i read the whole story in one go aju and believe me its amazing! mujhe arsh version jyada pasand ahi kyonki wahan shilpa hi shilpa dikhti hai mujhe aur tumhare likhne ki style me sirf shilpa,uska innocence,uski masti nazar aati hai..i loved this os so so much ,,after a long i have read such a shilaplicious os and its superb se upar kuch...about the story...
loved dhariya and ohaana..u chose ohaana name for shilpa's daughter..and dhairaya ki aadatei bilkul papa jaisi..padhaku,champu ..where ohaana is like her mumaa...masti wali,jolly nature..i love both character...arman ko apni beti me shilpa dikhti hai aur uski adatein aur usey bahut pyar hai unse...aur shilap ko apne bete me...
ek choti si galti aur 3 saal ki saza..yeh love birds kaise kate honge itne long time ko ek dusre ke bina..par unhone ek dusre ka ansh jo paya tha trisha aur babu ke rup me isliye kaat liya par ab aamne samne hue toh sari galatfehmiya dur hui aur phir ek ho gaye...
par phir arman ko twins chahiye! sach hai doctors ko bachche chahiye hote hain par 4!hahhahahha...loved the whole os aju...
and the main thing..ur gif...bahut khubsurat hai..arman ka car wala,shilpa ka dono..mujhe bahut pasand aaye...
love u
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