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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Ri21

amazing. waiting for the next part 😊

THANKK YOUU😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: vidhu1

This was amazing dear!!
Judge uncle is nice... 😉 😉
DO update fast... :D :D

THANKIEE 
will try to update soon😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Awesome updt!

Loved it, especially the last words.
Cont soon, and thank u so much for the pm. ❤️

will cont soon
those words were a sign that they're meant for each other only😳
thanks a lot😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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THANKSS😃
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PART 3
Suman came home with pushkar and diya (shravan's sister)
Whereas shravan went to office because if he would've stayed there any more he wouldn't be able to control himself.

Home:
Su: tai zara vo guest room khali karna mai jaldi aapna saman vahan pe shift karti hoon.

Vandy: sumann...tum samaj q nai rahi ki tumhr aaram karna chahiye aur heavy cheeze toh bilkul maat uthao. Rakho inhe.

(Suman was like an angle who sorted all the difference between them and yaa vandy bhabhi n pushkar's mom all were changed for good. Suman ka jadoo hi aisa thaa)
Su:theek hai bhabhi :) par thoda kaam karne se kuchh nai hoga na.

V: SUMANN...jao aur haan milk bhej rahi hoon chup chap pee lena varna bade papa ko bataogi.

Su: okay :0


AFTER SOME TIME In Night

D: bhabhi kaisi hai aaki tabyat , yeh lijiye aapka dinner , pata hai mujhe ki aap bhar toh aayenge nai isliye mai hi aa gai aapko company dene ke liye.

Su: aacha hua vaise bhi mai bore ho rahi thii yahan par.

D: aap kuchh bhul rahi hai...kal kuch toh haii.

Su:aacha (acts as if she's trying to remember something) nahi toh kal...kuchh haii..shayad 
naii..mujhe yaad nai aa raha ;p

D: bhabhiii...kal mera results aane wala hai third year ka...pata naii kyaa hogaa...mujhe darr lag raha hai aur aap ko toh mujhe all the best wish karna chahiye n aap bhul gaye...bhaiya se saare rishta todh dia toh kya mujhe bhi bhul jaoge.

Su : (suman did feel bad hearing that she's breaking all her relation with shravan but why was she even thinking about him
After what he did, suman came out of the trance when diya called her)

Su:aaye...aisa kabhi maat kehna..vaise wahan table par kuch pada hai dekhna toh kya teri kaam ki koi cheez hai kyaa? Diya went towards the table and screamed saying

D:Thankk youu bhabhiii, I LOVE YOU agar aap nai hoti toh kya hota mera ...saachi shravan bhaiya will regret his decision.

(It was a cute message that suman wrote for diya and it said "All the best meri sherni, you'll rock and I'm sure ki tu meri naak nai katvayegi...nai naa bcoz I love my nose :D " along with it was dairymilk silk for her)
Diya gave suman a bigg hugg

D: bhabhi mujhe naa ek urgent call karna hai mai aati hoo thode tym mai aap tab tak rest karo :)

On the other hand shravan was home and was hell tired. He went towards his room to find that Suman's stuff was missing.

Sh: taii...taiii...

Tai:yete mi...thamb re

Sh:tai aadha saman kahan gaya yaaha se...aapko pata haina ki koi agar kuch bhi idhar udhar kare toh mujhe nai pasand.

T: aare aap ka saman ko maine kuch nai kia sirf suman baby ka saman unke kamre mei shift kia hai.
Sh:unka kamra matlab yahi hai uska kam...(shravan took a pause and then he realised that suman won't be here...yaa she is in the same house but not in their room.)

Sh:ssorry maine aapko pareshaan kia...aap jaiye.

(Even tai felt bad for him because these two love birds weren't together)
Shravan took a shower and came out only to find his bed empty.

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Flashback :
Su:Shravan...Shravan aao naa idhar...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bhaithoo...haan tumhe jo karna hai yahi bed par karo

Sh: waah madam aaj aap mood mei hai... kyu aapko mujhse kya karaneka irada haii..(and gave a wicked smile)

Su: tumhe yahi cheez aati haina dimag mei. Mera matlab thaa ki jo office ka kaam vo yahan par karo.

Sh: bed par q mai neeche study mei karta hoo...tumhe disturb hoga.

Su: (got hold of his hand) nahii...neeche...vo...

Sh: ohh matlab sumo ko bhi kisi cheez se dar lagta hai...hahahah seriously sumo bed pe akele sone se dar kisse lagta hai...:P

Su: abhii lagta haina toh mai kya karu...naii tum jao...har bar mera mazak udate ho ; (

Sh:chowiiee...par shaadhi ke pehle toh akele soti thi na?

Su: (nodded saying No)

Sh: matlab preeti ke saath

Su: (nodded saying yes)😆

Sh: Heheheh.🤣..aacha theek hai yahi karta hoo kaam...tum soh jao...kahin nai jaoga...

Sumam gave a big smile and fell asleep holding his left hand.
FLASHBACK ENDS / /


Sh: aaj kaise soyegi vo akele...usse dar toh lagta hai abhi bhi. ...mai jaa nai sakta par kisse bheju..diya...magar meri baat maanegi kya vo? I hope maan jaaye...(diya just ended her call and shravan called her)

D:kya hai aapko...kya chahiye..
mujhe kyu bulaya aapne? (She spoke to him rudely)

Sh:tum humesha se mere saath aise kyu behave karti ho...meri galti kya hai?

D:yeh baat mai bhi aachese jaanti hoo aur aap bhi...bataiye naa kya kaam hai aapko mujhse?

Sh:vo suman ko akele sone ki aadat nai hai toh kya tum please uske saath soh sakti hoo...agar raat ko usse kisi chhez ki zaroorat hui .4
Toh...aapni bhabi ke liye itna toh kar sakti ho na

D: mujhe koi problem nai hai aur aap yeh baat yaad rakhna ki yeh mai sirf bhabhi ke liye kar rahi ho aapke liye nahi.

Sh:theek hai aacha usse yeh maat batana ki maine kaha tumse yeh karne ko.

(Diya came to Suman's room and saw that she was struggling to sleep alone and said bhabhi aaj na mai yahi so jao pls...mujhe naa tension ho raha hai..Please

Su:is mei puchh q rahi hoo...aaona. (Suman felt a relief but then she felt that was shravan behind it or maybe she's thinking way too much about it...sleep soon took over her and there was someone who smiled seeing her sleep peacefully...it was Shravan and now even he could sleep happily after seeing her.

TO BE CONTINUED. . .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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NOTE:
thanks a lot to everyone who've encouraged me :)
sorry for posting late was busy with some work but I'll try to post once a week but the parts will be long 😃
continue giving me your feedback😉
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Edited by AMAYASTARSS - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Shravan😳 so cute! Continue soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Really well written

Please do continue soon