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sho123 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
first of all congrs for ur story 
concept really nice
and CS r good too 
about chappi-1 its long and nice 
so jo is prez of school and ja is most popular guy
jo do part time job for supporting her mom and lil sis
Oh no ja get know about jos part time job of waitress 
and poor jo always scared from maid word 
precap damn interesting 
really eager to read further
do pm me
Edited by sho123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
**bold words are thoughts to herself or himself**
please refer to character sketch if confused with characters

                                                     Chapter 2

Jodha(Tensed)"I don't get it...What is he up to?"
All the other maids " Wow...he is...So cute"
Jalal"ohh.. Found ya"
Jodha"Is he here to poke fun at me? or to have a battle of will power?Is it a challenge? It is, isn't it?Bring it on then, Punk😡 you'd better be ready"

Jodha"Welcome home, Master😳
Jalal"😲😕😆"
Jodha"this is utterly humiliating"


After sometime

Jodha"I apologize for the wait" and gives a cup of coffee to Jalal while he keeps staring at her
Salima"hey hey, is he your boyfriend or what? he's been staring at you the entire time"
Jodha"no"
Salima"what?!🤢"

The next day at school

Jodha"He's having fun by driving me into a corner mentally..He sat there for an hour after ordering nothing but a cup of coffee..I've been so tired lately..I feel so sluggish..."

Takezawa (A guy from Jalal's class)"Huh.. Jalal.. You're still here?"
Jalal"Yeah...Takezawa, you went to the same middle school as prez, right?"
Takezawa"Yeah"
Jalal"Has she always been like this?"
Takezawa"well...Maybe not "always..I think she started acting like that after the second year of middle school..I heard a lot went on in her house..And ever since then...WAIT!!! It's rare of you to talk about girls..And the Prez at that.."

At the cafe

Jodha"he's here again...Doesn't he get that people are starting to notice him?"
All"He's back again.. He keeps staring at Jodha"
Salima"I knew it! He's interested in you"
Jodha"HUH!"
Salima"His eyes look so worried...How lovable"
Jodha"What??Worried😕"

And the next day at school

Jodha"He's only watcing because he is amused..There's no way he is worried"
Moti"Hey Jodha...great job.. you got second rank for the mock exam.."
Jodha"second place?? who got first??"
Lavina"Jalaluddin Mohammed"
Jodha"don't screw around me JALAL"😡 and leaves
Moti "huh?"
Lavina"She must not be satisfied"


Jodha"He's probably just having fun laughing at me since I don't have much time to spare..I feel like I am being looked down upon"

Jodha is doing lot of work when
Stusent Council Accountant Sawa "P..Prez"
Jodha"Yes?"
Sawa"u..umm...well...The accounts for the last month aren't adding up properly"
Jodha"WHAT???😡😡😡"
Sawa"I'm sorry...I'm Sorry"
Jodha"I told you to atleast count the money accurately..Whatever, I'll do it myself"

It's already evening and Jodha is still at school doing her work

Jodha"I am so busy..."
Jalal"Are you a masochist, Prez?"
Jodha"😲 What are you doing here?"
Jalal"You seem to enjoy driving yourself into a corner.. Ohh..I guess you are a sadist too..."
Jodha"what?"
Jalal"I think you should loosen up a bit...Just watching you.."
Jodha feels dizzy and is about to fall when Jalal catches her..
"makes me worry..."
Jodha stands and slaps Jalal "stay away. I...don't need help from the likes of you.."
Jalal"Okay then" and leaves..
Outside the cafe

Jodha is coughing continuously
Jodha"I don't have the leisure to be tired..The accounts really won't add up either..I need to hurry up...I also need more time than what I have now to study"
She remebers Jalal's words and how she slapped him
Jodha" I feel like halfway doing everything...I don't feel too well"

"Huh..Is that Prez??"
Ankit" wow.. It really is.."
Shaheer"Seriously?? A maid?? Hilarious...Hey.. let's call everyone over.. My ear hurts really badly.."
Everyone take out their phone"It's time to take pics"
Jodha"everything's really going downhill" and tries to walk away when Shaheer holds her hand"Are you going to walk away? Is this really ok, Prez? You torment guys all the time at school, and then you are going to tell us you are actually a maid?"
Jodha"Let go"
Shaheer" you are going to need some special service then??"
Jodha"My body feels so weak"
Shaheer"Wow I didn't realize that you were a girl...Dressing like this.." and is about to touch her when Jalal pushes him and says" Don't touch her because she is darn cute"
Jodha "Jalal😲"
The idiots"Jalal"🤢 and run away
Jalal touches Jodha's forehead and asks if she is ok?
Jodha"sorry...Sorry..Jalal" and faints
Jalal"It's ok..Rest all you want"

The next day 

Jodha wakes up to find herself in her home and she has a wet cloth on her forehead"
Jodha's mom" Jodha.. I was so shocked when the chief called"
Jodha"Sorry"
Jodha's mom" rest easy for today" and hands her a scarf which Jalal had wrapped around her and leaves
Jodha caresses the scarf

The next day

Jodha"Resting for a day helped clear my mind"

On the terrace of the school

Jalal"you know.. They haven't told anyone of you being a maid"
Jodha"ohhh.. I was actually prepared for it.. Did you do something to them?"
Jalal"not really.. I asked them not to spread it around since it's my secret entertainment"
Jodha"so you are having fun with it"
Jalal" I mean, you'd get mad if I told you I was actually worried, right? Well personally, I think it would be okay if the school knew about it..Having a part time job isn't forbidden or anything..Just because you're dressed like a maid, the fact that you are smart, strong and never hesitate to make an effort won't change..I think you can be proud of it"
Jodha" I actually spent the whole day yesterday thinking why you piss me off so much.."
Jalal"Didn't I just finished saying something really kind?"
Jodha" It's like when I am running with all my might, you are jogging freely a few yards ahead of me..And then you start running backwards right in my face and say things to me every once in a while ""Are you doing okay""... I am really competitive, so that made me really mad..but I was saved this time thanks to you being ahead of me..Don't worry.. I'll pass you soon and then I'll be the one to worry about you...Ohh yeah.. thanks for lending me your scarf" and returns it " and for a lot of other things... I was thinking of how to make it up to you since I hate being indebted.. But I couldn't think of anything..why don't you come up with something?"
Jalal" Well then.."
Jodha " ohh.. do you have something in your mind?"
Jalal" Could you be my personal maid for a day?"
Jodha"WHAT??!!!"

pheww.. Finally updated..
hit likes and pls do comment..




Edited by SD1357 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Cute chappy dear 
Jo n jalal r really good 
Jo fainted 
Update soon buddy 
Jalal's question is something 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yeah nice chapter
Jalal so sweet 
Jodha should have not slapped him Atleast
Well thankfully  jalal made them shut there mouth 
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nycc chapter dear...
Jalal is very nyccc guy..
Jo shouldn't slap him..
Thxcc 4r pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice chapter😃
All going perfectly well between Jo & Ja
Jalal concerned for her takes her to her home
& then in the end he asked her to be his personal maid for a day😲
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Posted: 7 years ago
chappi was superb
ja worried for jo
last part when ja asked jo for being his personal maid curious
update ASAP
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Posted: 7 years ago
Omg... U finally updated..
Awesome chappy buddy...
Ja is oogling all time..
Jo slapped ja..
Jo fainted n ja catch her..
Ja n ja good going..
Pls update ASAP buddy n pls don't leave the forum..
We all love u n we dont want to losse u..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Everyone started noticing jalal...
And he keep staring at jo
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
good update dear...
but y did ja say like that ...
thanks for pm...