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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Destiny has something planned for Ram Priya which brought them together and tied in a scared bond of marriage to which one has run away and other's would be partner denied. They will surely be lovable couple ahead in their life of marriage. 

Dear you always come up with awesome idea on RaYa. Do continue writing.

 

Yes Aanchal it's totally destiny that has brought these together and as we know it despite being totally different their marriage and love is the happily ever after kind😳 Thank you for always being so encouraging and for commenting ...it means a lot😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks!😃
 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nprithi2002

awesome update...
plz contd soon


Thank you! I will do the epilogue soon😃
 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan

 


Yes Aanchal it's totally destiny that has brought these together and as we know it despite being totally different their marriage and love is the happily ever after kind😳 Thank you for always being so encouraging and for commenting ...it means a lot😃

pleasure was all mine dear
u are among one of the good writers who has very imaginative side of thinking and every time i read ur write up it's feels to read more so dear continue writing more stuff like this and i will be still waiting for the next part of your ff
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Posted: 8 years ago
hey...superb... os...yaar...really...awesome...what an amazing concept...and way to awesomely penned down! :-D really Amazing...complete strangers meeting up with same circumstances... and ended up being together! ;-P atrangi thought... and that molesting part...agar thoda elaborate hojata to maja ajata! :-P ;) next epilogue jaldi plzzz...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

pleasure was all mine dear
u are among one of the good writers who has very imaginative side of thinking and every time i read ur write up it's feels to read more so dear continue writing more stuff like this and i will be still waiting for the next part of your ff


Thank you for such encouraging comments. I do get some crazy ideas from time to time...I just wish that I had the time to pen them down. With this one too an idea just came and I penned it as is...that's why there is not much editing involved but I am glad that you enjoyed it as well😳
 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

hey...superb... os...yaar...really...awesome...what an amazing concept...and way to awesomely penned down! :-D really Amazing...complete strangers meeting up with same circumstances... and ended up being together! ;-P atrangi thought... and that molesting part...agar thoda elaborate hojata to maja ajata! :-P ;) next epilogue jaldi plzzz...


Thank you...thank you!😳 Sure is a atrangi thought but very fun even imagining it😆 okay so in the epilogue I will elaborate on the molesting part for you ...it is ready but I will somehow insert this part in there too. Thanks for commenting and encouraging!
 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb os
Loved It

Very diff concept ... nice start...
Hoping to get more parts of this story...

Continue asap
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Posted: 8 years ago

EPILOGUE 


8 years later
 
Priya
I tell you fairy tales do come true...it turns out I did marry a real prince (king to be exact) after all! I am not only his queen but also the queen of Kapoor Industries and Kapoor Mansion. Little did I know that when I had agreed to marry Ram ...he was the Ram Kapoor, the sole heir of the Kapoor industries. It's how I am treated every single day by my king is what makes me feel like a queen. Mind you..there are no step mother or step sisters here instead there is a very loving daadi with even more adorable brother and sister in law...I don't know what real royals live like but when you are placed on a pedestal and given so much authority ,respect and love that one can't but feel like the most luckiest person in the world!

" Priya, don't you think that we make beautiful babies together especially if they are baby girls" Ram spoke softly in her ear pulling her into his arms
Pushing him away while hiding a smile," Ram ...not again! We are not having any more kids..aren't two kids more than enough..and what's the guarantee ki next time ladki hi ho" "khush aapko pyaara nahi lagta"
Cornering her in their wardrobe, he proceeded to open the belt of her robe " Pyaara kyun nahin lagta..hum dono neh itne pyaar se jo banaya hai... Par yaar, Pihu ki tarah pyari si ek betiya aur chahiye" " Is baar main extra mehnat karne ke liye bhi ready hun" kissing her on the chest, he spoke seductively
Turning Crimson yet retorting boldly Priya " Ram...aap Bahut Besharam hote ja rahe hain...I can't handle another kid...waise aap bhi kisi bacche se kum nahi hain" 
Holding her waist he looks into her eyes, " I know that I can be handful at times" kissing her on her forehead " Priya...I promise I will be more helpful with the kids..please maan jao na...tumhe nahi pata ki meri Choti si Pari ko dekh kar mujhe kitni khushi milti hai" kissing her on her eyelids then approaching for the corner of the lips " besides jab hum buddhe ho jayenge toh humare itne saare bacchon ko dekh kar hi pata chalega ki mein tumse kitna pyaar karta hun" giving him a hard push this time, Priya gave him a flabbergasted look " haww...Ram! You are too much!" " kuch bhi nahi sochte kuch kehne ya karne se pehle...kahin par bhi shuru ho jaate ho" ( remembering the incidents in the kitchen, the study ...poor Bansi kaka had developed a permanent cough trying to warn them of his presence every where he went,hoping not walk into another escaped of theirs)
" Arrey yaar, meri isi boldness ki wajah se hi I got to marry you...socho agar maine yeh shaadi ka idea tumhare dimaag mein na dala hota toh Aaj bhi apni Maa ke yahan apne Prince Charming Ka intezaar kar rahi hoti aur mein yahan devdas ki zindagi beeta raha hota" " aur jab Bhagwan neh humein mila hi diya hai toh phir khulker pyaar kyun na karan!"
Kissing him on his cheek and pulling him with his tie towards their bed, Priya retorted " toh phir aayiye..pyaar ki nishani ki shuruwat Karan!"

Ram confirmed "sacchi...toh tum maan gayi...aise hi"
Priya nodded " Han sacchi...and I think that we make beautiful babies together too..besides I like all the pampering that comes with being pregnant" 

"Really...toh tum aise hi mujhe tang kar rahi thi...do mahine ho gaye tumhein request karte hue" Ram sulked

Ram " mein janta tha ki uss din toh maine kissi tarah apni izzat baccha Li thi par mein jaldi hi tumahari hawas Ka shikar banne wala hun...pata hai kaise table par chadha karake mujhse dance karwaya tha aur mujhe aise noch rahi thi...theek hai mein bhi sumjhta Hun ek handsome ladka dekh kar raha nahi gaya..aur dekho tubse mein khud hi apne aapko tumhare hawale kar deta hun..jitna nochna hai mujhe tum noch lo" exposing his neck and chest Ram egged her on.

Priya shaking her head " Ram...you are seriously too much! 
" Btw ...Aaj mein check up ke liye gayi thi"
Ram immediately " kyun Kya hua...tum theek toh ho na"
" Arre ek minute pehle poori baat toh sunn Li jiye...woh Doctor neh kaha hai ki"
" Kya kaha hai Doctor neh" worried Ram held her both hands in his
" ki woh...that I am six weeks pregnant!"
" you mean to say..." Ram tried to confirm what his ears had heard " oh wow! We are Pregnant again!" Taking her in a tight embrace " hurray! You did it again!" When Priya hit him on his chest, he quickly retorted " I am sorry...I meant that WE DID IT!" " Dekhna iss bar beti hi hogi" 
Smacking her forehead " Ram...please don't start this beta beti thing...we should be happy with either one"
Ram being Ram continued " No...iss bar guarantee hai woh Kya hai na...it's a old wives tale that ..." This time Priya shushed him " Ram aap bhi na ...you shouldn't be talking out loud about how many times we make love and for that matter keeping track of it"
" Arre meri legally wedded wife mera faida uthati hai...kitni bar aur kahan kahan...track toh rakhna banta hai" 
"Aap nahi sudharne wale!" Priya stomped away from him
Ram again thanked his lucky stars while following his queen..." Arre ..Priya suno toh!"
Edited by DiehardRaYafan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jodude

Superb os
Loved It

Very diff concept ... nice start...
Hoping to get more parts of this story...

Continue asap


Thank you for reading, commenting and encouraging😃
 I just posted the Epilogue too...hope you enjoy that too...please post your comments on that too!