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Laksh gets shocked reading the letter. He falls on ground, he cries. He keeps the letter near his heart and cries hard.
Annapurna-- Laksh kya baat hai, kya likha hai issme.
He gives the letter to Annapurna.
The Letter--
Laksh, jab tak aapko yeh khat milenga, hum aapse bahut dur jaa chuke honge. Hum aapko iss unchahe rishte se azaad karte hai. Laksh, humne aapse bahut pyaar kiya thha, apni jaan se bhi jaada. Aur uss raat hamare beech jo kucch bhi hua woh mere liye aapka pyaar thha. Lekin shayad aap ke liye apni property aur humse divorce lenne ke liye ek natak. Humme aapki property aur paise mein kabhi koi interest nahi thha. Hum ne jo bhi kiya thha sirf apna pyaar paane ke liye kiya thha. Humse bahut galtiyaan hui hai Laksh. Hum umeed karte hai ki aap sab humme maaf kar denge. Hamme bahut taklif hui jab humme pata chala ki aapne sirf humshe pyaar ka natak kiya thha. Lekin shayad yehi hamaari sazza thhi. Aap ko aapki azaadi mubarak ho Laksh, apna khayal rakhyenga. Aapki Ragini.
Tears flow from every one's eyes. Even sujata could not control her tears.
Swara goes to Laksh and gives a tight slap on his face.
Swara- How can you Laksh, she loved you & you used her?
Laksh- Swara listen...
DP- Enough, bahut hua Laksh, humme lagga thha ki tum samjhdar ho, lekin tum toh itne girre hue nikle. Sharm aati hai humme tumhe apna beta kahte hue.
Laksh- Papa, meri baat toh suniye...
Annapurna- Ab kucch aur baccha hai Laksh, samjhne aur samjhane ke liye.
They all go to there rooms. Laksh was alone. He cries.
Laksh- Ek baar Ragini, kam se kam ek baar toh mujhse baat ki hoti, kaash main tumhe bata pata ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon. Laut aao Ragini, plz laut aao. He goes to his room heart-broken.
In SwaSan room--
Swara was crying, Sanskaar was consoling her.
Swara- Kuy Sanskaar, kuy chali gayi Ragini, bina kucch bole, bina kucch kahe. Uss ne ek baar nahi socha ki jis tarah Raag ke bina shur nahi lagta ussi tarah Ragini ke bina Swara kucch bhi nahi. She cries.
Sanskaar- Tumhe pata hai Swara, Ragini ko log kamjor samjhte thhe, lekin aggar koi sabse majboot thha toh woh Ragini hi thhi. Bahut hi acchi dost thhi woh meri "Dupatte wali Dost". Kaash maine usse iss kichar mein na dhakela hota toh woh aaj hamare saath hoti. Kaash... Tears flow from his eyes.
Swara- Sanskaar, mujhe Maa se baat karni hai plz unhe phone laggao.
In Baadi--
All were crying. Just then Shumi's phone rings.
Shumi- Haa shona, bolo...
Swara (crying)- Maa, Ragini chali gayi, hum sabko chhod kar, hamesha ke liye humse dur. Woh phir Swara ko akela kar gayi Maa. She cries.
Shumi too cries. She keeps the phone.
Dadi was motionless. Her Laddo has gone, for ever, she will not return. Dadi- Yeh sab mahri wajah se hua hai, maine hi usse Laksh se shaadi ka sapna dhikhaya thha. Woh chali gayi. She cries.
It was a black, dark night for Maheshwaris & Gadodia's.
Next day--
Gadodia's were at MM. Tears were flowing from there eyes. Just than a police man comes and says- DP ji hum ne Ragini ji ko khojne ki bahut koshish ki lekin...
DP- Koi baat nahi officer...
He goes.
DP- Hum Sharminda hai Shekhar ji, humme nahi pata thha ki Laksh itna nicche gir jayenga.
Just then Laksh comes out of his room. His eyes were red.
They all look towards him, but does not say anything.
Just then a car comes in MM. A lady comes out. She is Doctor whom Ragini visited. She enters.
Lady- Kya Ragini Maheshwari yahan rahti hai.
All get shocked.
Swara- Haa, lekin aap kaun.
Lady- Main Dr.Desouza hu, Kal Ragini ji subah mere clinic aayi thhi, toh unka purse waha rah gaya thha. Main kal yahan lautane aayi thhi lekin watchman ne bataya ki aapke yahan shaadi hai, toh main chali gayi.
Swara- Haa, lekin doctor Ragini kuy aayi thhi.
Dr- Unhone aap loggo ko bataya nahi, woh pregnent hai.
This was the biggest bomb which fell on them. Laksh was shocked. Tears started rolling down his eyes. He walks inside his bedroom & cries.
Laksh picks up Ragini's pic and says- Kuy Ragini, kuy kiya tum ne aisa, kuy chali gayi mujhse dur aur mere bache ko bhi dur le gayi. Kaash ek baar mujhse baat ki hoti. Kaash.. He shouts Raginiii...
7 yrs leap---
(Guys i have already mentioned abt RagLak kids in Intro. there are some more new entries.)
In MM--
All were having breakfast.
DP- Annapurna, Laksh kahan hai.
Annapurna- Ji aata hi honga. Waise bhi kal raat tak kaphi kaam kar raha thha woh. Mujhe toh uski fikar hoti hai.
Sujata- Haa jiji, pichele 7 saal, jab se Ragini gayi hai tabse ussne khud ko sirf kaam mein dubo diya hai. Na khaane ka shudh hai aur na peene ka. Others agree.
DP- haa lekin hum kar bhi kya sakte hai, apni iss haalat ka jimedaar woh khud hai.
Just then they see Laksh coming from his room. He was dressed formally. In business suit. All goes silent.
A 7 yrs kid runs to him & says good morning Laksh chachu.
Laksh wish him back & takes him to table.
The kid is Parsh- Adarsh & Parineeta's son. He is 7 yrs old & a naughty kid.
Laksh smiles only when Parsh is around other time he is just like a lifeless body & a rude, arrogant man.
Parsh- Laksh chachu aaj aap shaam mein mere liye chocolates le aana. Okay. He says making a cute face.
Laksh smiles a little & nods okay.
Parsh- Sanskaar Chachu aap video game, okay.
Sanskaar nods yes.
And dad aap mere liye... he thinks
Adarsh- Comic books...
Parsh- Yes dad, you are best. I love u.
Adarsh- Love you too beta...
Sujata- Parsh, tere dadu aur chotte dadu se kucch nahi lenga.
Parsh- Loon ga choti dadi, Dadu & chotte dadu mujhe cycle la kar denge. Denge na dadu. He asks looking at DP.
DP nods and Parsh gets happy. All of them finish breakfast and leaves for office.
Parsh goes to play.
Parineeta- Dekha Maa, sabse apni baatein manwa leta hai, yeh badmaash.
Annapurna- Accha hai parineeta, baccho se ghar chahekane lagta hai.
Sujata- Haa jiji, lekin yeh khushi mahre ko kahan. She says looking towards Swara who gets teary eyed & leaves.
Parineeta goes behind her.
Annapurna- Sujata, kabhi toh seedha bola karo.
Sujata- Maine kya galat bola jiji, sach toh kaha, Swara kabhi Maa nahi ban sakti.
In SwaSan room--
Swara was crying. Parineeta comes to her.
Pari- Swara tum toh chachi ji ko jaanti ho na.
Swara- Jaanti hu bhabhi. Lekin sach hi toh kahan, main kabhi Maa, nahi bann sakti.
Pari- Aisa mat socho Swara, Parsh tumhara bhi toh beta hai.
Swara hugs her & cries.
Somewhere in a Mansion--
A Lady was getting ready. She was wearing jeans and kurti. She was Ragini. Just then someone closes her eyes from back.
Ragini touches his hands and smiles.
Ragini- Areey yeh soft hands kisske hai, yeh toh mere doo soft toys ke hai. Yeh hai Manas aur Kaya.
Manas & Kaya- Mamma & hugs her.
Precap-- Some new entries...
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