D3 Hamesha (a dil dostii dance fanfic)- ON HIATUS - Page 20

nice updateEdited by princess_tara - 8 years ago

WOW! 👏 👏 Absolutely LOVED the update and yes, a very Special Thank you for [/B [B]]SwaRon scene! ❤️

I remember, when in the show Sharon had an asthma attack and Swayam gave her the inhaler n told her that he keeps it with her since the day he came to know about her, Sharon was overwhelmed with his love for her. It's still one of my favourite SwaRon scene and thank you, for maintaining the continuity! 😊 😊 Looking forward to more n more of SwaRon! ❤️

Thank you So much, Dii 😊 😊

nice chapter di..
luved swaron scene...
boys perfomance desi hopers...awww i luv dat wat a perfomace *seeing again lovely*
di as always my request taarey scene plzz*puppy face with pleasing*
updte soon...

Hello Ppl!! okay..the last chapter has received overwhelming response. The view count has gone up higher faster than any of my updates have ever managed. Thank u all for liking the  SwaRon scene. I really had to rack my brain to come up with something original.

Wow nice teaser 😳 waiting fr update di plzz plzz update soon 😳 niyathi and Rey conformation taani way to entry 👏 update soon di...missing taarey badly 😭

Read all parts in a one go..
Interesting concept..nicely written 👍🏼
Waiting for next part..pls pm me 😊

hey
read all d parts in one go
no one can say this is ur first story
u writes so beautifully
I really loved ur writing skills
but one thing I didn't get is that "who is this niyati ?"
I know swayam's sis and ur new character
and she was suppose to helping character nd short one
but what I felt is becoming lead character
if not taarey now then there should be swaron or more couple of d3
but niyati's importance doesn't make sense
Sry
I said what I felt
there is not any intention to hurt u
but don't forget I loves ur writing
waiting for ur wonderful update

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Sabse phle bada wala sorry fr not commenting last time :(

I loaded d page BT didn't gt tym to read it...

n jab read kiya tha tab mumma ne hotspot band kardiya :'(
(Meri phooti kismat aur 12th ke side effects)

but loved both parts <3

u r reminding me Charity event :')

those days <3

Niyati...Plzzz show her past or just a glimpse...her character is Mysterious *_*

n sabse ZAROORI baat

taani kab aayegi? :/

plz jaldi update karo aur taani ko laao

lobe yaa