PV Os ' Surprise Surprise

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I was never really happy about the last episode. I wanted to see a more romantic Aarya scene to close the series but instead the concentration was more on PV2. So this is my version.

PV Os - Surprise Surprise

Yash and Aarti were sitting in their bedroom chatting and drinking coffee after the family came back from the Bhopal wedding.

Yash was telling Aarti about the girl that he met, careful not the mention the kidnapping incident. He was telling Aarti how the girl lost her love, because she wanted to follow her career.

Aarti in turn was telling Yash that she was concerned about the bride as the groom did not arrive yet by the time that they had to leave Bhopal.

When Yash showed Aarti a picture of the girl, Aarti recognised that the lost love of the girl is the same as the groom that never pitched up in Bhopal.

Now she was even more concerned. Yash told her not to worry. Everything will work out as it was meant to be.

He knew that Aarti had a tendency to worry and then think she had to sort out everyone's problems so he tried to lighten the mood. "So Mrs. Scindiya, since when do you go clubbing. Don't I keep you busy enough at night?"

She laughed and smacked him on his arm and said, "That is exactly the problem. That's all you ever want to do. When last have we gone out somewhere? Just the two of us. Please Yash, it doesn't have to be a night club. Please take me on a date. Otherwise I will stop paying tax immediately", she threatened.

"Oh no, no tax. Well then Aarti, I have no choice. I will take you on a date tomorrow night. So can I have my tax now?"

"No! First tell me what you are going to plan for out date. Then I will decide if you are worthy of your tax and I might have a little surprise for you as well."

"Surprise, what surprise?"

"Well, if I tell you, it will not be a surprise will it. So tell me about our date."

"Ok, tomorrow afternoon I will send you a saree of my choice to wear, you know, one of those sexy ones with the open back. With it will be a single rose and a note with the address of the place that you will have to meet me. And you said you wanted it to be just the two of us right. So I will arrange for a hotel room with a balcony that has a lovely view and we will have dinner there, on the balcony. And we will be close enough to the bed for some desert too", he winked.

"You and your one track mind. "She laughed.

"So how is my plan for our romantic evening, Aarti? Do I get my tax and my surprise?"

"I love it. Now for your surprise first." She walked to the desk and took out an envelope and handed to him.

"What is this Aarti?"

"Open it."

He took out the contents of the envelope. He was ecstatic when he saw what it was. They were going to be parents again. He jumped up and hugged and kissed her. Now that Aayu was formally adopted by Prateek and Paridhi, he always wanted another child with her, but he did not ever broach the subject because...

"Aarti, are you ok. The complications?"

She smiled and said, "Dr. Kurian said that this time there are no complications. Just like with Ansh, it will all be normal."

He hugged her even tighter. "Thank you Thank you. I am so happy Aarti. I love you so much."

"You see what happens when you keep me so busy at night." she said.

"Mm, I like what happens when I keep you busy at night, so I think I will continue doing so he said, with passion in his voice. He picked her up and carried her to bed to collect a world of tax that she would so willingly give.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww this was sooo beautiful! another baby? wow! amazing OS! keep writing dear, I just love your writing style!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice os.. wow another baby
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love your ending another baby
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Beautiful OS dear, loved it 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I like your version better. Great OS! Keep writing love your stories. Thank you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I also love your happy ending with Aarya expecting another baby.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This would have been a better ending to our show if only PH have tried this ...
i m loving ur stories 😃
u r doing an awesome job 👏

ahahaha... another child ...this Yash is too much 😆
so dreamy and lovely version 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful Os dear. Wow yashu can shoot and score wow. Beautiful ending.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful OS
awe yash date plan was quite sizzling 😳
OMG aarya going to have another baby 🤗

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