||Ye Laal Ishq Laakham FF ||chapter 5 pt 1 (page18) UPDATED !! :D - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
nihaa hum iss forum mein ab sirf iss fan fictn k liye aate hai iss liye aapse nivedan hai jaldi update kre
waise bahut jabar likha hai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_inu

nihaa hum iss forum mein ab sirf iss fan fictn k liye aate hai iss liye aapse nivedan hai jaldi update kre
waise bahut jabar likha hai...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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wahhh nihaaa kya likha hai i just loved it

jldi continue kr beta i can't wait likhti reh bs nd baby jldi mt krna plzzz mere liye thodi detail dena 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1 part 2

Laakhan celebrates Poonmi's success wth Poonmi . ohh haan result se yaad aaya ki Poonmi ki 5th position aayi hai in Bihar by getting 97 % in class 12th after all poonmi ne raat din ek karke mehnat ki thi. Both laakhan and Poonmi returns back to badi haveli anddd...hey bhaggu đŸ€ŁđŸ€Ł badki dadi bohra gayii hai...unhone poori haveli sir par utha diya hai ki aaj to poonmi ka result tha aur wo kahan chali gayi hai đŸ€”. Phoolan Thakur is so happy ki for he first time begusarai mei kisi ne mehnat karke itne achche number laaye hai. Badki dadi asks poonmi ...aye poonmi kahan thi itni daer đŸ€” .. wo badi dadi hum laakhan thakur ke saath bazaar gaye the đŸ€” * makes innocent face * and Laakhan agrees with her. Achcha to ee baat hai... aye bailbuddhi 😆 humko sab samajh mei aata hai ki tum dono ke mann me ka chal raha hai đŸ€Ł Laakhan is blushing â˜ș... haayee... ab tum dono ki shaadi hone jaa rahi hai ab tumdono ko ek doosre ka khayal rakhna padega. Poonmi nods her head Jee badi amma !!! Badi haveli mei jashn manaya jaata hai poonmi ki success ka 😃 Poonmi becomes happy and laakhan is happy watching her happy â˜ș ...awww... đŸ€—

Few Days later Laakhan helps Poonmi to get her admited to college. Poonmi mann hi mann me khush ki Laakhan thakur humara kitna khayal rakhte hai 😳. Aaj Poonmi k college ka day 1 hai poonmi gets ready for college and laakhan comes to pick her up . After dropping her to college he asks poonmi ki college kitne baje khatam hoga , she replies ji 5 baje. Theek hai to hum aa jayenge 5 baje... time passes by college ka time khatam ho jata hai.. but abhi tak Laakhan Thakur ka ata pata nahi hai đŸ€” Poonmi wat karti hai main gate par. AAkhir Laakhan Thakur gaye kahanđŸ€” đŸ€” waqt guzarta jaata hai 5 se 6 baj jaate hai...lekin still no news of Laakhan . Poonmi gets upset and murmurs in her mind ki aisa kya hua ki laakhan thaukur humein lene nahi aaye, itne mei Dolt comes to pick her up. Bhaiyya Laakhan thakur kahan hai. Dolt replies ki bhaiyya ji ko kaam se Patna jaana pada... isliye humein bhej diya 😃 PATNA... Poonmi 's expression was shocked and upset. Poonmi ko to khush hona chahiye tha ki laakhan thakur nahi hai yahan. But ye news sunte hi Poonmi ka jaise rang hi udd gya.😕
Poonmi was upset as well as angry ... humsin bata kar nahi jaa sakte the đŸ€” itna kya zaruri kaam aan pada tha đŸ€”. Poonmi due to this dinner karne se mana kar deti hai😭.. Galat baat Laakhan Thakur... 😡 rula diya na Poonmi ko đŸ€”. Poonmi is messing with her Pillow and trying to sleep but she can't đŸ€”. s baat ko 2 din ho gaye... Laakhan Thakur abhi tak Patna se nahi aaye the...Poonmi ki bechhaini badhti gayi iss wajah se use fever ho gya. Badki Amma, Maya Bhabhi, guddi,vimla kaki got worried ki poonmi ko ka ho gya hai 2 din se na kuch theek se khaya hai na kisi se baat ki hai. Poonmi ne to apne cell phone ko jaise tyag hi diya tha, kisi ki b call pick nahi kar rahi thi.She was again like Lost and Found Case. đŸ€” sab kasoor Laakhan ka hai 😭😡. Poonmi ke sabr ka baandh toot gya tha . She was on mute mode , aisa lag raha tha use kisi ne mute hi kar diya ho đŸ€Ł. As usual she woke up , got ready, had nothing to eat, wore dark orange suit, which laakhan gifted her on her birthday😳. She went to college and this time she forgot her phone at home. opsie ...Poonmi hota hai hota hai đŸ€” jab aapka pyaar aako itne din na dikhey to sab sudh budh hi udd jaata hai 😛😆. Poonmi ki halat b kharab thi. 2 din without Laakhan Thakur 😭😭 aane do unhe .. hum b unse baat nahi karenge😡. In College she ignores priyom đŸ€Ł also.. iss poonamiya ko aakhir ho ka gya hai... jo lost n found ki tarah ghoom rahi hai. Poonmi reaches home safely with Dolt. Wo sidhe apne room me chali jaati hai. She takes cold shower, refreshes herself and tries to spend time with Guddi, soni, pintu, they are in shocking state to see Poonmi's condition😭. She again refuses to have dinner. đŸ€”.. Vimla kaki asks her in a worried tone... ka hua poonmi .. sab theek hai na.. Kuch nahi amma sab theek hai bas humein bhookh nahi hai. she rushes to her room . After 10 minutes she overhears the sound of vehicle. Poonmi soon comes out to see who has come. Yes it was none other than LAAKHAN THAKUR who looked dusty and tired..entered the badi haveli... đŸ€” .Poonmi smiled with a sigh of relief and then pretended that she doesn't care at all đŸ€” huh... humein nahi baat karni laakhan thakur se . She's back to her room & locks her door. Suddenly powercut ho jaata hai and Poonmi darr jaati hai... hey bhagwan ab ya hoga. Scared poonmi starts praying in her mind. Suddenly she feels that she's hold by some external force đŸ˜Č. Oh no..!!!! Poonmi is like she's gonna loose her breath đŸ€” *gulps*.. her feeling gives her goosebumps. within a second she realises that that person is Laakhan Thakur . Looks like he has came out of the shower ... haayeee wet shower look. Poonmi ki hearbeat aur fast ho rahi hai , the drops of water falling on her neck makes her sooo nervous and the song pehli baar mohabbat ki hai starts😳😳😳 â˜ș.. dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai...pehli baaar mohabbat ki hai...lalalala â˜ș. Poonmi's deep breath makes laakhan crazzy and he realises that she wants to be touched by him đŸ€” . He begins to tease her by kissing on her shoulder and then neck. She tries to run but he grabs her from behind & slowly bites her ear. Ouch !!! she shouts . Vimla kaki " ka hua poonmi" mai aaoon kya. She 's lost in the sweet feeling. Laakhan whispers in her ear apni amma ko jawab do. she replies kuch nahi amma hum theek hai. wo bas table se takra gaye. Now both are lost in their eye contact & Poonmi soon forgets that she's been angry..😆 Laakhan again begins to tease her. Poonmi says ...humein to aapse baat nahi karni hai.. Kahe. Laakhan replies back. Poonmi says that u din tell her that he was leaving for patna... đŸ€”.. I am sorry says laakhan. kaan pakad ke boliye sorry 😆..Achchchaaa... Laakhan's tone is even more teasing one . Btw i haven't missed u Laakhan Thakur.đŸ€Ł. Dekhiye aap nutanki mat kariye humein sab pata hai ki aap humse naraaz ho, aapne 2 din se kuch b theek se nahi khaya hai, humari yaad mei aapne to baat b nahi ki... aisa thodi hota hai. his tone is like an innocent baby one. â˜ș

Poonmi lost in his eyes kisses him â˜ș shocked and stunned Laakhan cups her face kisses her back very passionately. The two share sweet moments. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH pOONAM kUMARI... I LOVE YOU TOO LAAKHAN THAKUR 😳 and this part here ends with Laakham Hugs


to be kaantinued... đŸ€Ł



Edited by ..DRoadSoFar.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Kya yaar thoda aur likh deti, it was awesome😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanika_11

Kya yaar thoda aur likh deti, it was awesome😃


tani ab poora parr 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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bhadiya bht bhadiya...jaldi nxt prt update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jo jo hum laakham se karwa na chahe the sab ek saat instalment mein mil raha hai...Baah
Thakurain.. Aur likho
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: flat_everest

Jo jo hum laakham se karwa na chahe the sab ek saat instalment mein mil raha hai...Baah

Thakurain.. Aur likho


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Posted: 9 years ago
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humare emtions ka meter high kr k kaha ho madam nxt part plzzz

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