New ishra story ||Tu Hi Safar Hein Akhri||*note on page 8* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divanru

Nice start .

Will love to read more .
Do continue .


thank u so much for ur response dear...will definitely continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for your first story dear 😊
beautiful prologue...
update it soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1
She heard her mil calling her as its tym for puja
'coming mummiji' ...saying she did her final touchup and went outside...there was so much hustle bustle as its tym for puja...and the ladies of society has gathered for puja...her eyes was on doorway...its almost 7...but he isn't back yet...but it's not his tym to return.. she never seen him returning before 10 after their marriage...
her thought was full of him when she heared call from her daughter 'ishimaaa'
'just coming beta'
she entered the room and the room is fully messed with ruhi's clothes...
'roo what is this...u r becoming like ur papa...u have massed everything'
'ohho ishima...sorry.. bt today is pooja...and i have to get ready and look beautiful just like u'
'aww...come on...i will make my princes ready...and u know what my roo is most beautiful doll of the world'
'And my ishima is best mamma of the world... and i love u so much'
'I love u too...now hurry up and get ready'
she made ruhi ready and cleaned her room before going to tarace for puja'
everyone did the puja...but she was sitting in the bench with ruhi..she and romi both called raman but he cut the call..
After puja her mother in low asked her to eat something as she was quite sure that raman will not come..
'its ok mummiji I will only eat after he come...u don't worry..i m fine...i m serving the dinner u all eat and take rest'
After dinner she make ruhi sleep and went to hall waiting for him...her headache is increasing...she was hungry of course...but not eating anything after a lot of insistence os her mil'
it was 10.30 when they heard the door bell ringing... her mother in low opened the door and yes it was him...
Edited by kpdt - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations for ur first story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rufana10

congrats for your first story dear😊

beautiful prologue...
update it soon...


thank u so much...updated first part have a look
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kras

Interesting story

Very nice prologue


thnx dear...have a look on first part on page 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on your first story..
It was a nice start...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on your first story dear😊
Interesting start. Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations for your first story dear 😛

Interesting prologue and plot dear 😊

Continue soon 😊

Pm me if possible 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --abha--

interesting yaar...

continue soon...


thank u dear

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