Ishra FF:Nazdeekiyan Pt 2 updtd on Pg 27 on 30/5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Helllooo...I am back with another story of mine.
This time a FF.

I know I have many stories going on but this one is dedicated to my Jaanu (janani_divan) who wanted me to write a FF.

So jaanu,here you go...
Hope you and all others like it.

                               Nazdeekiyan 

Prologue 

I-No Raman,please believe me...there is nothing like that.You are mistaken.
Please listen to me.

R-What is left to listen Ishita? 
I saw and heard everything.
Tell me,weren't you happy with me?

I-I have always and will always been happy with you.

R-Then?

I-Please atleast hear to what I have to say...

R-What...you will say only that sorry I loved you but now I love someone else so...
You know I loved you with all my heart but you...

As his voice cracked.
I-I only love you,believe me please.
How can you even think that I love someone else.

R-Whatever was there between us is no more Ishita
I loved you but you broke my heart.
I will never talk to you and will go forever from your life.You can stay happy forever.
All the best for whatever you do.
Goodbye

And he turned and left.
I-Raman...Raman...no please...
Come back. 
I only love you..

As she sat down with tears flowing...

Will they ever meet again? 
If they do,will the sparks reignite?

How was it?

Do write in your views...good or bad
Will be waiting for them...
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                                              Index

Prologue         -Pg 1
Part 1               -Pg 14
Part 2             - Pg 27
Edited by traveller_girl - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Loved it.. You started with separation? Kyon?but interesting
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Congratulations hetvi one more story
But it's interesting
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#5
nice
judaai n milan
I alwayzz find it interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6
Lovely prologue hetvi
Its interesting
Clear the misunderstanding soon
Continue soon
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#7
Congrats for ur new story
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Interesting start...
Continue soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intriguing teaser😃
Starting main hi bomb phod diya😆
Nazdeekiyan bolke dooriyan paida kar rahi boo yaar😛
J🤗
Edited by -Nii- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg omg some one pinch me..
hetvi darling you dedicated this ff to me .
Oh such a lovely gesture yaara.

You come up with new plot..im very happy ,cause you accepted my request.


You come up with ishra seperation..
Im eager to know,what you planned for this story.

Raman not trusting her..oh there is mu b/w ishra.
btw hatka start.

its my humble request dnt give short update darling...
Title is awesome..

take your time and continue it...