D3 Hamesha (a dil dostii dance fanfic)- ON HIATUS - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago
I have a very bad feeling that ya'all are not going to like the 21st chapter. got the rough edit done. m scared to post.
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Posted: 8 years ago
20th or 21 next chapter was 20th right do update dear good aur bad acha hoga tho praise milege nahi tho comments kya acha nahi improve your self dono achai hain all the best
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Posted: 8 years ago
ur writings is good di dnt wry
jzt update soon.. we all luv u.. and ur writing...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Seems like taani ne niyati ko apna jasoos banakar bheja h 😆

Ashi bursting on Sharon...a thing I always wanted in the show... :D

plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kuch aur bhi hone waala hai jo show mein mere khayal se nahin hua.have written a RiMar scene as well. Mujhe hamesha lagta tha they both were always neglected and Amar ki yaad tabhi aati thi jab tutting ki zaroorat hoti thi. So apni ek khwahish aur poora kar rahi hoon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thats good waiting for shock aur suprise
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Posted: 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update...
i am not a swaron lover still love there dance chemistry...
nice sharon and ashi conv...
di wen will be taani entry plzz atlest tell me once...
plzzz do as fast as possible...
update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
i loved the updateEdited by princess_tara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello hello!! how was the update? I don't know if any confrontation like this ever happened on the show. But I always wanted Aashi to give Sharon a taste of her own medicine.
I also don't know how much true to the character I have been. The dialogues may not have been used by both the characters in the show, but I felt they made sense. Dunno.. I guess this update is 'as u want to take it' types. I just hope I could put the point across that Aashi was done with Sharon's rudeness.
So what was your favourite moment of the confrontation? personally I like the part where she acknowledges that her 'types' bolna made her a butt of jokes. And the part where she says she can never replace Sharon. They somehow suit Aashi.
whatcha all think?

lemme know!
lotsa luv!
Aashi