pritus ff^kismat connection^thread 2 last part on page 19 - Page 13

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

so biggg part...

the way nk made shivu understand was outstanding...

ak nd nk letter was the cutest...

everyone is at pain nd justified in de pov...

finally shivu bday nd party

he accepted ak nd nk as mumma nd papa

the way he said papa papa heheh

nd gf abhi se omggg

cute family moments do update soon

awesonme nd outstanding part it was

Aww i didnt tell still u read 😃 ..thanku so much princyu for ur fastest comments nd love it that u liked whole part so hpy 😊 ..
Just for comdey i showed 😉 tumhe pasand aai na 😲
I will do update final part soon.. 😃

Next part is on page 15..
Sry for late update

teri sorry give it to ur ...

Ruchi its the outstanding part . specially nk ka woh yadhoda maiya and kanha scene literally brings tears in my eyes . ak ki pain shivu ka tuta dil nk ki helplessness everything was beyond words. Finally shivu ne nk ko papa bola nk ak shivu ko boht boht acche se characteristics kiya was jus fantastic part . update soon

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

teri sorry give it to ur ...

Are mujhe laga sabko wait karna pada thabhi sry bola na 😛 ..

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Ruchi its the outstanding part . specially nk ka woh yadhoda maiya and kanha scene literally brings tears in my eyes . ak ki pain shivu ka tuta dil nk ki helplessness everything was beyond words. Finally shivu ne nk ko papa bola nk ak shivu ko boht boht acche se characteristics kiya was jus fantastic part . update soon

Aww thanku so much nidhu for liking this part nd liking it so much so hpy 😃 ..actually mujhe laga ki ek bacha kitni bhi try kare dil se maa ko hurt nhi karega .. 😃 ..u liked this part so much mera write karna safal hua that my frd r hpy 😃 ..
I will fully try to update sooner soon

Awesome part ruchi👏...shivu was totally  broken after knowing d truth poor baby...Ak &Shivus conv was so emotional brought tears while reading😭...loved how Nk explained yashoda &kanha story to shivu which is similar to Ak&shivu..Nk is d big supporter of Ak in every situation😳&even family too😊..Finally shivu accepted Nk as his papa..😃one of d best scene of d ff...&Trio hug Edited by munna111 - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: munna111

Awesome part ruchi👏...shivu was totally broken after knowing d truth poor baby...Ak &Shivus conv was so emotional brought tears while reading😭...loved how Nk explained yashoda &kanha story to shivu which is similar to Ak&shivu..Nk is d big supporter of Ak in every situation😳&even family too😊..Finally shivu accepted Nk as his papa..😃one of d best scene of d ff...&Trio hug

Must say u have written so beautifully d pain of a child &mother..good job 👍🏼...eagerly waiting for next part do update soon...&precap seems interesting shivus wish..😛

Aww thanku so much for liking part md ur big comments loved it 😳 ..aww i m so hpy that nk ka shivu ko convinced karna sabko pasand aaya 😊 aww best scene yeh ff mere dil ke pass hai bhut 😳 ..i will show full family bond in last part dont worry 😃

Part -39..last ending part..i waana say one thing..forget about serial nd reality..just read this part as a naksh fan..in nakshland only.. 😳 ..
So in shivus party..shivu said..
Sh-mamma papa i want my chotu baby back..meri pyari si sis..jisse mai khoob pyar karuga..ak had tears on her eyes..
Ak-beta mai apko aandhre mai nahi rakhna chahti..apko pata hai na mamma gir gai thi.ab pata nhi apka chotu baby aayega...nd she cant control to her...nd starts crying. .
Sh-mamma..
Nk-ak..aap ro kyo rahi hai hai...sshh...nd hug to her...aapko pata honi chahiye i cant see tears on ur eyes. .
Sh-haa papa mamma bhi na bas ro deti hai ..hum sab wish mante hai ki chotu baby aa jaye..nhi bhi aayega toh mai hu na always apka beta..nd hug to her.
Nk-hmm bas mom ko pyar mujhe nhi kya..
Sh-i love u both...mamma papa. ..now dey finished cake cutting nd all..
In nyt shivu was peacefully sleeping nd nk was admiring to him..ak was in bathroom she comes out nd saw to nk...nd passes smile..
Ak-kyo najar laga rahe apne bete ko..
Nk-are aap mujhe pata hi nhi chali ak...means i loved to shivu from starting but pata nhi essi kya bat hui ki papa word sunke i m feeling like shivu meri life hai nd kuch bhi ho jaye mujhe apne bete ko nhi khoni..
Ak-mai samaj sakti hu nk..she sat near of nk..mujhe toh laga tha i lost to my baby par aapne sab thik kar diya..mujhe aappe bhut proud ho raha ..u r d best..
Nk-hmm aap bhi ok ok hai..nd laugh.
Ak made face..
Ak-haaww..kitne kharab hai na aap nk..chii..bure hai..thodi tarif toh kar dete meri..
Nk-amm nhi..u r best best person i have seen in my life ..aur amm apki jaise koi nhi..maine apko pyar ki aapne mujhe pyar ki ab sochi hai ki life mai thodi si tang kar lu..
Ak-aacha kaise..
Nk-ticking on her tummy esse ..
Ak-nk stop plz stop..but he didnt stop..she screams so much..try to understand nk..plz..mai karu apko haa...she starts in full swim..both throwed on bed..ak saw in nks eyes..for one minute dey lost to world ..dey were in dreamland like every naksh fan...after that dey heard to shivus voice nd broke their eye contract. .
Nk-ak apko soni chahiye..sry if i hurt u..
Ak-apni wife ke upar girna ya usse touch karna bura kyo lagega mujhe..
Nk-i know but jo kkuch hui hamari life mai ..u can take ur time i dont want ki aap khud ko froce kare..if u dont want to come close to me i will not say u that patni hu aur yeh karugi pati ki aagya nd all...jab apki man ho tab aana..
Ak-nk..aapko kitni chinta hai meri..sach mai aap mujjhse itna pyar kaise kar sakte hai..
Nk-thats so simple u bear to much pain for me..it is vry less..ek hubby thoda bhi kare woh bhut ho jati hai but aap wife 24 hours hamari care kare woh kuch nhi..hamari wait kare..i can feel d pain of all ladies..hats off to u maam..love u nd hug to her..
Ak-love u tooo tooo...nd smile. .shivu so raha side mai aap pillow put kar dijiye..
Nk-usse bich mai sula de na.
Ak-nhi..hum hum hai..meri place..put her head on his chest..yaha hai..
Nnk-no plz sleep peacefully in ur side na..
Ak-this is my place my hubby i m ur wife ..mr nk ji...gn..
Nk-oo apko aati hai romance..i thought mujhe hi aati hai bas..
Ak-oo..apse jayada haa...
Nk-ohoo..sleep sleep..gn...dey slept in each others arms..
In morning. .ak wokeup..nd was getting ready to shivu..
Ak-haa aur kuch bacha hai kya baby..
Sh-ohoo mamma niche aao..she went near of shivu.nd he kissed on aks cheek..
Ak-ab jaoge..
Sh-mai papa ko bhi kisi karke aauga...both went in nks room..nk was peacefully sleeping. .apko pata hai mamma papa apse aur mujhse bhut pyar karte hai..unhone mujhe kitni aachese samjhaya ..i really loved him..world ke best papa. .nd kissed on nks cheeks. .kitne cute lag rahe na..ekdom sweet baby jaise..Bye mamma..love u..nd running near of stairs..
Ak finished her work in kitchen nd came in room...nd went near of nk..
Ak-caressing his hair nd admiring to him..shivu ne sach kaha nk bhut pyare lagte hai sote hue...sach mai bhut pyar aa raha apke upar...nd kissed on nks cheeks. .suddenly nk sleep broke ..
Nk-kya kar rahi hai aap ..
Ak-aap uth gye nk..kuch nahi bas apko utha rahi thi..aap sote hue bhut cute lag rahe the. .
Nk-kyo pehle nhi lagti tha kya...
Ak-hamesha se lagte the par aaj kuch jayada hi lag rahe the..nd kissed on his cheeks again..gud morning chaliye naha lijiye..
Nk-waah..aaj apne kiski face dekhi uthi toh..suraj toh sachi nikli hai na..
Ak-haa apne sab thik jo kar diya..nd saw in his eyes..
Nk-mujhe najar lagagyegi kya...aaj hame ek party mai jani hai..get ready oki..i will pick u in nun..aate aate nyt ho jayegi.
Ak-chaliye isi bahane outing ho jayegi...kitna aacha hai na mai yahi toh chahti thi..
Nk-aap kya bol rahi..i really dont get..mai aati hu abhi.
Ak-kya batau nk aapse phir se pyar ho gya hai ..
After somtimes in nun..ak wore a beautiful blue coloured saree net ..with shinning border..her blouse was so deep from back..nd it was shinning blouse like border..this time she made plates. .nd she only wore earrings nd made side juda..nd was waiting for nk in outside of house..
Nk picked to her..
Nk-kya bat hai ak ji..aap toh bhut hi sundar lag rahi hai ..
Ak was blushes. .
Nk-are ap toh esse sarma rahi jaise pehle bar essi dekhi apko ya new marry hui hai..
Ak-ab blush ka in chizo se kya lena dena..aap jab bhi mujhe essi dekhte hai na toh..
Nk-smile toh..in teasly voice. .
Ak-aage dekh ke chaliye ..
Nk-aacha..ab kya hui..
Ak-kuch nahi..i love u..
Nk-u r so sweet ak..i really loved jab aap essi pyari pyari bat karti hai..
Ak-mujhe bhi aapko esse khush dekh ke bhut khushi hoti hai..
Nk-smile...
More parts coming soon Edited by ruchinaksh - 7 years ago

Dey reached in party..ak took nks hand in her hand...dey entered in party..nd some girls welcomed of both...naksh were enjoying d party ..nd everyone were giving compliments to naksh that dey r looking cute together. ..
Nk-aao ak hum kha leti hai. .ur health is not gud na ..dey r going suddenly someone takraofy from ak ..she got mark on hand..
Ak-aahh...
Nk-he got anger..how dey u ...dekh ke nhi chal sakti kya haa..
Boy-m sry sir..
Nk-wat sry haa bakwas karte ho ..wats ur name ..i will see u..meri wife ko dard di tumne ..tum show his finger..
Ak-nk nk...plz mai thik hu plz aap jaiye ...
Nk-aap ruko..
Ak-nk nk...i m fine ..mere cutee se hubby gusse mai kitne cute lagte hai aap.bhook lagi hai chale..mai kilaugi apko aaj aaiye..
Dey sat in table nd nk was still in anger...ak saw to him nd sat in his lap..
Nk-wat u doing kisi ne dekh li toh..
Ak-toh ..jab tak aap cool nhi honge mai bhi esse hi rahugi..chaliye has dijiye..he smiles...thats like my nk...she sat besides of nk..nd having dinner..she was admiring to nk...
Nk-kya hua..essi kyo dekh rahi mujhe ..i m noticing jab se apka aur shivu ka patchup karai hai..aap meri diwani ho gai hai haa..
Ak-nk agar pati pe bhut pyar aaye toh kya karna chahiye. .
Nk-amm..i cant tell here...come near of her.. in ear...ghar mai room mai batau toh chalegi kya...she blushed. .nk thoughts. ...lagti hai ak sab pichli bat bhool ke aage bad rahi ab ..esse hi hasti rahiye..
Ak-thought mai toh apne gam mai bhool hi gai thi ki aap meri jindagi hai apse ek pal ki duri ab bardast nhi hoti nk...dey share a eye contract with each...nk rat ho gai chale late ho jayegi pauchute hue..dey was outside ..ak was in car ..nk was talking with someone. .suddenly its raining heavily. ..
Nk-oo god yeh barish kaise ho gai ..mai toh pura bhig gaya..ak opens mirror..
Ak-nk andar aa jaiye plz aap bhig gye hai..
That men-nhi nhi bhabhi ji yaha bin mosam barish rat bhar ho jayegi..aap yahi ruk jao is hotel mai room leke morning mai chale jana..plz nk..u can stay here..bhabhi health is weak also dont take risk in nyt..
Nk-ok...waise bhi bhut barish ho gai mai toh bhik hi chuka hu..hame ruk leni chahiye. .aaiye ak..samal ke..she covered to both with saree palue..nk nd ak went in hotel room..
Oo god m totally wet..she opens his shirt button...nd throwed his shirt on bed..oo sry sry no wet shirt on bed.
Ak smiles..
Ak-mai kya pehnu..
Nk-bath gown..cupboard mai hogi...he comes close of her..thank god atleast aap nhi bhigi..
Nk face his chest lips all were wet..he was looking so hot ..ak was seeing to him...
Ak-mai change karke aati hu...she comes in bathgown..nd nk was shirtless enjoying d fire warm ..ak stooped nd was admiring to nks back..
Nk-ak shout..nd saw her open hair ...her leg.. ..in fire .she was looking great..nk cant control to him..but he didnt say anything. .aapne change kar li..woh soni chahiye na ab ..
Ak-aap esse means nk..she is coming near of him suddenly she looses balance nd both falls on floor..she touched to his bare body nd her all hair covered to nk face..
Nk-u looking so beautiful. .ak..par..
Ak-par aap bhut cute lag rahe nk!...plz mai apki banna chati hu jitna khabhi nhi bani ..itne pass jitna khabhi nhi aai..aap meri life hai mai apse aur dur nhi reh sakti hu..
Nk-smile. .u didnt blush..kuch karu saram nhi aayegi pakka..
Ak-nhi koi saram nhi..apne pati ke sath hu..saram kyo.
Nk-aacha itna confidence. ..gave naughty look..this is not our bedroom maam..
Ak-i dont care ..u r my husband. .i want u only..
Nk-khafi bold ho gai ho aap...can i play a game with u...
Ak-saw in his eyes..kya..
Nk-mujhe esse hi dekhni hai ..agar palak jhapkai toh u will get punishment for sure...
Ak-manjur hai nk ji...he hurriedly open d dori of bathgown nd throwed in side..ak hide her face on his chest..nk..moaning..
Nk-wat..u loose this chance..now punishment time ...he left to her in his hand ..nd put to her on bed...she hide her face with hand..
Nk-dont be shy ..r u ready for ur punishment. .
Ak-she didnt say any single word. ..nk touched her figure with finger with was so creamy. .ak screamed. .
Ak-nk plz..
Nk-sshhh...he laid next of her ...u want to me na...
Ak-nodded yes...he skipped her hand from face..
Nk-u r d most beautiful lady in this world..i cant give u punishment in my dreams also..
Meri pyar ho aap..nd kissed on her cheeks one by one ..she closes her eyes..
Ak-she was moaning i love u nkkk...
Nk-he comes near of her nack ...nd starts kissing. ..he apart her gown from body.
Nd cuddled her leg with him..
He was caressing her body with his hand nd she was pulling to him close to close..wen dey were kissing to each on lips..
Aks nails borrowing in nks shoulder..he got lill pain also..but today ak told her wish so he don't want to hurt to her nd dont want leave to her also..
Ak-nk..
Nk-leave to her..wat happened. .
Ak-woh mujhe chubh raha..apne shave nhi ki ..make a puppy face..
Nk-aacha..maine koi preparation nhi ki thi..nd u said that i want..
Ak-she covered her hand on his mouth. .sshh..pyar karte hai toh bolte nhi ..esse..blush..
Nk-sach mai u r so cute...jo bhi u can bear it na..i m ur hubby ..cute hubby..
Ak-thabhi toh apko itna pyar karti hu sabse jayada...nd passionately kissed on his lips..
Nk-mai bhi haa...waise aaj toh aap mujhpe kuch jayada hi pyar luta rahi..waise one by one fight with all after that i will slove ur problems. .
Ak-mai tab bhi pyar karugi karti thi aur hamesha karti rahugi..i love u nk...nd hug to him..
Nk-kya aap bhi ..itna cold weather hai..u r talking with me haa..
Ak-maine nhi roka apko..
Nk-aacha ji..abhi batani hogi..nd covered to both with blanket. .

In morning dey returned to ss house..
Ak was as usual busy in her work..take care of shivu. .she was reading to shivu..suddenly nk comes from office nd admiring to ak from door..
Shivu saw to nk...
Sh-ppaa..but nk stopped to him..ak was busy in studies. .
Sh-mamma papa bhut bure hai na ..dekho na kitna tang karte hai...
Ak-haa shivu apko pata hai papa ke samne nhi bol sakti par bhut bigad gaye hai apke papa..bat chupana aur tang pucho mat ..ek shirt nhi lete wet towel ko bed pe rakh dete hai..
Nk-shocked to listen his burai..oo toh ak ko yeh problems hai..yeh toh hui nhi ki koi bat nhi ek din put ki towel fine bete se papa ki burai suru..
Sh-haa papa bhut bure hai. .mujhe chocolate bhi nhi di aur bola apki teeth kharab hogi..
Ak-aur nhi toh kya de deni thi par nhi nhi denge na..kud kha li hogi..thabhi toh motu motu hoti ja rahi..
Nk-aacha aur kuch..mere andar duniya ki sari burai aur aap dono sweet sweet hena..
Ak-essa kab bola..nk galt bat chup chup ke bat sunna..
Nk-aacha mujhe pata toh chali kya sochti hai aap mere bare mai ..huh..he turn face nd sat on bed..
Ak nd shivu laughs..nd in one sided shoulder ak put her hand nd saw to nk..nd in second side shoulder shivu put his hand nd face..
Both at d same time-bhudhu banaya bada maja aaya..
Nk-wat..itne bade businessmen ko bhudu..ruko.
Ak-uuu...
Sh-uuu..
Both were running suddenly ak got pain on her stomach. .
Ak-aahhh..
Nk-ak..wat happened apko bhut din se stomach pain hai na..
Ak-haa nhi nk..bas tin char din se par aaj jayada lag raha..
Nk-apko abhi chalni hogi meri sath..shivu nd nk took to her near of doctors. ..
Shivus was in house..ak nk were in hospital ..nk was waiting for ak .
Doctor came near of nk..
Nk-all ok doctor. .
Do-yes..even much ok..ur wife is pregnant. .nk gave a shock expression to doctor. .nd saw to ak..who had tears in her eyes..
Nk-baachaa..
Do-sit mrs samarjhu..now u hpy...
Ak-yes...
Nk-put hand on her shoulder. .
Do-yes..abhi toh jjayada kuch nhi bol paugi but final reports aane ke bad kya karna hai is time dhayan rakhiyega..yeh sab aap dono ki hard work hai. .jo hamne apko karne ko bola woh kiya time to time med li..toh 40 50 mai badal gya..
Nk-mai bata nhi sakta mai kitna..
Ak-saw to nk..hamara bacha..
Do-yes enjoy dis moment with each..par plz aapko full bed rest ki jarurat hai ..nd mai apko pura sehdule bataugi this time...aarm se nk ji..
Nk-haa..mai inko god mai le jau..
Doctor laughs..
Do-no dont worry..she can walk ..
Nk-aaiye ak..sabko hum khud bataiyegi haa..aap hpy hena..
Ak-haa nk..plz mujhe ghar jana hai ..
Nk-dont worry ..chaliye...he holded her hand ..aaram se chalni hai apko...rukiye ..are dekh ke ..chalni hai apko.
Dey reached near of car...are aap baith toh jayegi na ak.
Ak-ji nk..
Nk-no ..aap piche seat pe let jaitei dont waana take risk..
She sat on back seat..
Dey reached in house..bm gy3 all were waiting for ak..
Gy-are chinna aur bahu kya hua hai kya bat hai beta..mere bacho ko kiski najar lag gai hai ..mai najar utar deti hu..kya hua hai chinna chup kyo ho dono bataoge.
Nk-amma sab thik hai ...ak is pregnant. ..
Gy-smile kya...sach ak..
Ak-blush ji amma..
Bm-haye raja..kitni aachi khuskhabri sunai hai..shivu nd dj listen this..
Sh-yaieee mers chotu baby aayega..yeh meri chotu sis aayegi...nd dancing..
Gy-mai muh mitha karu..girija mitha toh la..sabse pehle ak baitho yaha..she sat on sofa..chinna u also come na ..
Nk saw to ak..
Ak had tears on her eyes..nk hold aks hand tightly. .
Gy3 gave sweet to naksh nd to all...dey were dancing with each..
Ak starts crying. .all stooped..gy3 hug to ak..
Gy-kya hua beta esse nhi rote hai ..plz ..khushi aai hai toh isse khusi se apnao..
Ak-amma...pichli bar ki tarah.
Bm-beta kuch nhi hoga essa ...sach ...is bar hum doctor jo bolega karege aur tera pura dhayan bhi rahege...chup beta..
Gy-aur tu hasegi thabhi toh bacha hasega na chup chup...
She wips her tears..
Sh-haa is bar toh mai aur bhi dhayan rakhuga..ab mai big jo ho gaya hu..
Ak smiles. .
Ak-aacha..
Nk-i think now ak ko so leni chahiye..
Scene sifted in naksh room ..ak was thinking somthing than nk came near of her.
More parts coming soon Edited by ruchinaksh - 7 years ago