Originally posted by: iluvusakshi
superb yaar. absolutely brilliant. I am a fan of ur writing. the past n present r so well written.
waiting for further parts.
thanks for pm. pl continue
Originally posted by: LovingRaYa
It was not small acquaintance in past between RaYa. At least Ram can say a thank u to Priya when she cared for him but instead he offered price for her care which hurt her.
But seems in present scenerio he is doing everything to gain her attention by reciting the shayari in her honor 😉
Originally posted by: Prabina057
Superrbb update!!
Plz continue soon!
Thank u for pm!!
Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal
wah wah wah wah!! what a shayri at the end!...really amazing...well thnks for such a sweet reply...my comment to look forward! :-P lol...well i must appreciate it...and u should know that i am looking sooo forward to this ss to...wow...here rams character seems something new ...a Casanova... a rich brat...and a total flirt...well u didnt revealed much of his past...and the injury didnt got its space of mention... well how did that happened? hmm...mysterious...well priya helped him throughout humanity...and well a lil bunch of personal feelings... but it was more to it... and what ram did was insane...handing him a debit card through his managr!...seriously...now thats ridiculous... and surprising at a point.. :-) superb update...the length was good...and if it seems small to u...than i am waiting for a lengthy update in ur sense! :-P *every greedy raya fan..* :-) next jaldi..and thanks for pm..
Originally posted by: Rabiya_Shaikh
Oh My God, it awesome, loving it so Far...So Priya nurses Ram, but he in return hurts Priya by sending his Credit card. Loved Priya's Reply, And the last line was Fantastic. Superb update really, waiting for more. please update soon.
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