TwiNj 5S - Don't Fall For The Tutor - Part4/Page21 - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago
She gift him a PS4 eh, ok so I'm going to take credit for that😆.
I was curious though in the party when she couldn't find him I was thinking oh no don't tell me she's going to fing him in bed with someone😲 relieved that the boys got her back. Yuvraj is really sweet in this story. Was he shocked, hurt or disappointed in hearing that she wasn't a virgin, seems Sarna is confused, did he just challenge her to kiss him.
Oh boy oh boy things are getting interesting😆
Awesome update Nemo.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dude what the hell just happened
That was too much for me to digest. I'm totally shipping Twinj right now. but I'm sort piss Twinkle wasn't pristine, I wanted Kunj to do the honour. Btw, this PS4 is not at all a bad choice... way to go girl. Update quickly pretty please.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic Nemo..
Kunj Sarna is a smarty...
Loved the date scene..
And I love the equation twinkle share with the boys..
Wait twinkle is not a virgin?? Look KUNJ was shocked or confused..
Boy she challenged her to kiss him to prove she is a good kisser
Wow..
U r going to finish this nooo..
Plz update next part soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love LOVE ABSOLUTELY LOve this story!!

This chappie was amazing👏👏
The biys and Twinkle are becoming such good friends *sigh*
Loved how Kunj wrapped his arm around her and said 'I've got you'!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃

Loving this story to pieces..
Thanks for this gem!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Loved the comaraderie the guys share with Twinkle
How they have her back at the party
Loved the challenge Kunj threw at her for the kiss.
Can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg i loved it !!!! When are you updating the next part ??? Please update soon ! 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow wow wow !! Just awesome dude... I'm totally in love with this one :))) plz . update it soon !! N nooo last one ??
Ohhh !!!! Plz updateee
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg omg omg! I just love this story! Amazing is the word. This is the first time i've read your story and i'm already a fan of your writing. Beautifully penned down man. Would love to read more of your works. Index?
And pleaseee update the last part sooonnn. Can't wait. And the mention of the kiss got me blushing. Omg updateee soon girl. <3
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: naaz.samreen

Omg omg omg! I just love this story! Amazing is the word. This is the first time i've read your story and i'm already a fan of your writing. Beautifully penned down man. Would love to read more of your works. Index?

And pleaseee update the last part sooonnn. Can't wait. And the mention of the kiss got me blushing. Omg updateee soon girl. <3


Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it 😳
Welcome to the forum btw! 


I don't have an index but all my work is listed in the Media Gallery under my username if you want to read anymore 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohhh dear , amazing update ... please continue soon... why did you left me in a suspense 😉...  please tell me when are updating Edited by Flower.girl - 8 years ago