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Sofiafarooq

@Sofiafarooq

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#811

Oh dear.
U r amazing.
Superb writer.
Now a days I'm feeling every one is bzy.
I don't why all writers are disappeared. Readers are not giving good response.
Every thing is so messed up.

Any way about ur next update.

I thing so the answer of this question will be more suitable by Nandni's POV. After that about her answer u can give manik's POV that how he felt after listening her.

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khushboo24

@khushboo24

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#812

Nandini pov plzz don't put it on halt

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anaita arora

@fireflies10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#813

soryyy soryyy just now read last two updates anf comment karne se phele hi note aa gaya actually exams on soo tym nhi miltaa well chappy was awesome pyaar pe kisi ka bass nhi chalta chahe mafia hi kyun na hoo and the part where nandu recognized its manik that was superbb she trust him thats why shr carelessly stood in front of the truckk uska hero tha naa kisss was shocking 1 nandu boldness ufff chotu sa baccha and nandu part was too cutee and lake part was beautifully pennedd cabir and manik ki nok jhok was mind blowinggg loved ittt update soon take care

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#814

Hey Mawara

Itna low maat feel karo

U r doing superb.

This one is too good

Totally different.

U r putting ur best in this one

Trust me, I'm flattered the way u r portraying Manik n nandini's character.

The Italin words that Manik is using I just love it.

The words pinch u at ur heart, though we don't know the meaning , but then again u help us out. Kudos to u .

Okk the next want with Nandini's POV.

OR ELSE U CAN DECIDE WHICH ONE U WANT TO SAY.

LOTS LOVE MAWARA

KEEP UP THE SPIRIT

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lovlytuli

@lovlytuli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#815

sorry if we,ur readers did any mistake,,bt plz dont feel that u r not a good writer,,u r awesome dear...plz forgive us fr hurting u bt plz dont be sad...i always felt blessed after reading ur stories...they r amazing all time...yes i always do very short comments,its bcz my timing,,i know u r also very busy,still u gave us happiness,,bt sometimes long comments r not help fr showing my love fr the update...bt i still want to happy u by my comments,,n i will always try fr this...bcz i love ur writings n also respect ur hard works...once again sorry fr hurting u...

n about the next part,,plz put nandini's p.o.v...its will better,,i think...dont be sad n keep smiling...😊

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#816

Hey

I'm so sorry

I got exam tomorrow and meri lagane wale hai...

Hence could not comment...

But I'll read and comment bad me tomorrow after exam

And don't doubt your capabilities

You are a fabulous writer

And I want Manik's pov

Nandini's pov in starting is something which is more or less expected in general...

Manik s pov would be the extra kick to the chapter

Wish me luck for tomorrow!

Continue soon

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styletheworld

@styletheworld

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#817

Ur stories are just amazing

Nandini pov

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DISHA SINGHAL

@singhaldisha12

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#818

i think both povs ...first by nandini then manik...and pleaxx dont put it on hold...

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#819

YOU R A SUPERB WRITER YAAR...

NO DOUBT... ...

ALMIGHTY HAS SEND U WITH SUPER TALENTED NEVER DOUBT ON URSELF..

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#820

Want Nandini's pov as she can explain it better
N chotu sa Manik's pov
Mawara ur indeed a awesome writer
So please don't doubt on urself n continue writing
Eagerly waiting for the update
Cont soonish...
Keep smiling n Stay Blessed
😊

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