hi jane detheinā€¦..
'mein uska mooh thod dethaā€¦' came the instant reply.
A smile appeared on her face. 'tho mein jake us Roshni ka mooh thod doonā€¦.' He eyes glinted at the thought of it.
Abh yeh sab kehne ka kya fayda thum hein mauka tha thum isthimal kyon nahi kiyaā€¦' he said advancing towards her.
He caught her shoulder and pulled her towards him. 'itna gussa kyon?'he asked imprisoning her with his eyes.
'kyon kiā€¦..
'kyon ki.. thum bahoth jealous hogayi thiā€¦.. he said cupping her face in his hands.
'jealous kyon ho mienā€¦'
Kyon ki jo thumein dena chahiyein tha wo Roshni ne diyaā€¦..'
'kya?'
'kiss.. he whispered showering kisses on her face.
'Nahiā€¦
'Acha!
'"Han.. mein Roshni ko pasand nahin karthiā€¦wo tho badla liya tha us din kaā€¦.'
Kis din ka..' he asked kissing her yes.
BAni was quiet her whole being was focused on his kisses. She was drowning in the passion he was evoking in her.
'kis din ka badla..' he repeated.
'us din ka.. jab meinā€¦.'
He chuckled and claimed her mouth in a kiss shattering her reserve.


BAni snapped opened her eyes. She was imprisoned in his arms. She tried getting up and was pulled back with the same force.
'chodiyena.. muje..'
'NAhin..' he murmered half asleep.
'Time bahoth ho chukka hein.. sab log neecheā€¦.'
'chup..'he said sleepily.
'lekin..' she struggled to free her self.
'chup..'
His cell phone rang and he picked it up.
'hello''
'mr.WAliaā€¦.' cried the other endā€¦
'Yes'
'Kahan hein meri diā€¦.. unka phon kyon nahin lag rahiā€¦'
'koun' he was confused.
'Rano..'
'Ranoā€¦' he repeated.
'Han meri di kahan heinā€¦.
BAni snatched the phone from his hand.
'Rano..
'diā€¦ cried rano heaving a sigh of relief.
'Kya hua Rano? Thum pareshan kyon ho?'
'di.. meine kitni bar is do din mein aap ka phon try kiyaā€¦'
'wo Ranoā€¦.meri phone kkharab hogayi thiā€¦.' Bani threw him a look.
'Kya bath hein diā€¦. Aap kush sunayi deti heinā€¦'
'hmā€¦mein kush hoonā€¦' she said. Looking lovingly at her husband.
He snatched the phone from her hand. And BAni gave him a don't you dare look..'
'Ranoā€¦. Thumhara kya programme hein aajā€¦' he asked grinning at her.
'meriā€¦meinā€¦woā€¦' Rano was extremely surprised at his friendliness.
'Expect us at noon we will see you then bye take care.'
Before Rano could say anything he disconnected the call.
BAni looked disbelievingly at him.
'aisa math dekho muje yaar..' he said smiling at her stunned face.
BAni did the unexpected she gave him a kiss on his cheek.
'thank you dearā€¦. Thumhari aur koi sister hein Pia ke ilavaā€¦' he asked holding her in his arm.
'kyon?'
'ek aur kiss. keliyeinā€¦..' he chuckled as she hit him with a pillow.

BAni and jai left home after breakfast to meet Rano. On the way they bought few dresses for Rano. Jai insisted to get her more and Bani denied. He was on the phone most of the time. He disconnected the call as she came to the counter to pay.

Threesome spent few hours together. Rano was in awe of him first. Later when she saw her sister's interaction with him she thawed.
'Mein bathoh kush hoom aap keliyein diā€¦. Rano whispered as Jai moved with his phone aside.
'Thank you Ranoā€¦' BAni hugged her.
'Ky mein abh use jeeju kehkar pukaroon?'
'kyon nahiā€¦' came the reply from Jai.
Rano blushed.
'mein thumhari jeeja tho hoon..'
Rano smiled and nodded.

Jai and Bani returned home in the evening.
They were welcomed by an unexpected guest.
'Maamiā€¦. Aap ki ek friend bahoth der se aap ki intezar kar rahi heinā€¦ wo maassi ki room mein hein..' announced Anu.
BAni and Jai exchanged glances.
They walked towards Maasi's room and heard laughter coming from the room. BAni opened the door and screamed looking at the figure sitting with maasi.
'Kanchannnnnnā€¦ā€¦'
'Baniā€¦. Finally thum aagayiā€¦..' said the woman got up from the bed and hugged Bani throwing a look at Jai who looked mighty embarrassed.
'thum yahan kaiseā€¦' asked BAni looking at her friend.
'Meine socha.. mein thum hein ek surprise dedoo agar mein kehkar aati tho thumhara yeh pati muje bahar phek deti thoā€¦..'
BAni smiled looking at Jai. Who looked pretty embarrassed ā€¦.
Wo kyon beta? Asked maassi confused.
'wo aap ka yeh beta hi bathayega maasiā€¦ mujse jyada inko sab pata heinā€¦' kanchan looked at him in mock anger.
Jai frowned.
'thum kaisiii saheli ho BAni introduce us properlyā€¦'KAnchan teased.
Introduction ki zaroorath heinā€¦.. thum hein tho ā€¦.'BAni contradicted.
'my dearā€¦ where's your mannersā€¦'
'Look who is talking? thum yahan kade hoke meri husband ki kachumbar tho bana rahi hoā€¦.. mannerless womanā€¦' Bani accused.
Kanchan and Jai smiled.
'Hi Kanchan..' Jai extended his hand.
'Hello Mr.Waliaā€¦nice to meet you..'
'Same here..'
'jhoot..'
Jai chuckled. He liked what he saw of her friend she was very friendly and loved the way his wife and she interacted.
Muje thumse kuch zaroori bath karni heinā€¦' she said to Bani and winking at maasi.
'Jai frowned.
'itna zyada frown math karna you will get creases on your forehead..' Kanchan teased.
Bani took her in his study. Jai retired to his room.
Suniyein muje aap se bhi bath karni heinā€¦' Kanchan called out to Jai.

Bani and KAnchan spoke almost an hour. Finally Bani agreed to her terms.
'thum apni pati se kehnaā€¦ abhiā€¦ muje aaj hi bathanaā€¦'
'Mmm..'
'mein neeche hoon maasi ke paas. mein unhein sab kuch bathadiyaā€¦ abh thum aur thuhari patidev ki manzoori baki hein..
'mm'
.
Bani went to her room in search of her husband.
He was lying on the bed in thoughts.
She cleared her throat and sat down next to him.
'thumhari saheli kahan hein? Chali gayi?'
NAhi neeche wait kar rahi heinā€¦'
'kyon?' he scowled.
Wo.. usne kaha ki meinā€¦.' BAni looked at him not knowing how to begin.
'Shootā€¦' he was impatient.
She asked me to go with her to Delhi tomorrowā€¦ since you are leaving to London what would I do sitting here.'
'What did you tell her?'
'I told her I'll ask youā€¦'
'What do you want to doā€¦" he asked taking her hand in his.
'You tell meā€¦'
'nahin Bani thum bathaho yeh thumhara life hein mein thumhein yehan beit ne keliyein nahi kahoongiā€¦'
'mein kya karoonā€¦ mein jaoonā€¦'
'Mm.. Go and experience new things in life.. uski chakkar mein muje math booljanaā€¦' he teased.
She forced a smile for his sake..
'Come on yaar cheer up.. thum jake bathadoo use ki mein ithni inhuman bhi nahin hoon aur maasi ko bhi bathana.. thumhari change of plans.
'wo sab KAnchan ne maassi ko batha diya hein..'
'Not badā€¦ kya thum hari friend yehan ruk rahi hein ya jarahi hein..'
She is going uska hotel mein ek room heinā€¦.. She asked me to go with her tomorrow at 7pm'
'hmā€¦'
'aap ka flight ka time..'
'wo 9pm ko heinā€¦ hum log sath niklengeā€¦.'
BAni got up swiftly and went out of the door. She stood at the closed door and blinked the tears.

Later in the night she helped him pack his dress. She did her packing after his. She threw few dresses in a bag and pulled the zipper. Jai noticed the change in her she was quiet. And most of the time looked pre occupied.
He walked to his music system and switched on the radio.

Lataji's voice filled the room.

Paas ayiyein ki hum nahinā€¦
Aayenge bar barā€¦
Bahein gale mein dal ke..
Hum roye sar sarā€¦
Aankho mein phir yeh pyar ki barsath hona hoā€¦.
Shayad phir is janam mein mulakath hona hoā€¦.
Lag ja galeā€¦

Bani went and switched off the player.
'Basā€¦.' She muttered.
'kya thum bhi.. ' he chuckled and went and hugged her.


Bani and Jai was quiet the whole day they spoke when necessary. Jigyasa noticed her brother and Baniā€¦.
She commented during lunch.
'kya kar rahi ho aap logā€¦..'
Kya? He asked.
'kyon kar rahi hoā€¦. BAni kya htumā€¦'
'Jigyasa basā€¦ Jai didn't want to continue with the topic.

Jai and BAni took maasi's and dadi's blessings.
Jai's chauffer took him to the airport . KAnchan came to pick up BAni..
Jai galcned at his wife she avoided his glance. BAni couldn't bear to see them go apart. It tore her heart.
They were quiet in their respective cars.


BAni couldn't believe what she was doing. She stopped on her track. Mein nahi jasakthi aaj nahinā€¦. This is not rightā€¦.'
'Kya hua asked KAnchan..
'Kanchan mein thumhare sath nahi aasakthi..'
'kyon?' she was shocked.
'pata nahin muje yeh lag raha hein ki meinkuch achanahikar raha hoomā€¦'
'kya kehrahi ho thum? Pagal tho nahin.. thm hara jai tho abhi.. London keliyein nikal chukein hongeā€¦ look at the timeā€¦'

'han pata hein muje ki abh kya wakth hogayi hein.. lekin mein aaj thumhare sath nahin aassakthiā€¦' mein kal ya parson ..'
Kanchan studied her face for a long moment and said. 'teek hein jaisa ki thumhare marziā€¦.. Call me if you need anything.'
'Sure.. and thank you Kanchanā€¦' Bani hugged her.

It was half past eleven when BAni reached Walia mansion. Tony opened the door for her. He was surprised to see her. 'Madam aap..'
'Han Tonyā€¦ mein aaj nahin jarahi hooonā€¦.. sab log kahan heinā€¦'
'apne apne kamre meinā€¦'
'teek hein mein subah milloongi.. thum jaoā€¦'
She dismissed him and went to her room. She threw the bag aside and sat on the bed. She felt his presence. She felt the scent of his perfume. She took a deep breath and looked around. She did not know how long she sat on the bed. She got up and went to freshen up.
Bani got out of the bathroom in a night gown she stood stunned looking at her bed.

Jai was sitting on her day bed crossing his legs and he was unaware of her presence. His jacket was thrown on the bed. Bag was lying on the floor. BAni looked back to him not believing her eyes she blinked once again and screamed. 'aap..'
Jai jumped from the bed astonished. 'thum?'
'Aapā€¦ yahan kaiseā€¦..' she was half smiling.
'thum yahan kaiseā€¦' he couldn't believe his luck. He was thinking of going to Delhi catching the first flight and bring her back to him.
'meine aap se poocha pehele aap yahan kaise?'
'meinā€¦ aaj fly karne ka mood nahin tha isliyein mein wapas ā€¦..'
'lierā€¦.'
Thum yahan kaise..'
'meri bhi mood nahin thi isliyeinā€¦.'
'jhootiā€¦'he pulled her in a hug.
BAni wrapped her arms around his neck.
'I couldn't go leaving you hereā€¦' he said burying his face in the crook of her neck.
'abh kya karengeā€¦ jana tho padega hiā€¦'
'han lekin meine Aiditya se bath karli hein.. he will go tomorrowā€¦. Gali tho mila muje lekin wo jayegaā€¦.' He said smiling.
'aur aap?'
'mein thab thak intezar karoonga jab thak meri biwi ki vasa nahin lagein'
Really?' she couldn't believe.
'Really.' he said taking her face in his hands and kissing her forehead.
'lekin Kanchan se meien kaha ki mein uske paasā€¦.' She said
'Kanchan koun?' he asked tracing her face with his finger and kissing her sensless.
Jaiā€¦.' She called pushing him away from her.
'I need to tell you something..' she was serious.
'what?' he was frightened to hear what she was about to tell him. He wouldn't let her go to KAnchan no matter what.
'its serious Jaiā€¦.'
What?'
God! She grimaced she was actually frightening him.
Mr.Waliaā€¦ she stopped and looked at him.
'Han kahoā€¦'
' I am so much in love with you that it tears my heart not to tell you about it.'
Jai looked shocked. It took him a minute to realize what she had said.
She looked at his shocked face and continued, 'thereā€¦ you seeā€¦ I feel much better now like a ton has been lifted out of my chest.
He sweared and pulled her into his arms crushing her to his chest.
God has brought them together and he prayed to God to keep them happy and together for the rest of their lives.

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please ignore my mistakes. God bless you guys. take care
                                                    kamy
Posted: 17 years ago
šŸ‘ šŸ‘ kamy well done I have enjoyed reading your ff.
Posted: 17 years ago
brilliant kamy šŸ‘ šŸ‘ read it all in one go...
Posted: 17 years ago
Fantastic... šŸ‘
I wish it never ended....

Well please start another one soooooooooon

Poo

Posted: 17 years ago
You ended a beautiful ffšŸ˜­
They made up, and Rano called Jai JeejušŸ˜³
Loved the Kanchan character and how Bani and her interacted with each other and she teased Jai
It was wonderful ff
Have a safe trip, and great vacation
When you return back i hope you start a new ff


Posted: 17 years ago
just finished reading..its a gr8 ending...
going to miss reading this
thanx
Posted: 17 years ago
oh my such a beautiful end šŸ˜­
u ended just the right way šŸ‘
will miss it yaar šŸ˜­ šŸ˜­ šŸ˜­
take care šŸ˜Š šŸ˜‰
Posted: 17 years ago
Wonderful end! šŸ˜³ šŸ˜³
šŸ‘
I'm a sucker for happy endings! šŸ˜ƒ
Have a gr8 vacation and I hope ypu write another ff when you get back!

V. šŸ˜Š

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