ShraMan FF Bitter Sweet Symphony #Thread 1 - Page 15

Originally posted by: nicky13

Wow you done it again... Wrote it very nicely... You explained their pain beautifully... Poor Sharavan ... He is more sad now ... And about the jealousy track I think it is a brilliant idea... Go for that... Will b a treat to watch a jealous Bhuna huya Sharavan... Thanks for the PM and for the update as well...

Originally posted by: kavithaa12

amazing👏. i think  jealousy track is good idea .keep writing.  eagerly waiting for your updates. Thanks for the pm.😊

Originally posted by: ipkndlover75

I am a new fan of Shraman...and very happy to see your writing on it...really felt bad for Suman...the way Shravan insulted her...but liked u taking Shravans side too!!!

Suman was a bit mean too as a kid...want to read further... Waiting!!!

Originally posted by: Pinam3

Superb story.. Loved it.. And the jealousy tract would be awesome ..

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Nice Update Thank You

Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: snehac2

Hey read all 4 parts in one go 

Really interesting story 

N i really like ur writing 

Nyc Job 

Abt Pushkar I would love the Jealousy track n him playing the cupid 

Originally posted by: AMAYASTARSS

Great one lara😃

I'm glad you're showing both suman as well as shravan's pov 

thoda sa jealousy n misunderstanding but pushkar shoul not have any feelings for suman he should be the cupid btwn them.

update soonn and thanks for the pm😳

love kriti😛

Amazing !'

nice one .just read .can stop myself from complimenting. also like to see shravan feel guilty. 

Nice update Lara!!...like the Pushkar angle...in fact find him cute...I would love to see Shravan jealous... That would b nice...