~~KaYu OS - Unsolicited Blessings~Part 3 Added Pg5 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was a real beautiful piece.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimmu96

Very very emotional.  You left me yearning for Karn.  Feel like placing a hand on his shoulders and say we all love you and respect you.  Awesome.

Would really be happy to read on what yudi will recollect about the convo after Karn's death and truth revelation.

 
Thank you dear😊 if you could feel for Karna then i served my purpose😳..you really gave good idea but I dont know if I can do justice to any other character's feelings than Karna.. Still would try if I get chance.. to add that one part in this OS itself.. if something comes in mind..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

It was a real beautiful piece.

 
Thank you dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wonderful os
u hv very well portrayed dere emotions
dere brotherly feelings
keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

wonderful os
u hv very well portrayed dere emotions
dere brotherly feelings
keep writing

 
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow dear something I always thought, did Yudi miss an elder brother. Loved the affection 
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mindblowing parts😃
I wish yudhisthar knew the truth⭐️
U described both brother's feelings very brilliantly😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shipreeta

Wow dear something I always thought, did Yudi miss an elder brother. Loved the affection 

 
Thank you for comment😊. Yes I too think he missed an elder brother..and perhaps that ws the reason for his outburst when karna's truth is revealed😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Mindblowing parts😃

I wish yudhisthar knew the truth⭐️
U described both brother's feelings very brilliantly😊

Thank you dear😊..I wish that too😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Riti...this was just so emotional, heart wrenching..😭 If only there was such a scene in ⭐️B (it would have added to the list of distortions, but it would be a good one as well). Aham and the actor who played Yudi in that, would have nailed it... But I dare not imagine such scenes in this foresaken show.. this Karna would need buckets...and it would have us puke in our buckets! 😆
Anyway, I loved the end scene the most... Yudi looking at Karna's feet and Karna later giving blessings after Yudi turns around...It was marveluos. U just nailed it! Kuddos!! 👏