SiRa&MiLa :FF pt10-pg18 lakshman's confession:updated on 15th mar

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zubi_23

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Posted: 8 years ago

hello beautiful people😉

thanks for loving my ff and os... ishq hai vo ehsaas and jal jal ke dhuan🤗🤗🤗

i am here with another FF😊

all the characters are same but i am adding one more character to the story, 'll introduce it as the story progress

all the andas and tamatars and even chappals are welcome😆😛😆

please ignore the typo's and do comments guys your views and reviews both means a lot to me😊

DISCLAIMER- This is a complete work of fiction. Names, characters, places, events
and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a
fictitious manner. They can resemble to the actual storyline too.

INDEX

PART1- BELOW

PART2- PAGE 3

PART3- PAGE 5

PART4- PAGE 6

PART5- PAGE 8

PART6- PAGE 10

PART7- PAGE 11

PART8- PAGE 13

PART9- PAGE 16

part 1- tera hone laga hoon

It is the
first day in ayodhya ... all the four pairs are welcomed lovingly and grandly
by the three maharani's of ayodhya

After some
rituals the princes are told to take rest in their respective room's of ayodhya
and each princess have allotted a grand room to stay for 2-3 days as according
to a ritual the couple can not stay together in a room untill all the rituals
are done.

Kaushalya
took sita with her and ram quickly stood up to follow them when kekayi blocked
his way

kk- "kahan ja
rahe ho putra, kadachit mithila mein itna samay rehne ke pashchat tum bhool
gaye ho k tumhara kaksh vahan hai ,,,us aur" she said teasingly

kaushalya
turned to sita and she blushed at his gaze

r - ji ma...
mai vo kaksh mein

sumitra
- putra tumne suna nahi ke kaushalya
didi ne kya kaha

lakshman - ma
bhaiya ka dhyan kahin aur thha, unhone suna nahi

sumitra -
tumne to sun liya na, chalo jao

lakshman -
kintu ma mai to chhota hoon na, mere liye kaisi prathayein "he said making a
baby face"

"haan avashya,
tumhare liye kaisi prathayein saari prathayein Ram or Bharat hi to nibhayenge,
tanik bhi lajja nahi aati ise, chalo jao, bhaago yahan se" kekayi said twisting
his ear, he let out a howl.

Urmila and
mandavi were having hard time controlling their laughter

Lakshman- ja
raha hoon mata kekayi pehle hume chhodiye to sahi

He glanced at
urmila with a pocker face expression, her eyes widened slightly with fake anger
and a slight smile

He turned his
face away and saw Ram still gazing at Sita "bhaiya bass kijiye itna mat ghooriye,sita
bhabhi gir jaengi" he whispered in ram's ear

All the three
queens burst out laughing... sita's face turned scarlet

Kaushalya -
chalo putri

Sita glanced
at ram one last time before going to sleep as if taking permission from him to
which he blinked with a serene smile.

Bharat and
mandvi too smiled at each other and left for their respective rooms

Sita - ma mai
aapse kuchh maang sakti hu "she said to kaushalya"

Kaushalya -
avshya putri, tumhein kisi bhi vastu ke liye sankoch karne ki aavashyakta nahi
hai,ye sab kuchh tumhara hi to hai, nisankoch kaho

Sita - mata kya hum sab behnein ek hi kaksh
mein reh sakti hain, hume akele rehne ka abhyas nahi hai

Kekayi and
kaushalya smiled looking at each other thinking that their eldest
daughter-in-law is really down to earth... afterall she is bhoomija' kekayi
felt proud of herself being her mother-in-law.

"Avashya"
they both said in unison and took them to a grand room

Sumitra - ab
tum sab vishram karo, kal pratay kaal me aur bhi vidhi hain jo sampan honi
hain...

Saying so
they all left from the room

Urmila - uff
didi, itna bhavya kaksh, achha hua aapne sabke sath rehne ki baat keh di, mai
to akele bhaybheet ho jati, she said hugging sita'

Mandvi - haan
didi kitne bhinn hain na Mithila aur Ayodhya, yahan sab kitna bhavya hai, or
vahan sab kuchh sadharan

Sita -
"thhey" Mithila aur Ayodhya bhinn thhey mandvi kintu ab ve ek hain ... sadev ke
liye, ab tum log so jao kal prataykal mein shighr uthhna hai na

They all went
to sleep

Sita and
urmila lay on one bed and mandvi and shrutkirti on other

There ram was
restless, he was roaming here and there in his room and came outside in the
garden ...

Lakshman saw
ram's state and decided to do something for his ram bhaiya

He went to
the room allotted for sita and found it empty... the daasi told him about all
the yuvrani's being in one room.

He left from
there and through the garden reaches there without making sound of his
footsteps and saw urmila tossing on her bed trying to sleep.

His heart
nearly stopped when he saw his beautiful wife

He couldn't believe
how quickly he gets unbalanced just at the sight of her

She was looking
devine in a simple peach lehenga wearing just a mangalsutra and earings

He leaned
against the wall folding his arms. The serene sight of her immediately took his
breath away... for a second he forgot how to breathe he was completely
mesmerised by her.

She turned in
her half sleep and got up quickly as she saw him...lost in thoughts... she
blushed and carefully slipped out of bed without disturbing Sita ... as she
slowly walked up to him, his eyes not losing sight of her... her soft hair
fell in waves around her face and he was mesmerised as she tucked a few strands
behind her ear

She wavedherhand in front ofhis eyes, (where are youlost!) buthewas staring intently ather without blinking his eyes.

She moved
very close to him and whispered in his ear... "ratri ke samay kisike kaksh me
aana, ashishtata pratyaksh karta hai rajkumar" he shrugged and came out of his
trance

L - vo... mai
ye kehne aaya thha... dekhne aaya thha... bhabhi ko' he said in hesitating
tone

she smiled brodly to herself she knew he was
drooling over her

U - vo theek
hain, mau hoon na yahan, unka khayal rakhne ke liye

L - isiliye
avashyak samjha yahan aakar sunishchit krna, jahan aap ho vahan kisiko shaanti
kaise pradan ho sakti h (he blabbered to himself)

U - kya
tatparya h aapka

L - bhabhi so
gayi kya,,, bhaiya to adheer hue ja rahe hain, nidra to unse jaise rooth hi
gayi hai

U - didi bhi
kahan so pa rahi hain, prayatna kar rahi hain kintu...

S -
urmila... kya hua ,,, tum vahan kya kar rahi ho

Lakshman quickly
duck back behind thecurtain

U - didi
kuchh nahi mai jal grehan kar rahi thhi

mai bhaiya ko bahar lekar aata hoon... aap
bhabhi ko le aaiye' (He whispered slowly... and left from there)

Edited by zubi_23 - 8 years ago