THE MYSTERY..chapter 15 on pg 118 on 3 April...

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Hey friends, I am new in IF. Actually I never thought to make acc just 
because i was reading stories without having acc. But now thought to try
my hand in writing.

This is my first story so please appreciate 
my hard work by giving your comments here. I am a  student so its
really tough to get free time, so my updates will be short but i will 
definitely try to be regular. plz comment I should continue this or not...

As i am new here, i don't know anyone, so those who wants to be my friend please add me. I love to make friends.

Now enjoy my story... Happy reading

Prologue:

They were in the party. All were enjoying except two souls. A boy asked a girl for dance, but she refused. The girl was none other than Ishita mehra. A boy was seeing all this and was burning in jealousy. He just wanted to punch that boy who asked her for dance. He was very hot and handsome boy, his name was Raman kumar bhalla. As the party proceeds, lights gone off and the boy (vivek) proposed ishita. But she refused and told him that she don't love him. She just helped him with his studies as a friend nothing else. He insists her to take her own time as she would be confused of sudden proposal. But she was adamant that she don't love him and not to force her and she don't want any time as she know herself...

                          Among all this, Raman was just eyeing ishita with anguish in his eyes. Her phone beep with msg of him, it says- "meet me outside asap" and he leaves. Seeing this ishita also ran behind him. He pinned her to the car. He was very close to her. His proximity was affecting her.

Ishita: leave me raman, u r hurting me.

Raman: I never hurt u ish, but u only hurt me. Why m I that bad that u cant even be with me?why? u r only mine. Why don't u accept this that u love me?

Ishita: leave me raman, plz koi dekh lega..plz...

Raman; dekhta hh to gekh lene do. I just don't care. I can clearly see love in ur eyes ishita.

She just pushed him..leave me I don't love u. u r my best friend that's it

Raman : don't pretend that u r not affected by this. Every time this happen between us and next day u pretend like nothing happened. Dammit !

Ishita: I m going...I don't wanna talk about this.

He again pinned her to the car and kiss her on her lips. Fist she resist him but when she realized its not going to happen she started responding. She also don't know what was she doing. When he broke in the need of air, she justs push him and ran away..

Ishita(st): how can u do this? Pagal ho gyi hh tu? I don't know, jabbhi wo mere karib aata hh I cant resists him...why cant he get this that hum kabhi ek nhi ho sakte? I cant hurt him more. We cant be a couple. Dammit! Kyu main khudko control nhi kr pati? Hamesha wo aise hi krta hh? O god! Plz help me...kya krru jisse uske pass bhi rahu aur ye problem bhi nhi aaye...kyu nhi samajhta wo ki he don't deserves me...do pal ki khushi de kr zindagi bhar ka gum nhi de sakti main...i cant betray him...plz god give me the strength...

She just cried and cried thinking after being tired she just slept...

thts all for now..plz comment...

should i continue or not?๐Ÿ˜•





index:-

Intro- page 6

chapter 1- page 9

chapter 2- page 12

chapter 3- page 16

chapter 4-  page 21

chapter 5-  page 27

Teaser- page 31

chapter 6-  page 35

chapter 7-  page 41

chapter 8-  page 47

chapter 9-  page 54

chapter 10-  page 59

chapter 11-  page 68

chapter 12- page 76

Teaser- page 87

chapter 13- page 95

A thankyou note - page 103

chapter 14- page108

chapter 15- page118

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Nithya83 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice & interesting start.
Please continue soon
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Originally posted by: Nits83

Nice & interesting start.
Please continue soon


thanks..
Hi di, i forgot to introduce myself.
my name is Tanu. U r a great writer. i had read ur stories. they are awesome.
thanks for liking this prologue..it means a lot from u...
๐Ÿ˜Š.i will update intro soon so just tell me should i continue this mystery or not?...
Edited by tan001 - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tan001


thanks..
Hi di, i forgot to introduce myself.
my name is Tanu. U r a great writer. i had read ur stories. they are awesome.
thanks for liking this prologue..it means a lot from u...
๐Ÿ˜Š.i will update intro soon so just tell me should i continue this mystery or not?...



Thanks a lot Tanu dear๐Ÿ˜Š
I'm also a new writer like you but this forum readers supported & encouraged me to continue.
Please do continue, I'm sure all the forum readers will encourage new writers like us.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiii
Welcome to the forum 

Lovely start...
Very interesting 
Continue soon 
Do add me to your pm list...
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Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Hiii

Welcome to the forum 

Lovely start...
Very interesting 
Continue soon 
Do add me to your pm list...


Thanks a lot dear๐Ÿ˜Š
will update tommorrow...
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Lovely prologue tanu
I like their relationship 
Why she is denying his love
Continue soon
Will love to read more
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Hey Tann
I know ur name is Tanu
But Tan is cool๐Ÿ˜‰
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Well ab kuch serious baath
First of all welcome to the forum.
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N a big thanks that U send me a pm
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Well the prologue was just superb
Lvd it Yaar
Waise aisa kya wajah hai Ishu apne aapko apni pyaar se door reh rahi hai?
Any ways I know that's the twist in it.
Update soon
Will wait for it
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Originally posted by: Roohachu

Hey Tann
I know ur name is Tanu
But Tan is cool๐Ÿ˜‰
---------------------------------------
Well ab kuch serious baath
First of all welcome to the forum.
----------------------------------------------
N a big thanks that U send me a pm
---------------------------------------------
Well the prologue was just superb
Lvd it Yaar
Waise aisa kya wajah hai Ishu apne aapko apni pyaar se door reh rahi hai?
Any ways I know that's the twist in it.
Update soon
Will wait for it

Thank u di ..๐Ÿ˜Š
as u know i m new to this so i dont know whom to send pms...
will update soon
keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice prologue dear
continue soon